VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Manifest: Shadows Over Manston [v2.2] [White Phantom Games]

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Hello!
Hope you all enjoyed the ending to Friday with v.0151!

What to expect going forward:
Completing the Patreon Rewards (monthly for $10+ Patreons and the customised ones for $25) - Due in the next few Days
v.0155 - Due in the next couple of weeks
v.0155 may be a disappointment to some, but it is important for growing the game and establishing some consistency, as v.0155 will be the wife rework rather than new content.
This will mean going through all the scenes from v.010, v.011, v.012 and v.013 and removing the old wife entirely, and replacing the her with the current one, along with fixing some of the dreadful quality renders I let slip through (looking at you, kitchen during the first spanking).
Once v.0155 is released, it will be on to v.016, Saturday in the game's timeline, and collecting your in-laws, corrupting Natalia or meeting up with Courtney or Dr. Xheng depending on your choices so far.

Thanks again for all the support and to every Patreon and fan of the game!

White Phantom
 

AGoodDay2Die

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I lost much respect for the MC, going from a sports car, (even if it did look a bit ridiculous with an air scoop on the roof,) to a four-door sedan. Even worse, he actually WANTED the sedan!
 

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Never heard "cuckqueen" before and it really doesn't make sense. A "cuckold" is a man whose wife has sex with someone else without his consent and usually without his knowledge. If he allows/approves it, he isn't being cuckolded. If he wants it to happen or approves of it he's either a voyeur, a swinger, or a masochist, NOT a cuckold. The scene you describe, (which sounds great, by the way,) makes the wife a submissive masochist.
 

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i have no issues with my wife diddling other dame's..but she's allowed only one D..mine..no other D shall come near on penalty of death(for him..she just gets a stern finger wagging as i'm a nice guy towards the women i dominate..HAHAAAAAA) so if wifey and Penelope are up for some yeehaww...thats two thumbs up for me :p
 
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Mister Ed

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Getting an error during the teachers night out scene when telling Ms. Miller "I think your very attractive myself' after grabbing her ass as she squeezes by.

If I do not grab her ass it gives me a different error later when the night ends. It appears it never loads the D5 Millerseduced variable if you do not grab her.

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 9072, in script
    if D5MillerMad == True:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 9072, in <module>
    if D5MillerMad == True:
NameError: name 'D5MillerMad' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 9072, in script
    if D5MillerMad == True:
  File "D:\Hot\Games\TheManifest-v.015-win\renpy\ast.py", line 1729, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "D:\Hot\Games\TheManifest-v.015-win\renpy\python.py", line 1919, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "D:\Hot\Games\TheManifest-v.015-win\renpy\python.py", line 1912, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/script.rpy", line 9072, in <module>
    if D5MillerMad == True:
NameError: name 'D5MillerMad' is not defined

Windows-7-6.1.7601-SP1
Ren'Py 6.99.14.3.3347
The Manifest v.0151
Fri Sep 21 03:22:22 2018
 

WhitePhantom

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Getting an error during the teachers night out scene when telling Ms. Miller "I think your very attractive myself' after grabbing her ass as she squeezes by.

If I do not grab her ass it gives me a different error later when the night ends. It appears it never loads the D5 Millerseduced variable if you do not grab her.

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 9072, in script
    if D5MillerMad == True:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 9072, in <module>
    if D5MillerMad == True:
NameError: name 'D5MillerMad' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 9072, in script
    if D5MillerMad == True:
  File "D:\Hot\Games\TheManifest-v.015-win\renpy\ast.py", line 1729, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "D:\Hot\Games\TheManifest-v.015-win\renpy\python.py", line 1919, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "D:\Hot\Games\TheManifest-v.015-win\renpy\python.py", line 1912, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/script.rpy", line 9072, in <module>
    if D5MillerMad == True:
NameError: name 'D5MillerMad' is not defined

Windows-7-6.1.7601-SP1
Ren'Py 6.99.14.3.3347
The Manifest v.0151
Fri Sep 21 03:22:22 2018
Just to check, did you restart the Day? Because those should be defined with all the other Day 5 flags before you wake up at Lt. McKenna's house
 
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You can definitely see the learning experience in this game. Some of those early mouth-wide-open shots looked like they wanted to swallow a baby whole, truely hideous. The wife's first character model was ugly as sin (something akin to a crack-addicted granny)

But it's worth keeping at it. As the game progresses, those problems are slowly phased out, you get to see nicer character models ranging from cute to gorgeous (the next update will replace all old wife renders and scenes with the new model, yay!), first glimpses of the major kinky paths are shown and the alternate history cop/corruption drama sinks its fangs into you.

I really enjoyed both of the kinky wife paths. Loving Spanky Wife was great, looking forward to PC +wife +Natalia threesome involving some hot bdsm action. Also excited for the third Penelope spanking scene, likely with PC doling out the punishment (and maybe wife getting off watching PC smack her daughter's ass).

The Submissive Wife route had one of the hottest scenes in the game, the nightclub visit ending in a threesome with PC +wife +Lucy, with further Lucy/wife scenes teased as a potential sharing path.

Now, if you managed to miss the revelation that the PC is a monster and would rather see some cute scenes, the game also has those. Taking care of Miss Miller, helping her with her drug abuse and trying to keep Chantelle's manipulative girlfriend Ana in check. Being supportive of Hannah, teaching her to swim and making the poor bullied girl feel safe.
 
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WhitePhantom

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Never heard "cuckqueen" before and it really doesn't make sense. A "cuckold" is a man whose wife has sex with someone else without his consent and usually without his knowledge. If he allows/approves it, he isn't being cuckolded. If he wants it to happen or approves of it he's either a voyeur, a swinger, or a masochist, NOT a cuckold. The scene you describe, (which sounds great, by the way,) makes the wife a submissive masochist.
This isn't what a cuckold is in porn/BDSM use. What you're describing is just cheating. If your wife is having sex with another guy, and you know nothing about it, that's not being cuckolded, that's just her cheating on you. If your wife is sleeping with another guy and you are aware of it, and fine with it, that's being a cuckold.

All of the cuckold videos contain either you are the husband/boyfriend POV, or they are in the shot.

Unlike the traditional definition of the term, in fetish usage a cuckold is complicit in his (or her) partner's sexual "infidelity"

A masochist is somebody who enjoys pain, the opposite of a sadist. A wife cheating on her partner isn't necessarily a sadist, so the partner wouldn't automatically be a masochist.

There is a game called The Adventurous Couple which shows cuckoldry in porn very well.
 

GhostPhil

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This isn't what a cuckold is in porn/BDSM use. What you're describing is just cheating. If your wife is having sex with another guy, and you know nothing about it, that's not being cuckolded, that's just her cheating on you. If your wife is sleeping with another guy and you are aware of it, and fine with it, that's being a cuckold.

All of the cuckold videos contain either you are the husband/boyfriend POV, or they are in the shot.

Unlike the traditional definition of the term, in fetish usage a cuckold is complicit in his (or her) partner's sexual "infidelity"

A masochist is somebody who enjoys pain, the opposite of a sadist. A wife cheating on her partner isn't necessarily a sadist, so the partner wouldn't automatically be a masochist.

There is a game called The Adventurous Couple which shows cuckoldry in porn very well.
Yeah you led me to your game through the term "cuckqueen". Can't wait for this scene :)
 
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Johnny-Doe

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My friend congratulations,you just got a new fan!
I just finished the current version only to see i can make my wife a pregnant cuckqueen(not sharing her)!Im looking forward to more content with her and my highschool sweetheart Jessica(her flashback was so sad)
 
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My friend congratulations,you just got a new fan!
I just finished the current version only to see i can make my wife a pregnant cuckqueen(not sharing her)!Im looking forward to more content with her and my highschool sweetheart Jessica(her flashback was so sad)
Yeah will play this game further today. Love that there are some more unusal themes in here. (Even thought I hate bullying, I kind of hope that we can help the "bad girls" of the school with the bullying, would totally be something new in a game)
 

Johnny-Doe

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Yeah will play this game further today. Love that there are some more unusal themes in here. (Even thought I hate bullying, I kind of hope that we can help the "bad girls" of the school with the bullying, would totally be something new in a game)
Well tbh im playing as myself here,so im almoooost a good guy.That means ill have my pregnant wife all for myself(i was loving and caring),while she becomes my proud cuckqueen,im hitting up Jessica when she wakes up from coma,
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ohh and i probably left Mercedes pregnant as well....
 

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Well tbh im playing as myself here,so im almoooost a good guy.That means ill have my pregnant wife all for myself(i was loving and caring),while she becomes my proud cuckqueen,im hitting up Jessica when she wakes up from coma,
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ohh and i probably left Mercedes pregnant as well....
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Just started, quick suggestion; You tend to have a lot of dark text colours as people's names, makes it a little hard to see on the dark text background. Perhaps you could lighten these.

For example;
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The Captain's name is a little hard to read unless you're concentrating.
 
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Nice to see Finland making an appearance in a game, but the names are like 90% wrong, I thought they were Russians until Korhonen arrived x'D Nice to see progress from the dev as the game went on, those mouth wide open ones were pretty horrifying and the wife did look like a scarecrow in the beginning. All in all a fun game to play through so far.
 
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