Solid game so far.
My main complain is the pacing and that the story is quite confusing - both is connected I think.
We dont get any information about the MC - or his job. He gets A job, but we dont know what his job is. His first day is ... strange...
And then there are all the (sexy) women, but imho - way to many in a short time frame - and with not enough character building or context to be meaningful.
Then there are the transitions - they are quite abrupt.
There should be fewer woman and scenes with more time and story in them. I think we met 8? .. or even more? women already? ... Just after I played the game I forgot most of then and all their names. There is the first one - the MCs best friend .. but that is only told - they might be even a couple or siblings how they interact (the short part we see). Then there is the camera girl and the barista and the hot blonde ex? ... or yeah and her sister and the "target" ...
These would be more than enough. But the main issue is that the game doesnt tell us anything important.
We get "the jobs" (without an interview - for some mysterious reason), we dont know what that job is. We meet a lot of women for just to meet introduce them. We spend most of the time with Ethan - some dude that just adopts us and we are fine with it.
Then we get out first task in our job - to get some shares from a hot woman. Why we? What is our job in the first place?
Na thats it. The story so far is:
MC gets a job, visits a coffe shop and a skate park, meets his first client.
That all there is - it is blow up with stuff, but in the end it boils down to this.
There is a lot of potential in this game, but the pacing needs work and how characters get introduced, used and put into context for the story.
