ILCjr

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"We all" what. I didn't make it passed the LOL I'm so edgey and crazy I mighta killed your brother, on introduction. If this is what passes for good writing, I'll pass. Hard. And I did. Since it went straight into the recycle bin.
I have to say, that I thought much like you about this story at first, and even put it in the recycle bin at one time (I think version 0.03). During a recent time where there was nothing in the Latest Updates page that I wanted to play, I decided to give it another chance (out of boredom), and it gets pretty good for this kind of game.
 

Jonboy80

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No spoilers but...

Amazing writing, Hope. I was worried you may have made Luna's backstory a bit ham-fisted and cliche. Giving it a couple of minutes of flashbacks at most. But, I was impressed. You clearly put thought into it and I can't say enough about hos well it was done.

Thank you for giving the option of a shorter version for those who may not be able to handle it. I watched the whole thing, and the warning helped steel me for it but it still hurts to read it. Even brought tears to my eyes, which isn't saying much as I cry at anything remotely sad but, still...
 
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SpikeZg

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also, the action scenes were awesome, fighting, shooting, sound effects, music, nice job (y)
and the renders looked better in 0.5, i don't know if you are using some new software or something, but they look great :cool: :)
 
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Is there something wrong OR this is Natural sequence of events ?
When I started, it asked for a last name which I entered. I was in freeroam mode (Outside Cordia's office) where I clicked to continue story and Chapter nine began.
 

TheBlueKnight

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Don't see a recording past 4 and I cant see to talk to her about anything new either... Any help much appreciated
You email her the movie after watching recording four, then you wait three or four days for a new recording. You can track your progress in game using the journal (the J icon).
 

Fall55

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When I started, it asked for a last name which I entered. I was in freeroam mode (Outside Cordia's office) where I clicked to continue story and Chapter nine began.
So, the encounter with eize when shall it happen? Just a confusing thing
 
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