VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Manifest: Shadows Over Manston [v2.2] [White Phantom Games]

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Overview:
The idea behind my novel/game is that after the incident in the introduction, you return home to your wife and step-daughter, and are reassigned to a cushty job whilst recovering. This job will be working as a School Resource Officer, but as you are recovering and not allowed on active duty, you take on the role of step-in Gym Teacher for a group of 18+ girls who all failed to graduate the prior year. You'll have the options of focusing on your career, family or sex life. Different scenarios and scenes will be available depending on your choices.​

Thread Updated: 2020-11-10
Release Date: 2020-11-09
Developer: White Phantom Games

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Version: 2.2
OS: Win, Linux, Mac, Android
Language: English
Other Games: Defending Lydia Collier
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[Vertigob]

where is the mac version?

 

[xןʞ]

In OP.

:angel:

 

[Reese286]

This is interesting and a good start even though its just a few min of play....more of a VN than a game I'm thinking. There might actually be a story here and I love the normal proportions on the models.

 

[MCalvet]

Looks nice...

 

[docclox]

Violence?

Are we talking violence where the protagonist has to beat up guys who are threatening his girls? Or sexual violence from the proganist to the girls? Or is the player the subject of the violence?

A little clarification would be useful here. Also, how graphic violence are we talking about?

 

[Dolphin3000]

Great start! Graphics are wonderful, the female characters are beautiful, and the sex scene is optional. It is very important, so the player is in control of the MC romantic adventures, giving the player the chance to pick the one(s) he feels more attracted to. It can become a very good game, congratulations to devs!

 

[WhitePhantom]

Violence?

Are we talking violence where the protagonist has to beat up guys who are threatening his girls? Or sexual violence from the proganist to the girls? Or is the player the subject of the violence?

A little clarification would be useful here. Also, how graphic violence are we talking about?

Hey, this would be story related cop violence, I do not plan any sexual violence at this point.

 

[joeljoseph98]

I dont get the point where people ask about the amount of contents in a game where there are only a couple of versions available. I mean, everyone knows the fact that the first version will be all about the introduction and that kind of stuff of the games and the next version will be a small build up to the story. Sure there are games which goes full on fap mode in the first release itself and I do realize the fact that fapping is our ultimate goal but we are playing games and games has to be full of quality contents such as good story lines and amazing adult contents. Only then a game will be enjoyable. If someone wants to just fap at something why dont they go and watch some pure porn? And this applies to each and every game. Ive seen a lot of comment sections of new games and all they do is ask 'HOW MUCH CONTENT?'. Its one of the most irritating things to read and please, everyone stop asking those questions and enjoy what you have.

 

[Hercule_Poirot]

Is there any possibility to tweak his wife a little? she looks like she's been through a lot.

On another note, the story might be quite interesting. Is the MC going to casually find something to link his previous investigation to his new high school job? or will that be just a chapter of the game? who knows? maybe the next chapter takes place somewhere else after his complete recovery.

 

[General F. Apper]

it's a good first release.

 

[tsunku]

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safe space? is that where you take girls and no one can interrupt?

 

[XJ347]

a group of 18+ girls who all failed to graduate the prior year.

Anyone else see this and do an eye roll? Just say they are high school seniors who are 18. There are 18 year old seniors... It feels cheap when I read that they were held back. Really???? Please creator if you read this forum, just say they are 18 and cut out them being held back.

 

[tsunku]

Anyone else see this and do an eye roll? Just say they are high school seniors who are 18. There are 18 year old seniors... It feels cheap when I read that they were held back. Really???? Please creator if you read this forum, just say they are 18 and cut out them being held back.

here if they are 18 and seniors it means they failed one year somewhere and had to re-do it.. when i went to school tho you were right cuz they didn't have these stupid laws that specify at what age a child must enter kindergarten and yes, they have to do that or else you get in trouble. it's stupid.

 

[docclox]

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Well:

1: Not everyone likes rape as a fetish
2: Of those who do, not everyone likes to see the victim beaten bloody
3: If it involves the player getting beaten up by the girls, I'm not interested. Femdom is not my thing.
4: The tag as written could just as easily refer to non-sexual violence defending your harem

The fact that only one of those options occurred to you just goes to show that a little more clarity would be useful.

 

[Voilsh]

Seems interesting, but I really wish for a "trainer" like game, not a super linear VN.

Anyone else see this and do an eye roll? Just say they are high school seniors who are 18. There are 18 year old seniors... It feels cheap when I read that they were held back. Really???? Please creator if you read this forum, just say they are 18 and cut out them being held back.

"They're 18 and law abiding non existing citizen. And they won't drink pixel alcohol until 21."

 

[XJ347]

here if they are 18 and seniors it means they failed one year somewhere and had to re-do it.. when i went to school tho you were right cuz they didn't have these stupid laws that specify at what age a child must enter kindergarten and yes, they have to do that or else you get in trouble. it's stupid.

Why not just say they are 18 and seniors and leave it at that?

As long as you say everyone is 18 then legally you are covered. You do not have to say they were held back for liability reasons, that is 100% the author. Let the audience do the work and figure out how it works for them. This way the story feels more authentic, and less convoluted.

In the grand scheme of things this is a really minor point and if the story is good it can shine past this slight blemish if left as is.

more clarity would be useful.

I agree, clarification and specificity is never a bad thing. Why not be specific in the tags so people know exactly what is in the game.

 

[WhitePhantom]

Anyone else see this and do an eye roll? Just say they are high school seniors who are 18. There are 18 year old seniors... It feels cheap when I read that they were held back. Really???? Please creator if you read this forum, just say they are 18 and cut out them being held back.

I'll be honest, I'm British, we leave High School at
16. I thought I'd Americanise it because everything asset wise is American, and I thought you could get held back and have 18 Year Olds still in school this way, whereas normally they'd be too old.

Secondly to teach in a school here you have to a degree in teaching, so by making them failures forced to do gym as just a non-examined credit it would enable me to explain why exactly a cop is being given that job without the right qualifications.

I also had planned two of the characters being incredibly embarrassed about even being at school as they were supposed to graduate top of their class the year before, and this would lead to a bullying path by the other girls with non-intervention.

I'll take it onboard and have a think though, like I said, it's not in the game yet, so can be changed.

On another note, to answer the other questions, you cannot violently rape anybody in this game, nor is there any femdom (there will be lesdom if a certain route is followed, but not of the MC). I have about 20 renders left before the next update, hope to have it out by the end of the weekend.

 

[Darth Helmet]

I'll be honest, I'm British, we leave High School at
16. I thought I'd Americanise it because everything asset wise is American, and I thought you could get held back and have 18 Year Olds still in school this way, whereas normally they'd be too old.

Secondly to teach in a school here you have to a degree in teaching, so by making them failures forced to do gym as just a non-examined credit it would enable me to explain why exactly a cop is being given that job without the right qualifications.

I also had planned two of the characters being incredibly embarrassed about even being at school as they were supposed to graduate top of their class the year before, and this would lead to a bullying path by the other girls with non-intervention.

I'll take it onboard and have a think though, like I said, it's not in the game yet, so can be changed.

On another note, to answer the other questions, you cannot violently rape anybody in this game, nor is there any femdom (there will be lesdom if a certain route is followed, but not of the MC). I have about 20 renders left before the next update, hope to have it out by the end of the weekend.

Is there a certain 'cough' thing between the stepdaughter and the father? Asking for a friend.

 

[WhitePhantom]

Is there a certain 'cough' thing between the stepdaughter and the father? Asking for a friend.

You monster! What would the wife say!?

(Only two people he's actively seeing at the moment are Jessica and the Wife, all characters introduced so far you will be able to "get to know better" eventually depending on how you interact with them )