Alright, now that I've played it, quick feedback for
Nemesia:
I'm not gonna write a review, but if I did, it would come to 3.5/5 stars for a game. But it isn't a game, it's a demo, so no review.
- First of all: very good demo.
- If it wasn't a demo I'd say the story is too disconnected with the "weeks later", "months later". That would seem really implausible with the kind of personal stuff happening.
- Since we're on the topic of "weeks later", the
"a few minutes later" during the sex scene with Raven made me laugh when it shouldn't have. I was thinking "a few minutes later? During sex? What are they doing? Checking the weather forecast real quick? What's going on?". I would replace that with "moments later" or something.
- As I wrote earlier, personal preference of mine: Actual songs with singing get muted. I know the song was part of the story here, so I unmuted again when I thought it may be over.
Apart from that the music was good. That guitar riff reminded me of "Becker" all the time.
- The MCs cock is 50% too large. Minimum. Even if you don't want him to have a realistic dick, 50% off would still be a porn-sizeed megadick.
- When the sex scene started I was thinking "alright, going to have a good wank now", but I didn't. The whole "I put viagra in your drink and would rape you even if you'd reject me" put me off quickly, the whole "I'm your fucktoy, I'm your cum bucket" ended the mood entirely. I basically clicked forward from then to the end (including checking the diferent angles for a complete experience), but had no more real fun.
- I like the graphics, I see the animations as a tech demo to be improved, but have a good feeling about that.
- Because it came up in the thread (pinging
wep for this just fyi), I think that imagination scene of mom + stranger (who could lose 50% dick size as well, seriously, have you ever seen a penis up close?
) may be technically NTR, but it didn't really feel like it to me. I'd rate it 0.1 Erics, with 1.0 Erics being fullblown jealousy inducing NTR.
- Summary: I'll look forward being proven wrong that the megaphallus + cum bucket attitude is a bad sign and I won't like the actual game.
Oh, and make the data collection optional. Let it start disabled. I am one of those that would opt-in, because I know how valuable it can be for developers, but I don't like being forced to do it.
Good luck! See you in a few months! If I like what I see then, I might visit your Patreon page and spend a few dollars.