VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Lust of Sissy Boy [v13.0 Public] [SycoXart]

2.30 star(s) 4 Votes

OrphanOrphan

Member
Jun 9, 2019
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It needs the "Kinetic novel" tag...

The few choices you can make don't influence the story at all, which is completely lineal...

As a visual novel is nice... good story so far (mostly realistic) and, in a genre which is populated mostly by HTML games with real porn, it's nice to see a 2D graphics game.

hos is this incest?
There isn't incest... I don't know if it's planned, but so far it isn't there...
 

demidemon

Member
Aug 31, 2016
379
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Wow. What a shit game
I disagree with ur attitude but it is true that the game didnt start well and is getting worse (imo)

the background arts looks good because they are grabbed from the internet. However the hand drawn pictures would always look terrible compared to the background. The dev did try hard to improve the pictures but it would always be awkward when dev's characters are placed on the backgrounds. I'd rather the dev make their own backgrounds but I understand it would be too time consuming. I just think differenecs in art style in a game is more annoying than poor graphics.

There are also problems how the backgrounds are used, say when MC went to college:
"i wear a bright smile on my face and went out" background of MC's house, ok;
"walk toward the subway, took the train" background of the platform,
"reached my college" background of the college, (could have skipped last scene and say sth like "I took the subway to my college")
then theres MC's thought, background remains the same
"May I come in teacher"
"Come in Ashton" why does the background still stays the same here? (college's entrance)
"I sat in my seat, I look around for Damien but he is nowhere to be see" why say sat in my seat? is the seat special? is it close to someone or is it close to the window? You won't normally mention the seat unless you want to elaborate on it right? nowhere to be "seen" but im not bothered by that.

The above took 7 clicks/scene and was not even eventful. Nothing special happened. Why do you need a background for the subway if nothing happens there? Why does the background remains the same when MC talks to the teacher?

There are also alot of description about unimportant stuff like "took my returning train and reached the nearest Station from my house" just who fucking write like that? Why is it important to mention it is the nearest station? It would be good to mention if you get off one stop early and walk home from there. You don't just describe something for nothing. There are also lots of opening doors, closing doors, just all these unimportant stuff taking up the word count for NOTHING.

why are games boring sometimes? this is one of the reason: the dev waste all their previous words describing things no one cares about.

The alley scene is removed from the game but the next scenes still refer to that scene. New players would be so confused. This is where I think the game is getting worse. Also without that scene, without the mental break down, I don't see why MC and blake can progress so quickly.

The writing and graphics weren't good to begin with, now even the story is getting inconsistent, I don't know if theres anything good left in the game.
 

LucioLupo

Member
Aug 14, 2021
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Despite the hate, I actually think this is a good game, because the characters are well developed and it's a novelty to see kinky romance that is not cringe in a game about a sissy. The scenes in the bath tub are actually very well designed.
 

phupdup

Well-Known Member
Oct 24, 2019
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Dev needs to work on their wardrobe, continuity and props. Exhibit A has MC seemingly equipped with a chameleon circuit as we see in these two adjacent panels he suddenly swaps out clothes and applies makeup:

scene1.png scene2.png

Next we have dad punching him down and then kicking him in the stomach with his bare feet. However MC's dialog in the next panels talks about dad wearing steel toed boots.

The final straw is this little gem. Compare the dialog with the render. Is something missing perhaps?

scene3.png

I haven't even finished this run through yet, but I just had to post.
 

moose_puck

Active Member
Sep 6, 2021
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This Dev just spam posted the exact same cut & paste question in 8 other threads in Development and Assets tonight. Hope none of you supporters gave him any CC numbers, because I get the feeling that his account has been compromised, lol.
 

pussyreaperxxx

Active Member
Oct 18, 2018
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Honestly, I was a bit interested in this VN for the first few updates but it has become more and more vanilla since then despite being a good linear VN overall. I guess if the dev's target audience is a possible steam release then it's fine but lacks variety in porn fetishes.
 
2.30 star(s) 4 Votes