So I played around with it a bit. The visuals are stunning. I like the fact that there are multiple paths.
There's none to little build-up. I'd prefer a bit more, but I don't mind if it's left out as long as everything else is entertaining at least. This is just my personal options tho.
And while I don't mind having as much renders as possible, you could achieve the same result with half the amount of renders and a bit more added text.
The downfall of this having so much renders is that despite the massive amount of renders it only account for maybe 5/10 minutes of game-play. Sometimes there seems to be even 1 render for 1 line of text.
Getting this finished will take a massive amount of renders, assuming you keep the same pace.
Don't get me wrong I love the renders and if you can pull it off that be awesome, but I'm just afraid the work load will bite you in the ass sooner or later.