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I'm sorry for over-reacting also.It wasn't my intention to offend and I'm sorry if it feels like I'm over-reacting. I don't expect you to change everything to my tastes. In fact, I don't necessarily expect you to change anything. As I said, Bully is not my cup of tea for NTR content but I totally understand people that do enjoy it.
I mentioned the "out of town part" because it's honestly easier to create romantic jealousy when one of the protagonists is deliberately [leaving out/ignoring] his/her partner when he goes out for dinners, drinks, etc. with a colleague. An out of town trip paid by your employer de facto leaves the partner out. So, most jealous feelings invoked are of the "feeling left out" kind, not the "he doesn't care about me" kind. In fact, the "feeling left out" kind of jealousy can be evoked even if he's going out for a drink with his male colleagues.
For instance, In the game "Where it all began" the MC went out for drinks and his girlfriend Miru was rightly jealous of him not inviting her.
So, if you change it to "it's not fair that he gets to go out while I'm stuck at home" it will sound more reasonable. You're more accurately identifying the feeling of jealousy.
I'll not add any more, because It's not my intention to simply bash you. I think the story has merit and potential.
There are more than just 1 NTR route for each girl.
We only got the first route for Suzie.
Another route in which Suzie is slowly taken away.
I intended to let people discover the true self of each character so it might be unreal or hard to understand the reaction of some characters.
A quick information, 88% of our patrons want the story longer.
We are voting to know if our patrons will be satisfied when there is an update without an erotic scene (which cost much time for rendering the animation).