Ironically I read this story a while ago and it took me a second to realize "Why do I know this story?"
Very well done, I even liked the art, both the 3D and the 2d, good use of AI art as well, not somethign you see a lot. I like the tone of the game and I really like the events you've added, the choices are nice too! I wish.
I wish the game had a bit more of you and Snip before going back to your wife and the city. Snip mentions how we had taken care of his needs many days in a row, but as far as I can remember, there was only 1 real event in the hut, the one with the mug option. I also think it would've been really nice to have a bit more of Snip and you doing stuff in secret, like the inn event, but your wife not finding out so fast / sleeping with him so fast. Other than that, I think it's a great game and I really enjoyed the brothel route