HTML The Making of a Slut [v1.0.4 Patreon] [Austinhaney6969]

[austinhaney6969]

I just faked it and rescaled it with photoshop - I dont have any video editing software, but I guess you can do it with the video too then.

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Ok - then I will have a look in another year (saw that I last played the year more or less a year ago ^^)

The UI is so big and chunky. Maybe reduce the size of everything? ... or is this that size because of mobile?
When I play on fullscreen, everything is to much ... on half monitor size it is bearable.

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Every button is so huge with that ugly fat border ...

I have not much experience with twine and just tested it for fun a bit on a own very small "project" ..

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To check and understand your CSS and try to change it would take to much time for me sorry ^^

But the UI is a major problem imho for your game, especially because you need it so much (because of sandboxy stuff). In my "game" there is just the UI on the left and every decsision is just made in the dialogs ..

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As I said - I am clueless on the whole twine stuff, just played around a bit ^^ ... So maybe try to streamline your UI or at least limit the width that it doesnt get so overwhelmingly huge on screen.

I'll probably just swap that generic video out with another.

As for the chunkiness of the screen, yeah, part of that is designed to help mobile users. I was getting a LOT of complaints from them, and wanted to make the game more accessible.

The left sidebar is actually being slimmed down as I side, it now looks like.


Still not perfect I know, and I'm working on slimming it down. The right sidebar is COMPLETELY optional, and doesn't take up space unless you want it to so, hopefully I don't hear any bitching there .

 

[austinhaney6969]

The two least available types of NTR content is lesbian NTR and incest NTR.

Hmm, I could probably add some lesbian ntr... In fact I think there might even be some technically speaking. As for the incest, that's a hard no. Nothing against it personally, but for legal reasons, nope.

 

[someoldguy]

I'm sure wrestling with the interface must be driving you slowly crazy, but I can only urge you to set up two different formats, one for wide screens and another for narrow, phone style screens. The interface has had its issues in the past but it was pretty functional in past iterations. The current one is a disaster for PC monitors. It fills about 75% of the available screen and the pictures are expanded so much they look like grainy old photos from the 1970's. The ones that are portrait shape are expanded to become almost twice the height of the screen. Please cap the image expansion to a sensible size, preferably no more than the original size of the picture. The same goes for the menu. It doesn't need to fill the entire width of the screen. You end up scrolling miles down below the bottom of the page just to get to a story choice if there's a few lines of dialogue.

I'd also request that you add a toggle to switch off the keypad shortcut prompts. They make the menu a lot harder to read and for anyone using a mouse they're entirely redundant.

 

[austinhaney6969]

I'm sure wrestling with the interface must be driving you slowly crazy, but I can only urge you to set up two different formats, one for wide screens and another for narrow, phone style screens. The interface has had its issues in the past but it was pretty functional in past iterations. The current one is a disaster for PC monitors. It fills about 75% of the available screen and the pictures are expanded so much they look like grainy old photos from the 1970's. The ones that are portrait shape are expanded to become almost twice the height of the screen. Please cap the image expansion to a sensible size, preferably no more than the original size of the picture. The same goes for the menu. It doesn't need to fill the entire width of the screen. You end up scrolling miles down below the bottom of the page just to get to a story choice if there's a few lines of dialogue.

I'd also request that you add a toggle to switch off the keypad shortcut prompts. They make the menu a lot harder to read and for anyone using a mouse they're entirely redundant.

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I'll look into the alternate screens sizes based on width and whatnot shortly. But as for the hotkeys, as someone with arthritis/carpal tunnel. No, they're not redundant. It also helps you play the game one handed which for a porn game... Would leave a hand free for knitting.

 

[austinhaney6969]

I'm sure wrestling with the interface must be driving you slowly crazy, but I can only urge you to set up two different formats, one for wide screens and another for narrow, phone style screens. The interface has had its issues in the past but it was pretty functional in past iterations. The current one is a disaster for PC monitors. It fills about 75% of the available screen and the pictures are expanded so much they look like grainy old photos from the 1970's. The ones that are portrait shape are expanded to become almost twice the height of the screen. Please cap the image expansion to a sensible size, preferably no more than the original size of the picture. The same goes for the menu. It doesn't need to fill the entire width of the screen. You end up scrolling miles down below the bottom of the page just to get to a story choice if there's a few lines of dialogue.

I'd also request that you add a toggle to switch off the keypad shortcut prompts. They make the menu a lot harder to read and for anyone using a mouse they're entirely redundant.

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Alright, so I've modified the css for the videos, at 1400px and above, the videos display at 65% the width of the screen, then at 1400-1200 they display at 75%, all the way up in increments of 200 px, where if your screen is below 800px, it displays at 100% of the width of your screen. Hopefully that works well for you when I do the release (over three weeks away), if not, just tag me again and we'll tweak it.

 

[someoldguy]

Thanks for the quick reply. I've been looking for old iterations of the game to try and find one where the screen was easiest to read on a PC but you seem to have done a good job of cleaning up old download links.

I'm not suggesting you take out the hotkeys, but they don't need to be visibly written 2.On X.All Z.The V.Buttons B.If Y.You're N.Not D.Using P.Them A toggle like the one for larger or smaller fonts would be great.

Incidentally, in the menu listing all the options of animating the avatar etc it's not clear which options are on or off.

 

[Master of Puppets]

Hmm, I could probably add some lesbian ntr... In fact I think there might even be some technically speaking. As for the incest, that's a hard no. Nothing against it personally, but for legal reasons, nope.

Is 'Incest NTR' actually incest? I thought it was like a kids mother being seduced or sluttified by a stranger, no incest involved and Patreon can't complain about it.

 

[LenioTG]

Yes, you can. Follow Lexis path until you unlock the clinic, then you can change into a male, woman, or futanari at your own discretion.

Thank you for the answer, can't wait to play your game then!

There is a option to go full female on one of the routes

Thanks!

 

[austinhaney6969]

By "incest NTR" I don't mean the protagonist having sex with a family member. Quite the opposite - witnessing one's family member being turned into a slut and used.

Oh, then yeah, some of that is planned, kind of. I plan on implementing a "room-mate" who's relationship and name you can set. How you interact with them will depend on your choices but, there will likely be an option to watch them get fucked.

 

[austinhaney6969]

Wouldn't it be easier for you, writing-and-content-wise, to have it be a concrete, pre-established family member, like mother, sister etc.? Then you could just focus on the routes you can take with them - slave route, NTR route, and so on?

Legally, I'm not even going to touch that. I don't want to take the risk of being shitcanned on patreon. So I'll let people choose their relationship and if they want to set it to whatever they want, I can't stop them.

 

[STKGenesis]

It seems the option to save has become a lot harder to find, it doesn't seem to be under the book on the left bar like it used to or it might be that I'm blind and have been looking past it while it's been in plain view.

Edit: Nevermind found it, I didn't think to click menu options at the top.

 

[LaraWolfe]

Yeah I didn't save for the longest time until there was a choice that I didn't want to make without saving. I just didn't know where the button was for it and had to search.

 

[SissyPhucker]

Bonjour, the game not good but not bad. I want to fuck sissy not be sissy. Like story just not Wat to be sissy. I put myself in other person mind not sissy when play. I will keep playing good pictures. Not like looking at hypnotize video. Anyone now game where you fuck sissy? Merci

 

[Iso-propyl-potatene]

I gotta say. You have a real knack for writing narcissistic sociopaths. The lack of empathy and accountability your three main characters (Bailey, Riley, and to some extent Lexi) have is really awe inspiring. If you there was a 'beat the shit out of them' option at any point rest assured that I would click the fuckin shit out of it. Like I get off to like rape, so I'm not like, reaaaally judging people who get off to this or anything (though a part of me worries about whether your fetish for abusive relationships might put you in legit danger). And I have no issues with the quality of the writing. But Christ is it fucking HARD to read. There's no like tongue in cheek sort of 'haha I actually like the rape we hugged and kissed afterwards' shit going on here, your main character may get off on it, but the people around him literally do not give a FUCK about him outside of utility. This is straight up abuse. And it's the slimy head fuckery kind. Creepy and groomy. Truly insidious shit, especially outta bailey. Real fuckin spooky. Impressive stuff my guy. Legitimately makes me stupid angry at your characters.

Should be really be proud that your porn game's writing is arousing(haha) me in that respect.

 

[Jrc1101]

I'm stuck right after showing Bailey the locked belt and the butt plug where do you get the uniform or is that part yet to be added?
Edit: nvm i found it

 

[austinhaney6969]

I gotta say. You have a real knack for writing narcissistic sociopaths. The lack of empathy and accountability your three main characters (Bailey, Riley, and to some extent Lexi) have is really awe inspiring. If you there was a 'beat the shit out of them' option at any point rest assured that I would click the fuckin shit out of it. Like I get off to like rape, so I'm not like, reaaaally judging people who get off to this or anything (though a part of me worries about whether your fetish for abusive relationships might put you in legit danger). And I have no issues with the quality of the writing. But Christ is it fucking HARD to read. There's no like tongue in cheek sort of 'haha I actually like the rape we hugged and kissed afterwards' shit going on here, your main character may get off on it, but the people around him literally do not give a FUCK about him outside of utility. This is straight up abuse. And it's the slimy head fuckery kind. Creepy and groomy. Truly insidious shit, especially outta bailey. Real fuckin spooky. Impressive stuff my guy. Legitimately makes me stupid angry at your characters.

Should be really be proud that your porn game's writing is arousing(haha) me in that respect.

Thanks, I think! Yeah, a lot of the characters are pretty... Not nice. And they're written that way on purpose. It's meant to come off as predatory, and the character was warned along the way... I am adding more characters and slowly fleshing them out though, and I plan to balance all the "morally questionable" characters with some less so, while simultaneously making the game less linear.

Basically,the next update I do will revamp how the system works and will allow the character much more freedom of choice. Meaning if you want to avoid Riley, you can, Bailey, Lexi, etc. Though you still have to "meet" riley. In the somewhat distant future I'll also be adding a dom route. Where instead of doing whatever morally questionable things the "bad" girls want you to do, you can leave, or well, dominate them.

Note: Remember, it's just a video game, I do not endorse or condone the "slimy headfuckery" kind of stuff irl.

 

[ThornyAce]

Got the latest version for here and all the images seem to be broken, is there a fix for this for this version?

 

[austinhaney6969]

Got the latest version for here and all the images seem to be broken, is there a fix for this for this version?

Did you extract the zip file?

 

[ThornyAce]

Did you extract the zip file?

The program I was using wasn't providing that option, so used a different one and that seemed to sort it.

 

[nukeynukey]

I found couple of bugs first one was when i was at mall there was an error there i fixed it i think

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also this task maybe fixed or i cant understand it
"I wonder what would happen if I came to work aroused..."

i have no valid knowledge of deving html games hope i didn't do something embarrasing