I really dug act 1. I mean, there are games with better art, and a lot of games with more sex, but this game really tries to have a fun storyline. Even if it's not in danger of winning a Pulitzer, it's still entertaining and at least he's trying. It's something different from the usual dude-fucks-the-family-and-they-all-like-it games that Patreon is covered with.
The MC isn't very likable at first. I actually kinda dig the horrifying scene where he goes straight up rapist and hunts down Clara; it wasn't sexy and it kind of made me hate the MC, but I respect that the author was willing to actually take the reality of what the MC was doing head on. Mind control = rape. Maybe a gentle form, but you are taking someone's will away from them, and he didn't shy away from that. I also like that the MC mellows a bit once he gets things stable and becomes less of an asshole.
The hottest thing in the original game was the f/f incest. There was only a little bit, and you never got a real money shot (like a closeup of Fiona going down on Ashley or whatever), but it was fun. That's been chopped out of the game now, but I'm hoping for a comeback. Patreon seems to be tolerating that stuff again nowadays so long as you don't talk about it on the wall.
There's a lot of potential in Samantha's impending punishment, and how it should fit in with the fact that the other slaves are all girls that she has abused. My hope is that she is made into the harem's service girl. MC does not fuck his slaves often enough and they bitch about it; having Samantha around to submissively get them off when they need it would be perfect in so many ways.... especially if Victoria eventually "uses" her.