Sorry, NTR does not exclusively involve rape or non-consensual behavior. Much of NTR has a willing component. It's not restricted to men, and the person being fucked doesn't have to be coerced into doing it. The main component of NTR is jealousy, not consensual behavior.
Second, there are lots of corruption games, blackmail games, etc where they evoke an emotional response from the protagonist. So, don't snowflake yourself into excusing bad writing because NTR content providers deserve a special pass. There is plenty of well written NTR erotic literature, visual novels, and porn. A shit ton of it posted on other forums. Poor writing is poor writing, regardless of the emotion, it is trying to evoke.
When the MC's girlfriend gets off the phone and says "maybe he doesn't care about me" my reaction wasn't being jealous of the male protagonist, it was incredulity. How shallow and insecure is the protagonist that she is jealous of her boyfriend because he is going to a bar to have drinks with a work colleague when they're out of town? If anything, I would think gosh, I wish I were there so I could go with him.
Now, if he was in town and insisted I not go with him to have drinks and dinner with his business colleague, that would prompt jealousy. If he tried to convince me that I shouldn't join him b/c it was just going to be a boring work meeting over dinner and drinks, I would be jealous AND suspicious. But, right now I think the female protagonist is a crazy person.
So, tell me, why does the business meeting have to be out of town? Most people get jealous of their spouses and boyfriends when they feel like they're spending a lot of time at work and not spending time with them. So, why does it have to be out of town, when you can create a shit ton of jealous circumstances with the boyfriend in town. The out of town business trip is an unnecessary contrivance.
I actually know the answer to that. You can't create stupid situations where a woman shows up in his hotel room and the girlfriend hears her in the background. <facepalm>. It's lazy storytelling. A good writer could create that situation in town too.
For short: You want a jealous feeling.
I'm not sure you're a man or a girl.
As a guy, I don't have a jealous feeling when someone I know is being fucked.
That is just horny and sometimes is sad if I love the girl.
I didn't feel jealous when seeing the girlfriend in MGA was being fucked.
I felt horny and the last scene at the dental clinic, I felt sad.
I'm sorry that The Engagement can't satisfy your jealousy fetish.
About the very first scene in this game: It was actually shallow. I don't deny that. That was the first scene I've ever written. I can only improve day by day.
There are 2 ways in writings: All the details appear as a sequence or they will be disclosed slowly.
I have reasons for why the meeting was outside of their town and for some sentence like 'Don't you remember the time at school', etc...
I'm sorry that I'm just a lazy storyteller and sorry for making you play this bad game. Please move on with your life. Don't waste your time on rubbish games like The Engagement.
Again, I wonder why I must hear people speak like I must satisfy their needs?
If I rewrite the story again, I will never add the reason why the meeting must be out of town. Because it is in the future update.
As for people think Winton is in cahoots with the boss, that's what they think. That's not true in the next update.
Even my patrons asked me about the Winton scene, I didn't answer. Why must I answer you the reason about the business trip when the game is not finished yet?
If you don't like the story appears slowly but must appear as a sequence like you want, move on with your life. Don't look at rubbish games like this.
I was very polite at the beginning of this thread.
But I've felt more and more irritated when people thought they had the right to speak like my boss. Or if I don't write the story as they want, I'm wrong and they're always right.
I think this is enough.
