LustyDonkey I've played your demo, and it looks really good. But I'm sad to say, that I won't be supporting you and won't be playing your game. The reason is that the last challenge is an incest challenge as far as I understand, and incest where MC is involved is a BIG NO NO for me. I really don't understand why you want to ruin a petty good plot with letting the last challenge be an incest challenge. It would be equally good if it was fuck the neighbor wife and daughter, or maybe Murphy taking revenge on Donnie, so it were to fuck Donnie's mother and sister. This is still possible if MC twist the challenge, claiming the challenge was for Donnie to fuck his mother and sister, and since MC took over the challenge he is now to fuck Donnie's mother and sister rather than his own mother and sister. And when Murphy has to repeat the challenge, they could overpower him and buttfuck him with a strapon or similar.
That said. I really like what you have done so far. Specially the blackmail scene with the maid. Only annoying thing with that scene is all the possible combinations. I want to try them all and I got lost more than once. I think it took me 20 attempts to get the scene where the maid is riding MC. But I like that she is clearly being forced and blackmailed, and that she stays that way even after MC had his shower. A love and a blackmail/rape path is always good, but more than that is just plain confusing.
Also I hope there will be more sex in the future. The background story in the bus was too long. It could easily have been spiced up with some sex scene memories.
By the way. I like the side steps in the dialog. Like when Donnie plays solitare during his search for the bus, fucks the bus drivers wife or that poor kid that was locked in the bus.
In other words. Good start, but please. Drop the incest thing. It adds no value to the story.