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That was actually what it felt like for me too.A comment about Chapter 2:
Developer, if you want to make a romance route, you must create a lovely moment with lovely dialogues at the sex scenes and not ending with a bored girlfriend that made sex more for obligation than love. So, you need serious improvement in your writing. About the poll, use this for tips and extras scenes to please your patrons and not to influence the story that you planned before and changing the original plan, because this will just create holes in your script, messing the story and making it confusing.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
I'm with ya totally on this, Emily i thought was a bit out there in a major way. Sorta like she was in a dream world/medicated or something. Like she was raped or something really bad happened besides DAD (damaged goods) i guess would be the term. Her glances, the way she talked about things (when she spoke) etc... i mean it sorta made me wonder why even mess with it out of the gate. While Suzie seemed somewhat to be standing on at least one foot.A comment about Chapter 2:
Developer, if you want to make a romance route, you must create a lovely moment with lovely dialogues at the sex scenes and not ending with a bored girlfriend that made sex more for obligation than love. So, you need serious improvement in your writing. About the poll, use this for tips and extras scenes to please your patrons and not to influence the story that you planned before and changing the original plan, because this will just create holes in your script, messing the story and making it confusing.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
I think you caps lock is stuck.I CAN'T BELIEVE WHAT IM READING NTR LOVERS COMPLAINING ABOUT NTR IN THIS GAME SUCKS THANK YOU GUYS FOR YOUR HONEST OPINIONS MYSELF I HATE NTR BUT I PLAY THIS BECAUSE ITS AVOIDABLE BY YOUR ACTIONS AND I HAVE SAME ISSUE INSTEAD OF GOING ON DATE WITH GIRLFRIEND I DECIDE TO GO WITH SUZIE BUT SIT WITH GIRLFRIEND TO AVOID HER GETTING MAD BECAUSE YOU TALK CRAP ABOUT ALEX (WHILE MAKING LOVE ITS LIKE THIS GIRL DOES NOT CARE ABOUT YOU WHAT SO EVER HAS SHE NOT INVESTED IN HER MAN DOES SHE NOT LOVE HIM IF SO THEN THEN WHY I CAN GET BAD ENDING IF I DONT WIN BOTH GIRLS WRITING IS TERRIBLE HOW CAN MY GIRL JUST CHEAT ON ME KICK ME OUT AND CALL COPS AFTER I CAUGHT HER CHEATING) UN BE KNOWNS TO YOU THATS WHO BEEN FEEDING HER THAT GARBAGE AND SHE DOES NOT FOLLOW YOU IT FELT THAT WAS THE BEST PATH TO TAKE TO AVOID ARGUMENT AND ITS CRAZY HOW SIMPLE MINDED BOTH GIRLS ARE YOU HIT IT ON THE SPOT WITH ANNE AND OTHER GIRLS LIKE THAT IT MAKES ZERO SENSE
In Chapter 2: Short: completly ignore Emily and try to romance Suzie.This is a muddled mess. The decisions do not have clear nattative links to the content, so it is just a crap shoot what content you get. It needs to be clearly indicated what the consequences of actions are (preferably narratively).
For example, it took me ages in chapter 1 to find the right combination to get Suzie fucked by the client. It actually requires you to sometimes intervene and sometimes not intervene (how dumb is that?). Then in Chapter 2, I can't get the Emily NTR at all, even following the suggestions in this thread.
That simply doesn't work. I am fairly sure you need to have done something particular in Cahpter 1. Suzie doesn't answer the phone right at the start of this release.In Chapter 2: Short: completly ignore Emily and try to romance Suzie.
More detailed, choose the following choices: [Edit: forgot that when asked, you need to choose that Suzie asked you for your opinion and that you decided to go home, in order to ask Suzie out] Ask Suzie to go out with you, kiss or dont kiss, sit next to Suzie, have a look, follow them, sneak in, not yet, let that happen.
No. As I explained before, this will not work unless you have romanced Suzie already. It is dependent on your Chaoter 1 choices.Second route Max> to come home>suzie>yes>next to suzie>Have a look> follow them>sneak in> not yet > your choice