VN Others Completed The Little Black Bestiary: A Dragon's Treasure [Ep1 v1.0] [CyberScherzo Studios]

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ajackson

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Oct 20, 2017
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Awesome game. Thanks for sharing. I like the art and character design, as well as the displayed personalities.
On the downsite,
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Also, some answers you give are in a ironic/not serious fashion, but you cant really know from the options you are displayed, how your character will intone them. Maybe rewrite the answer options, to make it more obvious.

Please dont think that I did not enjoy your game because of the above-mentioned. It was great and that is why I really want to give you feedback.
 

FrozenPizza

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Apr 12, 2018
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Damn, now I want to eat Sushi... and test that tongue of hers...

Pretty nice game! Smooth pace, nice writing, really cute girl.

I'm hoping for a save option in 1.0, to try and test every outcome without going to the chapter select menu.

Anyways, very well done! Cant wait to see who awaits us in future chapters (I'm already dreaming of an "hydra" girl! mmmhhh, two heads....).
 

V01

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Jul 19, 2017
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Short, but I REALLY like where this game is going. Probably one of the best first releases on this site.

Are there plans to expand on the dragon girl, or will the future releases be for new girls?
 

Daxter250

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Sep 17, 2017
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Well, there might be some toppings on that vanilla; especially since some of the future episodes we have planned will have some characters with more pronounced kinks, but it's a series about dating monsters rather than getting raped to death and then eaten by half of them like in Monster Girl Quest. (... Which is still an awesome game)

Even if/when we throw in some weirder stuff it'll likely keep a fun, positive tone.
ya know what? why not. i can't really remember games where you really "date" monster girls, yet i know a bunch of games where monster girls try to get into ya pants. and happy tones can be nice for a change too. guess,i will check that game out in the future.
 

CyberScherzo

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Feb 23, 2018
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Let me try to catch up on the questions/responses from while I was sleeping:

you really should give settings its own category on the title screen instead of just shoving it under chapter select.
I really should. Title screen is the same one back from the 0.10 version before I had settings implemented so I should update that.

However, c'mon! ... Yet another inhumanly long electrified tongue game???? Will this never end? :closedtongue:
I think the tongue ends after about 14 inches or so?

A UI orientation is desperately needed. Looking for a way to save, I hit F1 and the game just reset to the main menu without warning losing all of my progress. That F1 needs a warning and acknowledgement dialog.
Nobody ever checks the readmes anymore. :teary: Controls and hotkeys are listed in there but will add something in game for the 1.0 probably. Right now the only 'save' is the chapter select.

@CyberScherzo Any chance of you posting a screencap of the hardcore action?
Felt a bit like that was almost like giving away a spoiler for how honestly short the current release is, but sure, I'll put one of them in the samples.

(The spoilered stuff about the outcomes of choices)
I was actually going to have more possibilities for "game over" moments for being an asshole but my writer kinda pushed back on that a bit. There's even a 'health bar' system and UI for that which is pretty much scrapped though it may make a comeback some day.

One thing we absolutely DID NOT want to do was lock the sex behind powergaming the 'perfect' set of choices to talk your way into the girl's pants. So many 'dating sims' are more like... 'manipulation sims' where you're invested in trying to pick all the 'right' answers (ie: lies) you think she wants to hear, which is NOT how you're supposed to treat dating IRL. It's about getting to know each other, and I wanted the players to be more focused on learning about the characters. So I wanted to design the 'default' of the game such that Isabel herself has the end goal of getting laid so you'll get to the action unless you royally fuck up... and then said fuck-ups never actually made it into the final script.

All that in mind, I'd like to make some of the bigger future episodes have some more branching paths with more significant options. And keeping the same philosophy going forward, choices that lead to alternate sex scenes for more replay value, but not having an objective 'best' choice in most cases.

when is snek girl time?
I'm hoping for a save option in 1.0, to try and test every outcome without going to the chapter select menu.
...(I'm already dreaming of an "hydra" girl! mmmhhh, two heads....).
Are there plans to expand on the dragon girl, or will the future releases be for new girls?
Working on a proper 'save anywhere' system for the final release; it's the next thing to implement after ensuring cross platform compatibility which is what I'm currently updating the game for.

As for future girls, I'm going to trickle out some concept art and dating site profile pages for new dateable characters, and have patron votes for which ones get added in which order. Expansions/sequels/add-ons for existing characters will also be options, but my focus for the first few episodes will be adding new characters. After 3-5 episodes/characters I might have the first 'who do you want to see more of' poll so that probably won't be till 2019.

I'm also be taking suggestions for what types of monsters people want to see so hydra and snake have been noted. I do have some ideas planned I think will be interesting for future dates.
 

darlic

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Feb 27, 2017
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I haven't tried this game yet (will do asap), but just from reading the premises and your thoughts about how a game should be made I'm really tempted to pledge right away without even giving second thought. :eazyHype:
 

jackhammer123333

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Jun 11, 2017
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I got to say, I'm blown away.
Beat every expectation I had by miles.
It's refreshing to see something like this coming out when there are lots of games running on the same formula.
I'm sorry I can't pledge right now but if is there anyway other I can help and support you, please let me know.
 

Catoblepas

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Feb 9, 2017
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I love this. In terms of the vanilla monster premise and execution it's pretty close to Quest Failed (my favorite VN of all)-- enough suggestion of danger in the sex to make it interesting, but a sweetness there that the monster doesn't really want to hurt you, just extract every last bit of energy she can.

Fantastic work. Well done, I can't wait to see where it goes.
 

CyberScherzo

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Game Developer
Feb 23, 2018
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I haven't tried this game yet (will do asap), but just from reading the premises and your thoughts about how a game should be made I'm really tempted to pledge right away without even giving second thought. :eazyHype:
I'm sorry I can't pledge right now but if is there anyway other I can help and support you, please let me know.
Yeah, no pressure on the pledges, I've been there. I mean, I blew my own video game budget on commissioning dragon porn for this thing so I'm kinda there now myself. Not to retread the same old arguments too deeply but to state my thoughts: I mean, I know what forum I'm on right now; people who can't afford to, or don't want to pay aren't gonna do so regardless, so trying to enforce some kind of paywall is a waste of time and effort. I'm not going to get 'mad' at people for not throwing money at me, no need to apologize. Besides, I'm starting a new game/dev group and need to prove myself, so I'm not really expecting to get many pledges this early on regardless.

Pledges do help a lot since I don't want to be that asshole trying to pay artists with "exposure" but, if you want to help this project grow you can actually do a LOT to help without spending a penny.

Indie games, porn or otherwise, live or die by word of mouth. We don't exactly have AAA marketing budgets. And 18+ games have even more of an uphill battle there because of the 'porn' stigma. It helps us a lot if you simply tell people about the game. Like, comment, share, subscribe, etc. Don't be an obnoxious spammy troll of a shill, nobody likes that. But some ways to go about it:
  • Not everyone has the kind of IRL friends they'd talk about monster girl porn games with, but hey, if you do, tell them about this cool ! (Also, you have awesome friends. )
  • I've been trying to spread the game around some major online communities, but it's not like I have the time to join and regularly post on ALL of them. So if you're in any other forums, chats, discords, etc that would enjoy this series, feel free to post a link. Make sure you do so in recommendation or game sections where it's relevant and not annoying, of course. If anyone posts relevant feedback in such a place, feel free to forward it to me or direct them to a comment page I'm active on.
  • The 'social media' thing. Follow us on / . Like or reblog the posts that you want to. Aside from my own game updates I've been doing weekly recommendations for other games so you might find something else you like too. And/or post game links on the social media sites of your choice that we're not active on.
  • Reviews. This morning, my Itch.io page showed 500 downloads and three ratings. Most people just don't bother, but ratings, comments and reviews help with the magical SEO algorithms that make the game easier to find on platforms like itch.io, steam, etc. "Actual" long form reviews to blogs, gaming sites, youtube channels and the like can help a lot too if you're a producer of that kind of thing.
  • Fanart. I'm not trying to enforce a AAA company trademark on this thing. I love fanart. If you ever make, or bump into fanart or 3rd party commissions of the series' characters I'd love to see it. Getting fanart of the series characters would make my day. Someone somehow pulling off a cosplay of one of the characters would make my year. I'll feature/reblog pretty much any fanart I get unless it's really questionable (The usual "no" stuff. Guro, etc.)

    All right that was a text wall. But those are 5 free things that can help spread interest in the game and get the word out. Now, this isn't just me, I'm pretty sure most devs would appreciate that kind of signal boost, so by all means, please do the same for any other projects around here that you really like.
 

Daxter250

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Sep 17, 2017
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heh, nicely written ;). that's why i'm helping out at adam & gaia by finding out who the girls are beorn is using and then try to fix all the flaws beorn implemented xD.

that reminds me... tomorrow i should spend some time on that project.
 

ugashadow

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Jan 17, 2018
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So I really loved this.

I think though, and this is a criticism I have for a lot of games, that I would love to be able to pleasure the girls in future updates. Isabel gives me oral and I don't reciprocate? Seems unfair to me. This one kinda made sense in that she was slightly dominating you but even still I don't really like when its left out.
 

yoyomistro

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Jan 15, 2017
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Felt a bit like that was almost like giving away a spoiler for how honestly short the current release is, but sure, I'll put one of them in the samples.
Thanks for the screencap, looks great. Eye contact and emotion are there, boobs have a nice natural hang, good detail on the nipples, the perspective is well handled for the POV shot, the clitoris is well done. All little things that are really easy for an artist to fuck up and that can ruin immersion for something with a great premise like this. Whoever you're commissioning did a great job on that pic, try to hold onto them =P. I'll give this a shot when I have some time, thanks for accommodating my request. I know it can feel crappy to share stuff you want to be revealed in story elements but the hardcore is why people are here and not on an ecchi forum, so sharing a bit of it upfront is good for setting expectations.
 
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