Ren'Py Abandoned The Man [v0.3.1 Chirstmas Special] [UnHoly Production]

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Minxie

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Not everyone can make a good game ... Well, a lot can make a decent game i guess, but this is not one of them
 

Akeymu

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Models were decent, liked megan and georgia. However, the dailog was a complete mess though. Theres no cues when switching between character speech, and and action, or scene narration. The custom names do appear in large chunk of the dialog. The only thing that was good was the animations, tho a little clunky they seem to be the most functioning
 
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unholyProduction

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Models were decent, liked megan and georgia. However, the dailog was a complete mess though. Theres no cues when switching between character speech, and and action, or scene narration. The custom names do appear in large chunk of the dialog. The only thing that was good was the animations, tho a little clunky they seem to be the most functioning
Thanks for the feedback, I will be fixing the dialogue issue and also add some substance to the beginning of the story. Furthermore , I will also replace the look of Lexi and change her name to Lexina ...:whistle::giggle: and Alice in the future fix ( around August Time)

I am deeply sorry for anyone, that thought the Visual novel is crap and a sham , my goal is to make the best , therefore i thank everybody for the feedback given as it allows me to fix the issues/major problems that are in V0.01 and V0.01a).
 
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Akeymu

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Thanks for the feedback, I will be fixing the dialogue issue and also add some substance to the beginning of the story. Furthermore , I will also replace the look of Lexi and change her name to Lexina ...:whistle::giggle: and Alice in the future fix ( around August Time)

I am deeply sorry for anyone, that thought the Visual novel is crap and a sham , my goal is to make the best , therefore i thank everybody for the feedback given as it allows me to fix the issues/major problems that are in V0.01 and V0.01a).
Hinestly models were fine perfect i like alices thick self need more of her style in gamea the chunk teacher mother look is hot
Dialog just gotta tell the d8fference of convo thoughts and action and that was my only gripe here
Models renders and anitamions were good over all honestly
 

unholyProduction

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The Man V0.2 Is Here Check Links Below
Window MEGA
Linux MEGA:
Mac MEGA
Android MEGA:
Highly Advise to Play from the beginning big changes made
Change log (Quick write up , Tomorrow will write up detail devlog)
Chapter 1
Total Renders (static): 57
Total Render Animation: 1775
Chapter 0
Total Renders(static):196
Total Render Animation: 2446
Total Game Count:
Word Count:7,230 words
Character Count:39,213
Path system working now
3 different routes to take , which will change the directtion of the story and the information you get which will affect the later chapters : - )



chapter0_toilet_cumshot_penis_01.jpg chapter0_dopeboystare.jpg chapter0_geobedroom_comover.jpg
 
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House Of Black

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The Man V0.2 Is Here Check Links Below
Window MEGA:Mega
Linux MEGA:Mega
Mac MEGA:Mega
Android MEGA:Mega
Highly Advise to Play from the beginning big changes made
Change log (Quick write up , Tomorrow will write up detail devlog)
Chapter 1
Total Renders (static): 57
Total Render Animation: 1775
Chapter 0
Total Renders(static):196
Total Render Animation: 2446
Total Game Count:
Word Count:7,230 words
Character Count:39,213
Path system working now
3 different routes to take , which will change the directtion of the story and the information you get which will affect the later chapters : - )



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Might as well make the character black
 

unholyProduction

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Okay here the changes I made from the disastrous V0.1a to the new and improved (hopefully) The Man V0.2


Changes Made

Chapter 0 changes:

  • Add New Georgia Scene
  • Revamp Georgia with newer model in old scenes
  • Fix the Path system
  • Create a splash screen
  • Add Dopeboy scenes
  • Fix Megan toilet route

Add Chapter 1:

Add a new animation style (experimental, any feedback on it will appreciate it)


Also, I do kind of think that the VN lacks good sex animations, which I'm deffo going to improve on.
 
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Okay here the changes I made from the disastrous V0.1a to the new and improved (hopefully) The Man V0.2


Changes Made

Chapter 0 changes:

  • Add New Georgia Scene
  • Revamp Georgia with newer model in old scenes
  • Fix the Path system
  • Create a splash screen
  • Add Dopeboy scenes
  • Fix Megan toilet route

Add Chapter 1:

Add a new animation style (experimental, any feedback on it will appreciate it)


Also, I do kind of think that the VN lacks good sex animations, which I'm deffo going to improve on.
open ticket to get your developer tag.

As for feedback, make a new banner with the girls, that one is old and the girls look... a bit ugly than they are in the game.
Open a thread in help to get someone to help you out with the writing, proofreading/editing text.
 

JokerLeader

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The Man [v0.02] UnHoly Production

Original Size Win/Linux: 567 MB
Original Size Mac: 549 MB

Compressed Size Win/Linux: 141 MB
Compressed Size Mac: 124 MB

Win/Linux:
Mac:

This compression is unofficial. Compressing process reduces image/audio/video quality and can break the game, be aware of that.

You can find all of my Walkthrough Mods content here:

Or you can:
 

Bailz

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i have no idea what this game is about, we start university, get a girl, then suddenly some supernatural shit happens, we have a dodgy dream and end :confused::confused: all the jumping around doesn't help all the zooming in and out started giving me an headache
 
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unholyProduction

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i have no idea what this game is about, we start university, get a girl, then suddenly some supernatural shit happens, we have a dodgy dream and end :confused::confused: all the jumping around doesn't help all the zooming in and out started giving me an headache
Thanks for the feedback, chapter 0 will be revamped again most likely create a proper beginning. However the zooming effect is for the character introductions. Or i you talking about the dope boy shooting scenes
 
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