PedroDeLara

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This story is going well for me. The problem here, and in most stories that developers create, is the reader's ENORMOUS anxiety. In this one, I followed the launch and stayed away for several cycles, and I do this with stories that I see potential in. This one has potential, and in this last one, the developer has at least three possible paths. As much as they deny it and want the girl to develop resistance and charm, in the end we want her to be, THE SLUT, the WHORE, and thirsty to CHEAT and SLEEP a lot!
To the developer, stick to your writing and script, if you have one, of course. It won't please everyone, as always happens in all stories, but so what!
So far it's good. I'm waiting for a few more cycles to read and see where things go.
 

xert13

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What a letdown! Has Bobby started an internship with Ocean? Pretty pictures, utter bollocks story decisions, overlong update intervalls and nothing else? The updates storyline is drama for drama´s sake with unavoidable NTR. WTF? We saw Luke for 7 chapters coming to grips with his sharing/swinging fetish, now he wants nothing to do with it any longer so the NTR fanbois can wank. Hardcoded even.
"Perfect", another example how the poison touch of NTR taints character development and story, wherever it pops up. And it took over half a year to produce this stuff farmers bring out onto the fields. Unwatched!
No, perfect example of how the NTR touch will enliven the story.
 

Dessolos

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so I got bored and played part of the gloryhole scene and the flasher scene and man it feels night and day how different how both Luke and Kathryn seem to look and act compared to this update. Especially if you compare how they look without the AI usage even tho I don't hate the AI I tolerate / like some of it and dislike other parts of the AI usage.
 

BL45T

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so I got bored and played part of the gloryhole scene and the flasher scene and man it feels night and day how different how both Luke and Kathryn seem to look and act compared to this update. Especially if you compare how they look without the AI usage even tho I don't hate the AI I tolerate / like some of it and dislike other parts of the AI usage.
Actually the funny part was the weird AI dance. Its so so hilarious and embarrassing at the same time. I juat wanted to skip through it fast
 

Dessolos

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Actually the funny part was the weird AI dance. Its so so hilarious and embarrassing at the same time. I juat wanted to skip through it fast
haha id have to replay that one while remembering it wasn't good I recall i didn't hate it for the simple fact that it was a dance animations which i appreciated for the scene
 

megadrive2000

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Another poll result from February:

How you would like to see the game end?
Happy endings? Sad endings? Open for a sequel?

611 votes total

1. Open ended (possible sequel) 225

2. Disturbing (total corruption and past point of no return) 221

3. Happy (Luke&Kathryn stay together) 127

4. Sad (Luke&Kathryn break up) 22

5. No sequel 16
 

Justaphase

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Another poll result from February:

How you would like to see the game end?
Happy endings? Sad endings? Open for a sequel?

611 votes total

1. Open ended (possible sequel) 225

2. Disturbing (total corruption and past point of no return) 221

3. Happy (Luke&Kathryn stay together) 127

4. Sad (Luke&Kathryn break up) 22

5. No sequel 16
Personally I would like to see a possible ending in the next chapter. Kat confesses to Luke which should be obvious, I mean it's written all over her face if she cheated. Then he leaves or kicks her ass out. The end.
Other than her lying I can't see it going any other way. Especially if Luke himself hasn't cheated and didn't fuck Courtney at the beach.
 
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Listander

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Another poll result from February:

How you would like to see the game end?
Happy endings? Sad endings? Open for a sequel?

611 votes total

1. Open ended (possible sequel) 225

2. Disturbing (total corruption and past point of no return) 221

3. Happy (Luke&Kathryn stay together) 127

4. Sad (Luke&Kathryn break up) 22

5. No sequel 16

Well,

In another Poll NTR did win
In this poll Open End and Disturbing will be completed in one package, it will be devastating
So its clear, the voters for 3 or NTS have no reason to follow the game anymore
Its sad, but Chapter 8 jumped the shark and congratulations for the NTR Fans

Arrividerci!
 

Listander

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Personally I would like to see a possible ending in the next chapter. Kat confesses to Luke which should be obvious, I mean it's written all over her face if she cheated. Then he leaves or kicks her ass out. The end.
Other than her lying I can't see it going any other way. Especially if Luke himself hasn't cheated and didn't fuck Courtney at the beach.
Luke should ask her if she will do everything for him, that he can forgive her. If she want to be a whore, then she should do it right. Then we see Franklin with Kathryn and the GangBang with Kathryn ...
 

GingerSweetGirl

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The dev of this game has honestly turned into a trash human.
This is unnecessarily harsh. I haven't played the latest update, and I believe people that aren't happy with it, but this is really unnecessary. Games can go in a direction that you don't like without the dev being a "trash human". We need as many devs as possible, we probably can save statements like this for the real fringe cases.
 

Marc9

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Developers can do whatever they want in their games. I don't understand the reason for so much complaining. It's just a game.

It's better for the action to happen sooner rather than dragging it out for years, like in many famous games where nothing happens in years.
 

Justaphase

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Luke should ask her if she will do everything for him, that he can forgive her. If she want to be a whore, then she should do it right. Then we see Franklin with Kathryn and the GangBang with Kathryn ...
What I think will happen is that he will obviously be upset, then the blood test results will come through and show how they are under the influence of some drug which lowers inhibitions and enhances arousal. So he will forgive her. Just my theory anyway.
 

Listander

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What I think will happen is that he will obviously be upset, then the blood test results will come through and show how they are under the influence of some drug which lowers inhibitions and enhances arousal. So he will forgive her. Just my theory anyway.
Yeah, I think you are right. The hints are everywhere. They talk about it all the time. Crazy Stuff is happening. Moments of Clarity when Luke is aroused. The Flasher has every time a boner. The stuff is already spreader in the water. Maybe Luke and Kathryn will take more of this stuff ;). They have already tasted the Apple.
 

megadrive2000

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Personally I would like to see a possible ending in the next chapter. Kat confesses to Luke which should be obvious, I mean it's written all over her face if she cheated. Then he leaves or kicks her ass out. The end.
Other than her lying I can't see it going any other way. Especially if Luke himself hasn't cheated and didn't fuck Courtney at the beach.
Once he said the game will have approx. 12 Chapters total till end 2026
 

Listander

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Developers can do whatever they want in their games. I don't understand the reason for so much complaining. It's just a game.

It's better for the action to happen sooner rather than dragging it out for years, like in many famous games where nothing happens in years.
Yes they can do what they want. I am always happy when a Dev listens to his fans, when the fans can logically explain the story has flaws or character breaks. Like the dev from the other game, I won't name it now. It's cool to have 3 Paths. Pure, NTS and NTR. 3 Times more fun! The NTS Path and Pure Path is now sadly broken.
 

only MILF

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When GTA was being created, no one asked anyone anything. Play it as it was created.:) What is all the controversy about?:rolleyes:
 
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Justaphase

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Once he said the game will have approx. 12 Chapters total till end 2026
Other VN's have done early endings to certain paths or choices. If Luke hasn't cheated but Kath has and then you choose to not forgive her. That could lead to a possible early ending. We see a broken Kath crying and pleading while Luke is packing his suitcase and leaving.
 

GingerSweetGirl

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Yes they can do what they want. I am always happy when a Dev listens to his fans, when the fans can logically explain the story has flaws or character breaks. Like the dev from the other game, I won't name it now. It's cool to have 3 Paths. Pure, NTS and NTR. 3 Times more fun! The NTS Path and Pure Path is now sadly broken.
It's great to have lots of paths that branch out in totally different directions...but you can't expect development to be fast for those types of games. That's a really important tradeoff.
 
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