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The characters are written well, but their behavior logic is causing me immense pain in the ass. MC saw the USB drive trick with video that does not open, then he saw the browser link that did not open up from the same person and videos gone down for some reason - one does not have to be a tech genius to become sus. Then again, MC saw the texts - why would he not come back to the wife at once? If she is forced to (like he believes) it would be a quickest way to end her blackmail for good. Finally, someone who have MULTIPLE TIMES mentioned that MC has bullied him in the past and who acts like a douchebag now is saying something and MC blindly believes.
Unless author gives MC some wits about it, the story would lose much - could not be sympathetic towards someone who is not only a jealous cunt - we are all human - but also considerably dumb as he must become paranoid about Drew at this point too. If HangoverCat can pull this off right, the story will be great - the buildup to this point is one of the best stories in this genre I have ever saw, but making MC blind towards obvious events is a sure way to ruin it. Really hoping for the best, though.
Unless author gives MC some wits about it, the story would lose much - could not be sympathetic towards someone who is not only a jealous cunt - we are all human - but also considerably dumb as he must become paranoid about Drew at this point too. If HangoverCat can pull this off right, the story will be great - the buildup to this point is one of the best stories in this genre I have ever saw, but making MC blind towards obvious events is a sure way to ruin it. Really hoping for the best, though.
Considering that post made it all the way from thought to fingertips you can't be overly concerned about data waste.
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- Apr 5, 2020
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I already play and skip some talking.
Here my conclusion :
1. Surely in ending of MC perspective/protag must added Heroin/wife perspective to
2. This thread if the wife surely get blackmail, so must added tags in here....
3. MORE SCENEEEEEEE MORE INTERESTINGGGGG
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4. Get GB in future is also ok I think
Here my conclusion :
1. Surely in ending of MC perspective/protag must added Heroin/wife perspective to
2. This thread if the wife surely get blackmail, so must added tags in here....
3. MORE SCENEEEEEEE MORE INTERESTINGGGGG
+optional
4. Get GB in future is also ok I think
- Apr 15, 2019
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Alright, theres alot to unpack here.
To start off I don't want to bash on the fact this game is NTR, while im personally more of a Netori kind of guy theres lots of Netorare games out there that I have enjoyed. This isn't one of them
I don't feel comfortable bashing on the hard work and sweat of a artist and writer, as im sure this game took alot of effort to make and the very gorgeous character art and backgrounds are evidence of that. If you want to spend your talent making a netorare game thats perfectly understandable and I implore you to ignore the anti ntr comments under this game thread, but at the same time I feel this game was better off just not existing in the pornographic medium. Most netorare games that put you in the prespective of the person getting cucked have some wild fantasy type of writing where the heroine is always very close to slipping and being found out or theres some erotism to her cheating like showing up disheveled after a night of sex and shes cheating because shes 'so addicted to cock' yknow the like, in this game the netorare is more of a "I'm breaking my marriage from fear of getting cheated on due to how handicapped I now am" which, is not very erotic no. Its more of a depressing experience each sex scene I watch them engage in and each time they argue without any capability of input from the player aside from just pressing CTRL and skipping through the discomfort. I can't really just go "Yeah the wife is a skank I'll enjoy how erotic her cheating gets" because shes entirely in the right to cheat on him for how distant he is at her and how he violates her privacy throughout the course of the game, and while he does have justification after finding a hand on her selfie in a healthier relationship he'd just engage to her about his fear and suspicions so that if he DOES have to bite a bullet he bites it before it gets any worse.
This game so far is going down the trajectory of Dark Hero Party, except worse by alot since atleast that game had erotic sex scenes while the ones in this game just make me feel miserable for this couple. The happiest ending I can see them go through is a divorce.
To start off I don't want to bash on the fact this game is NTR, while im personally more of a Netori kind of guy theres lots of Netorare games out there that I have enjoyed. This isn't one of them
I don't feel comfortable bashing on the hard work and sweat of a artist and writer, as im sure this game took alot of effort to make and the very gorgeous character art and backgrounds are evidence of that. If you want to spend your talent making a netorare game thats perfectly understandable and I implore you to ignore the anti ntr comments under this game thread, but at the same time I feel this game was better off just not existing in the pornographic medium. Most netorare games that put you in the prespective of the person getting cucked have some wild fantasy type of writing where the heroine is always very close to slipping and being found out or theres some erotism to her cheating like showing up disheveled after a night of sex and shes cheating because shes 'so addicted to cock' yknow the like, in this game the netorare is more of a "I'm breaking my marriage from fear of getting cheated on due to how handicapped I now am" which, is not very erotic no. Its more of a depressing experience each sex scene I watch them engage in and each time they argue without any capability of input from the player aside from just pressing CTRL and skipping through the discomfort. I can't really just go "Yeah the wife is a skank I'll enjoy how erotic her cheating gets" because shes entirely in the right to cheat on him for how distant he is at her and how he violates her privacy throughout the course of the game, and while he does have justification after finding a hand on her selfie in a healthier relationship he'd just engage to her about his fear and suspicions so that if he DOES have to bite a bullet he bites it before it gets any worse.
This game so far is going down the trajectory of Dark Hero Party, except worse by alot since atleast that game had erotic sex scenes while the ones in this game just make me feel miserable for this couple. The happiest ending I can see them go through is a divorce.
It's all good and all, but The Edge Of "fill in the blank" what? I need to know, what is the edge of. I'm literally at the Edge. Whenever I see the title I ask myself the Edge of What. I need answers, thank you.
- Oct 5, 2017
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Lol bitch cheats yet it's his fault sure cuckold....... LMAO
- Jun 15, 2017
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- Apr 1, 2019
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Yes the MC runs around like a total idiot, he's clueless and does stupid shit through out the entire game so far.
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I'm wondering about something. So far the story is presented as though it's clear your wife is cheating on you. All clues point to it and every situation has the most likely explanation that she's cheating. But it's also possible somebody hacked the MC's phone and has manipulated the selfie she sent, and there's an alternative (however unlikely) explanation for every event so far.
So maybe the planned choice will be about whether or not she is actually cheating?
There are four possibilities:
So maybe the planned choice will be about whether or not she is actually cheating?
There are four possibilities:
- she's cheating, you believe her lies or choose to forgive her
- she's cheating, you leave her
- she's faithful, you believe her telling the truth
- she's faithful, you leave her
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Happy reading everyone and good luck with the project, Hangover Cat!
Or the choice is if the MC's response to the perceived cheating should be suicide or murder-suicide, followed by a reveal that she was faithful all along.
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I can hardly wait. I hope she's having a good time. If Beth is happy I'm happy.
Is it unavoidable because the MC drives her to cheating on him or was she cheating from the start?
PS: I didn't get to the point to know who's fucking Beth (apart from MC) but I suspect is the "cheat detective" who suggested to MC those 4 cameras.
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