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motseer

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I understand that, however I'm telling a story. And people have lives and relationships too, not just the MC. and everyone is doing their own thing
I read your story. I like it so far. I'm happy to see you stick to your guns! Half the people complaining about or recommending how you should write your story haven't even read it! I've seen them make the same tired-ass rants in dozens of other VN's. They're genre trolls and should not be fed. Again, I think you are off to a good start and I'll be along for the ride!
 

Harem4life

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I understand that, however I'm telling a story. And people have lives and relationships too, not just the MC. and everyone is doing their own thing
Do we need to see and know about it though? You made a lot of us hate MC's best friend.

We Harem fans have no interest in seeing other guys having sex. The sex scenes should always be about MC. I also don't want to know how many bitches he fucked. Also, I hope you won't make that slut MC's LI who fucked that fatfuck.

We also don't want to know who is fucking whom. Girls shouldn't talk about who they fucked or how many they fucked in the past. Even if girls are in a relationship they should be in a sexless relationship after starting of the game.

MC's childhood friend is dating some other guy. You should know that most of us romance fans love the trope of childhood friends ending up together.

Are there sluts in your game? Well, I hope none of the sluts are LIs of MC. We Harem fans don't like sluts as romantic interests. They can come from time to time to fuck MC and then be on their own way.

Let's now talk about technical things. Please shift the gallery to the main menu or make them unlock through persistent instead of variables. Since we can't unlock all the scenes in the same save It will be helpful if you unlock them through persistent to know if we have seen all the scenes. Please add a scene gallery if possible.

Also, none of us will miss MC's best friend if you got rid of him. On the contrary we will be grateful. He is annoying.
 

Leon979

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Well I will try to answer this without spoiling anything lol but the Mc and Victoria were never into each other, they were just experimenting together. Mc only saw Ji-yeon and he was heartbroken and remember they didn't know how long the quarantine will last. So he was looking forward to see Ji-yeon again and that's what's basically happened. As for the Li stuff, nothing is set in stone you will come across these charachters you see now and new ones as you play and depending on your choices it will shape their relationship with the mc. Just because someone is in a relationship that doesn't mean they will stay like that or that the mc can't manipulate and sabotage shit.
Thank you for your enthusiastic reply and explanation, I'll look forward to the rest of the story and making Victoria fall in love with MC so she doesn't get addicted to BBC in the future :ROFLMAO: Incidentally, Rosaline's pubic hair is very sexy and I look forward to seeing more girls with pubic hair in the future :LOL:
 
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LustyDonkey

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I read your story. I like it so far. I'm happy to see you stick to your guns! Half the people complaining about or recommending how you should write your story haven't even read it! I've seen them make the same tired-ass rants in dozens of other VN's. They're genre trolls and should not be fed. Again, I think you are off to a good start and I'll be along for the ride!
Thank you I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed it! Well, their suggestions are welcome but I already have my way of telling the story and I chose to tell it in a way that well... It's a bit far fetched to say realistic but I put in a realistic approach telling it and not sticking to any genre specifically so I know it won't make everyone happy. Nor I will try to do so, no hard feelings if they don't like my game. :)
 

Exarioch

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Damn I can't stop playing this game because 2 things :

- The text's colors like **whispering** etc, for a deaf person like this is a must...
- Brendan's expression when she sits on all fours after slapping his butt... (I don't know if she was trying to light up or invite....)


But I don't like Annette because she is the much hypocrite (Best friend of Lexa who hurt the MC but she doesn't like if the MC choke the Murphy...WTF....)
 

LustyDonkey

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Do we need to see and know about it though? You made a lot of us hate MC's best friend.

We Harem fans have no interest in seeing other guys having sex. The sex scenes should always be about MC. I also don't want to know how many bitches he fucked. Also, I hope you won't make that slut MC's LI who fucked that fatfuck.

We also don't want to know who is fucking whom. Girls shouldn't talk about who they fucked or how many they fucked in the past. Even if girls are in a relationship they should be in a sexless relationship after starting of the game.

MC's childhood friend is dating some other guy. You should know that most of us romance fans love the trope of childhood friends ending up together.

Are there sluts in your game? Well, I hope none of the sluts are LIs of MC. We Harem fans don't like sluts as romantic interests. They can come from time to time to fuck MC and then be on their own way.

Let's now talk about technical things. Please shift the gallery to the main menu or make them unlock through persistent instead of variables. Since we can't unlock all the scenes in the same save It will be helpful if you unlock them through persistent to know if we have seen all the scenes. Please add a scene gallery if possible.

Also, none of us will miss MC's best friend if you got rid of him. On the contrary we will be grateful. He is annoying.


Well the whole point of this game is some sort of a freedom of choice, not only for the MC but for all the other characters as well. When I started working on the game I decided to give everyone their own personalities likes, dislikes, characteristics and overall life to make them interesting and not just boring mindless bimbos except for Kelly lol ... everyone of us is different and every one of us are attracted to different kinds of women. That's why I have loads of characters. Donnie is a sex crazed fat little devil, who happens to be your best friend, of course he will tell you that he fucked Murphys girlfiend. There will be a sort of Harem in my game but not like you are used to. I'm trying something new and I'm telling the story in a way that I enjoy doing it and the best way for me is not tying it to any genre specifically. I understand that's not for everyone and I respect that, I'm glad you tried my game and if you don't like it. No hard feelings, I understand, it's not everyone's cup of tea. Regardless thank you for trying my game :)
 

LustyDonkey

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Damn I can't stop playing this game because 2 things :

- The text's colors like **whispering** etc, for a deaf person like this is a must...
- Brendan's expression when she sits on all fours after slapping his butt... (I don't know if she was trying to light up or invite....)


But I don't like Annette because she is the much hypocrite (Best friend of Lexa who hurt the MC but she doesn't like if the MC choke the Murphy...WTF....)


Well if you slapped her ass, you're in for a treat next update ;)

as of the text, yeah I have a friend she's hard hearing we watch a lot of Tv shows and movies together and we always use hearing impaired subtitles so I thought It might be a good idea to implement something like that.

Thanks for playing my game :)
 
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goulet1995

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I understand that, however I'm telling a story. And people have lives and relationships too, not just the MC. and everyone is doing their own thing
thats fair and by all means make the story you want as long as you know you are opening the game up to become a warzone. You already have the harem fans i here who hate when a LI/future LI is with anther person then you will likely bring in the ntr crowd in here and both sides will likely end up disapointed the content doesnt fit what they are looking for most who follow those genres arent ok with a mix of the two. most other games that tried this style have struggled togain any traction as far as supporters
 

Hese_1

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4. Harem - Burh it's the demo how you expect a harem already when the game barely even started started lmfao
This is due to fact that people are thirsty from the get go :LUL:
Some people are bitching about the fact that someone else is fucking than the MC :LUL: My advice is to ignore those commenters.
I really liked the game so far and im looking forward for the next update
 

Leon979

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Well if you slapped her ass, you're in for a treat next update ;)

as of the text, yeah I have a friend she's hard hearing we watch a lot of Tv shows and movies together and we always use hearing impaired subtitles so I thought It might be a good idea to implement something like that.

Thanks for playing my game :)
I spanked her ass too, looking forward to what's going to happen in the next update :ROFLMAO:

Also I want to ask LustyDonkey, have you considered adding some dirty talk to the sex scenes? I think a sex scene with text would be more interesting and erotic than a scene with animation but no text ;)
 

LustyDonkey

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I spanked her ass too, looking forward to what's going to happen in the next update :ROFLMAO:

Also I want to ask LustyDonkey, have you considered adding some dirty talk to the sex scenes? I think a sex scene with text would be more interesting and erotic than a scene with animation but no text ;)
Yeah, I did. I'm still figuring shit out and now I'm working on implementing that and animations too,like first just images with dialog and then animations as you already seen with different poses cameras etc...

Thank you for playing! :)
 
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Leon979

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Yeah, I did. I'm still figuring shit out and now I'm working on implementing that and animations too,like first just images with dialog and then animations as you already seen with different poses cameras etc...

Thank you for playing! :)
Since I've never developed a game, I'm not sure if adding dialog to the animation is also hard for you developers? Because some developers add text in the animation, but others don't add any text at all. There are different supporters for both, but of course I'm on the side of having text in the animation :ROFLMAO:

By the way, the music is great, it matches the scenes very well, and the music for the main menu is very nice(y)
 

LustyDonkey

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Since I've never developed a game, I'm not sure if adding dialog to the animation is also hard for you developers? Because some developers add text in the animation, but others don't add any text at all. There are different supporters for both, but of course I'm on the side of having text in the animation :ROFLMAO:

By the way, the music is great, it matches the scenes very well, and the music for the main menu is very nice(y)
Well, i'm not so much planning to add text to animations and this point I don't think it will look good, since i use pre rendered videos so the moans are more accurate that way. What I was planning was more like 10-15 static images of them foreplaying talking dirty doing whatever they do and then after those the animations start where you can chose to cum or do something else etc, it's hard for me to explain it right now I'm dead tired was working on the game all night then I went to work and now I'm long overdue for some sleep lol
 
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Leon979

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Well, i'm not so much planning to add text to animations and this point I don't think it will look good, since i use pre rendered videos so the moans are more accurate that way. What I was planning was more like 10-15 static images of them foreplaying talking dirty doing whatever they do and then after those the animations start where you can chose to cum or do something else etc, it's hard for me to explain it right now I'm dead tired was working on the game all night then I went on work and now I'm long overdue for some sleep lol
It's okay, just do what you want to do ;) Thank you for your reply and hard work :D
 
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The ArcKnight

Nylon enthusiast, Harem enjoyer.
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LD, I get wanting to not be pigeon holed to a particular trope, but trying to mix harem and a sexfest (everyone bangs everyone) kind of game will be a nightmare as it appeals to very different audiences. Heck, this forum is filled with abandoned games that tried to do exactly that.

For me personally, I don't care about a girls past. I just do not want to know about it/see it. So if I have to see it, like Donnie x Kelly, that immediately kills any interest i have in that character. It's one thing knowing a girl has a past, but it's another to know the details. See Clerks: 37 scene.

Otherwise I think your game is interesting and I look forward to an update so long as I never have to see Donnie's dick again.
 
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The Last Challenge [v0.1.3 Demo] Unofficial Android Port

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My Android Ports have a 2nd Persistent save location. So, even if you uninstall the game, the saves will remain Intact.

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wyldmage

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Jul 4, 2018
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Yup. I was going to try it for the incest tag but after reading that, fuck it, not even going to dl it. This an example of why I've went back to doing things the old way: I'll pay $10-50 when it's finished (depending on quality and length), not before with half-baked crap that may or may not ever get debugged and completed. I don't even give money to early access games on Steam anymore either, and most of those devs (emphasis on most) have their shit together with a real game studio and a dozen or so employees rather than a 1-man-show with a day job and 6-12 month updates (ie go all in and get a business loan and start a studio and make that your day job or don't bother = no risk, no reward, and it's stupid to expect subs/customers to assume the risk). Paying money for that is just retarded, like paying $1000 for a new phone when last year's model still works perfectly fine just because Apple or Samsung made it and slapped a bigger number on the name, since even when it is finished it roughly takes 3-5 years and by then you've paid $200 (or more) for it.
That dev-mentality is driving me away from legit games as well (ie paying on Patreon/Itch/etc).

Hell, just look through this site. .1, 0.1, .1, .001, .0.1, 0.1, <complete> (Japanese with MTL), .1, 1.0 (not really), 0.1, etc

For every hundred devs that make a first version, only 1-3 actually get their game to a point where it is "over half done", and fewer ever polish to a level that would constitute a finished game (even among porn games).

And Patreon/similar are the absolute worst. You have 1-person "teams" that have this dream of making a game, but they don't want to collaborate about it at all, and it's going to take them 6 years to make a game. But they "need to put food on the table", so they ask for $10/month to see the latest version. And each month they release 3.8 minutes of new content, because they have to wait for their potato to finish rendering the 350 MB of images that the update includes. They get a couple hundred people to buy into their dream, and spend 5-10 hours/week doing actual work on the game, and the other 30-35 hours/week their spare computer is rendering while they go off to their real job. But 200 people is enough to be earning them $2000/month, which *should* be enough to let them work on it at least part-time. Or buy extra computers/etc to render more/faster. Or pay someone else to help out! But they trudge along, alone in the development. Each month, losing their own interest as the process of making the game is absolutely boring when you spend most of it waiting on renders. And then a year later, when the game is finally up to having a couple hours of playable content (if you read slow), they just kinda vanish. And Patreon keeps charging their supporters for another 4 months. And their steadfast supporters, who have been with them the entire time, have now spent $160 on a game that'll never be completed.

It's an absolutely terrible business model.

And what I just described looks like a SAINT compared to what this dev is asking for. $35/month for instant access to updates? He wants you to buy his game again every month. And it's just using generic 3DCG models. If he was hand-drawing it (plug for Oni who writes Rogue-Like for that), he'd at least have SOME justification for charging so much. But no, this is just paying $35/month to let him render images on his PC and write a bit of story.

I really wish the devs here separated out all the "I just started a new game, come support me" posts. We really do need a separate forum for games that are version 0.1 to 0.3 (no matter what version the dev SAYS they are). Come back and join the main games subforum once you've been putting out monthly game updates for 6 months.

Patreon has killed my desire to pay for games 95%. Which is the main reason I actually spend time on this site now. Everyone seems to think that THEIR generic 3DCG game somehow is worth paying for, even though it's not even halfway completed.

Back when I was young (before 2000), adult games online were text only, and they had WAY more work put into them than just firing up Renpy and writing a visual novel with computer rendered graphics. And "get paid for this" was something only the absolute cream of the crop considered. Shoutout #2 for BBBen who is still plugging away at game design, now with graphics (Pervert Action: Timelapse) - one of the few old guard from the era of AIF.

/rant.
UGH
 

Before I Forget

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Overall this really isn't bad, could be fun to venture in. The characters actually act like... people.

Donnie could be toned down a bit though, like I get it, he's the brass character the game but please take the foot off the gas there a bit.
 
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