I'd be interested to see how good your grammar is, when writing in a foreign language.
Also, you should probably get your own punctuation
& spelling correct, before advertising such hypocrisy in criticising someone else's.
An ellipsis is 3 dots, not 4. Certainly not 5.
"Palette was
off", not "of".
A colon should never be preceded by a space (except in French).
"an OMG", not "a".
Those are apostrophes (used for contractions & possession), not quotation marks.
This is not even a word. "Dead end" is two words.
People in glass houses really shouldn't throw stones.