RoadWulf

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I was going to download it because the dev had said to me in replies after a few plays in Chapter 1 that his scenes and dialogue would improve in Chapter 2 and that he was just trying to get through the intro stuff. Then I read every post since the update today and from I gather, that's not the case. So I'm just going to stop wasting my time here.

For NTR to mean anything, you actually have to have some kind of emotional involvement in characters so that you actually care about seeing them with some other character beside your own, otherwise this is like watching a porn on mute because the girl's hot and you don't give a shit what they're saying or doing.
 

Dependable_223

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A comment about Chapter 2:
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Developer, if you want to make a romance route, you must create a lovely moment with lovely dialogues at the sex scenes and not ending with a bored girlfriend that made sex more for obligation than love. So, you need serious improvement in your writing. About the poll, use this for tips and extras scenes to please your patrons and not to influence the story that you planned before and changing the original plan, because this will just create holes in your script, messing the story and making it confusing.
That was actually what it felt like for me too.
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Is there walktrue for this game ?
 
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Jeepster

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A comment about Chapter 2:
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Developer, if you want to make a romance route, you must create a lovely moment with lovely dialogues at the sex scenes and not ending with a bored girlfriend that made sex more for obligation than love. So, you need serious improvement in your writing. About the poll, use this for tips and extras scenes to please your patrons and not to influence the story that you planned before and changing the original plan, because this will just create holes in your script, messing the story and making it confusing.
I'm with ya totally on this, Emily i thought was a bit out there in a major way. Sorta like she was in a dream world/medicated or something. Like she was raped or something really bad happened besides DAD (damaged goods) i guess would be the term. Her glances, the way she talked about things (when she spoke) etc... i mean it sorta made me wonder why even mess with it out of the gate. While Suzie seemed somewhat to be standing on at least one foot.
I didn't feel the connection to the characters is what i'm trying to say. Sorta like Anna, Eleanor & Elena's Life after awhile there just whores lol Cause who they gonna bang next...
It just seemed rushed, and yes me saying that... Blah me. I'm like others ready for chapter 3 yesterday, but not like this.
I love NTR and not here to discourage this, just sharing my views.
Kyori made it sound better tho (y)
 

Ursus4321

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A wife and a mother. Perfect example of how the corruption can be increased in a logical way. You can create something faster but it would have some kind of logical increasing in the situations.
At the end, it creates more satisfaction than simply immediate sex. The atmoshere created is important too. That is my little opinion
 

RoadWulf

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I CAN'T BELIEVE WHAT IM READING NTR LOVERS COMPLAINING ABOUT NTR IN THIS GAME SUCKS THANK YOU GUYS FOR YOUR HONEST OPINIONS MYSELF I HATE NTR BUT I PLAY THIS BECAUSE ITS AVOIDABLE BY YOUR ACTIONS AND I HAVE SAME ISSUE INSTEAD OF GOING ON DATE WITH GIRLFRIEND I DECIDE TO GO WITH SUZIE BUT SIT WITH GIRLFRIEND TO AVOID HER GETTING MAD BECAUSE YOU TALK CRAP ABOUT ALEX (WHILE MAKING LOVE ITS LIKE THIS GIRL DOES NOT CARE ABOUT YOU WHAT SO EVER HAS SHE NOT INVESTED IN HER MAN DOES SHE NOT LOVE HIM IF SO THEN THEN WHY I CAN GET BAD ENDING IF I DONT WIN BOTH GIRLS WRITING IS TERRIBLE HOW CAN MY GIRL JUST CHEAT ON ME KICK ME OUT AND CALL COPS AFTER I CAUGHT HER CHEATING) UN BE KNOWNS TO YOU THATS WHO BEEN FEEDING HER THAT GARBAGE AND SHE DOES NOT FOLLOW YOU IT FELT THAT WAS THE BEST PATH TO TAKE TO AVOID ARGUMENT AND ITS CRAZY HOW SIMPLE MINDED BOTH GIRLS ARE YOU HIT IT ON THE SPOT WITH ANNE AND OTHER GIRLS LIKE THAT IT MAKES ZERO SENSE
I think you caps lock is stuck.
 

Alleykatt

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This is a muddled mess. The decisions do not have clear narative links to the content, so it is just a crap shoot what content you get. It needs to be clearly indicated what the consequences of actions are (preferably narratively).

For example, it took me ages in chapter 1 to find the right combination to get Suzie fucked by the client. It actually requires you to sometimes intervene and sometimes not intervene (how dumb is that?). Then in Chapter 2, I can't get the Emily NTR at all, even following the suggestions in this thread.
 

Himerios

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This is a muddled mess. The decisions do not have clear nattative links to the content, so it is just a crap shoot what content you get. It needs to be clearly indicated what the consequences of actions are (preferably narratively).

For example, it took me ages in chapter 1 to find the right combination to get Suzie fucked by the client. It actually requires you to sometimes intervene and sometimes not intervene (how dumb is that?). Then in Chapter 2, I can't get the Emily NTR at all, even following the suggestions in this thread.
In Chapter 2: Short: completly ignore Emily and try to romance Suzie.
More detailed, choose the following choices: [Edit: forgot that when asked, you need to choose that Suzie asked you for your opinion and that you decided to go home, in order to ask Suzie out] Ask Suzie to go out with you, kiss or dont kiss, sit next to Suzie, have a look, follow them, sneak in, not yet, let that happen.

And I agree with you some of the decisions are not logical at all, but I think it is the way the characters are meant to be and that is going to be explained in the next few versions.
 

Genji

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One word:the batman just suck to make a game..and it worse when he is a ntr lover..ntr lover=cuck..sorry im not interested to fund a game thats as trash as that games(hold on a second,thats not one word)P.S:not complaining about this game though
 

Alleykatt

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In Chapter 2: Short: completly ignore Emily and try to romance Suzie.
More detailed, choose the following choices: [Edit: forgot that when asked, you need to choose that Suzie asked you for your opinion and that you decided to go home, in order to ask Suzie out] Ask Suzie to go out with you, kiss or dont kiss, sit next to Suzie, have a look, follow them, sneak in, not yet, let that happen.
That simply doesn't work. I am fairly sure you need to have done something particular in Cahpter 1. Suzie doesn't answer the phone right at the start of this release.

Edit: Yep. I just tested it. If you "save" Suzie in chapter 1 she answers the phone to you, then you can go out and Emily follows you when you follow Suzie. That really doesn't make any sense since Emily doesn't know what happened with Suzie so she should follow you anyway. As it is, the NTR in chapter 1 blocks the NTR in Chapter 2.
 

Nope

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This game doesn't make a ton of sense. Suzie ending up in your hotel room as you are talking to your GF is random as hell. Seems like there should be some story between the scene before that and it happening with perhaps choices that lead to not being caught with her in your room. Black guy gets your job even if you make the sale. Sex scene with your GF is terrible. She obviously likes the dildo better.

Games where the focus is NTR and the PC is whimp don't really bother me. That said, the dev is apparently supposed to be making a game where you can play as a whimp or not. The fact that you don't seem to get choices or outcomes that fit with that is annoying.
 

emek

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Ok so here s your walkthorugh
Max>to meet brie and fucked her>emily>that s not good > follow >do it>shower later> have sex with emily (that s it )
Second route Max> to come home>suzie>yes>next to suzie>Have a look> follow them>sneak in> not yet > your choice
Maybe its possible to do it other way but i doesn t matter cause every other route doesn t have content instead of talk.

Anyway I agree with you guys that game is wasted potential. At the moment its trash mainly because the choices don t make sense at all and the dialogues are horrible. Its like every path you take its going in some weird pathethic way even if you re fucking youre girlfriend ...that s just sad
 

Mortarion

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how can i play Chapter 2?!

the game tells me if i have missed one or another scene, and then ends after buisnesstrip.

was the game i have startet.
 
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