This update was okay.
It tried to do some damage control in the first half by having Raphael explain how they tried to reach him and why they couldn't. Which is better than them not trying at all, but a lot of the big problems still remain. Emma is still a creepy weirdo. Going to school makes no sense. It still feels like we are being railroaded into forgiving everyone. The second half of the update was the interesting part. It was about the alter egos in the main characters mind, which is one of the things that sets this game apart from others.
Neither of my favourite women were in the update. But one was mentioned, and the other still looks to be set up for a recurring role in the future. So hopefully they will get some screentime soon.
There's an error in the dialogue when we meet Ellena and her sister. She invites us to visit her and her mother Julia, but uses the wrong name. She says that Emma would like to meet us, when it should be Julia instead. There's also an odd bit of dialogue where the main character tells Emma and Azel about the one girl at school who thinks that everyone is a vampire. They laugh at him and he says "Should I pay attention to the pronunciation of something that does not exist?" Which is strange because he didn't try to pronounce the word vampire, and also because he was already introduced to one the other day. Sofia is the woman that works at the clothing store and Emma explains that she is a vampire.
After the scene where Raphael prevents the fight with Bethor, Emma says "Elders are definitely your father's business. I don't understand how he let this happen. He couldn't have stoop so low." It should read stooped instead of stoop, but that's a minor issue compared to how ridiculous the whole thing is considering that we now know
Emma was there when he permanently trapped us in Hell by closing all the gateways. Him using the Elders doesn't seem anywhere near as surprising as him condemning his son to an eternity of torture for no apparent reason at all.
The game still has a lot of promise, despite the various inconsistencies with the story and minor grammar mistakes. It just needs to minimize the worn out college stuff and incest garbage that are in damn near every game here. We've got a main character with some sort of split personality and an imminent war between heaven and hell, so don't waste time with stupid shower peeping scenes.