- Nov 5, 2018
- 158
- 388
“Great expectations lead to great disappointments”.
I liked a lot NTRman works but the last ones are widely under his standards.
I thought Lust was a kind of “revenge work” after many people (and i’m one of them) criticized his last VNs because they were “too hurry” and bad writing; moreover Lust seemed to have a great potential: the story of a noble and beautiful woman gets corrupted by rude sailors on a boat; and a great art (as always) such as the figure of Lady Julia (that is probably one of his best female MC).
But…this VN ends up being another of his bad new-course works: too hurry and a female protagonist corruption very very poor (probably the worst one under this point of view). You choose to create a short game? It’s ok for me: also short games can be good (The Queen Who Adopted a Goblin is one of my favourite game…and i’m not into goblin-stuff at all)…but at least pay more attention on writing a good NTR story also by female MC POV. There are not significant dialogues between Julian and Captain/boat crew members (just few decent ones during the HS); the corruption is too fast (and nor we can see the topic moment!). It looks like a deliberate choice: Ntrman chooses to be less into netorare stuff (apparently a contradiction).
Sorry but after a year i really thought we can get something good…but i was wrong.
I liked a lot NTRman works but the last ones are widely under his standards.
I thought Lust was a kind of “revenge work” after many people (and i’m one of them) criticized his last VNs because they were “too hurry” and bad writing; moreover Lust seemed to have a great potential: the story of a noble and beautiful woman gets corrupted by rude sailors on a boat; and a great art (as always) such as the figure of Lady Julia (that is probably one of his best female MC).
But…this VN ends up being another of his bad new-course works: too hurry and a female protagonist corruption very very poor (probably the worst one under this point of view). You choose to create a short game? It’s ok for me: also short games can be good (The Queen Who Adopted a Goblin is one of my favourite game…and i’m not into goblin-stuff at all)…but at least pay more attention on writing a good NTR story also by female MC POV. There are not significant dialogues between Julian and Captain/boat crew members (just few decent ones during the HS); the corruption is too fast (and nor we can see the topic moment!). It looks like a deliberate choice: Ntrman chooses to be less into netorare stuff (apparently a contradiction).
Sorry but after a year i really thought we can get something good…but i was wrong.
I wonder who is this Erika Winters, because seems like she's been in charge of the story on his last VNs and by now is clear that it's not working.
- Jul 13, 2020
- 69
- 8
Is there a 2nd POV like in the goblin game?
A pov for the girl's side ?
Or is this only the Husband's POV ?
A pov for the girl's side ?
Or is this only the Husband's POV ?
- Dec 25, 2017
- 35
- 60
Walkthrough TLDR:
0 Crew Cabins
00 Captain's Hat@
000 Storage#
0000 Surrender the Sword*
0001 Swing the Sword**
001 Crew Quarters
0010 Storage
*
**
0011 Room
*
**
01 Josef
#
1 Storage Area
@
0000 Surrender the Sword*: 00000 Use Knife - Death End (MC dies)
0001 Swing the Sword**: 00010 Fin? end (Captain dies)
Note: In one of the trees in '1 Storage Area', instead of '0001 Swing the Sword', '???' appears.
0 Crew Cabins
00 Captain's Hat@
000 Storage#
0000 Surrender the Sword*
0001 Swing the Sword**
001 Crew Quarters
0010 Storage
*
**
0011 Room
*
**
01 Josef
#
1 Storage Area
@
0000 Surrender the Sword*: 00000 Use Knife - Death End (MC dies)
0001 Swing the Sword**: 00010 Fin? end (Captain dies)
Note: In one of the trees in '1 Storage Area', instead of '0001 Swing the Sword', '???' appears.
after a half year work welp i stop the sub long time ago so cant complain much but demm the worst piece ever
- Oct 27, 2020
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- 126
im here, pirating this game..im in no position to complain..so whether this game is good or not, ill play it
beggar cant be chooser after all
beggar cant be chooser after all
- Jul 31, 2017
- 14
- 29
Im here trying to bust a nut, and i end up vibing to the song that plays during the sex scene, anyone know how to extract that song?
he got 20k a month, he hiring a writer and that the result of his work??? even me can writer a better story than this shit, and english is second language.
- Jul 31, 2017
- 14
- 29
There are onlyfans models getting 200k monthly for toe pics, this is a better deal, especially when hes losing his sanity making these.