VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Manifest: Shadows Over Manston [v2.2] [White Phantom Games]

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myuhinny

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When I played the game I named the MC Pecker Head then when it asked for a surname I put down Lover so now my players name is Pecker Head Lover.x'D
 
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myuhinny

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klx Made a topic in games and gave them the game dev title, so that they'll probably get a better response in game's topic here.
 

madmanO1

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Anyone else see this and do an eye roll? Just say they are high school seniors who are 18. There are 18 year old seniors... It feels cheap when I read that they were held back. Really???? Please creator if you read this forum, just say they are 18 and cut out them being held back.
my impression after reading the line was that they will be easier to persuade/blackmail into scenarios.
 

myuhinny

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I see no problem with the game and saying that they are 18+ because they were failed a year. Maybe the class is a special class set up for a certain type like problem child problem at home drug use and so on and these ones all get placed into one class for special training.
 

vir_cotto

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Great start. I just hope that crime/mystery story isn't just for the intro and we'll see more of it.
 

WhitePhantom

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Great start. I just hope that crime/mystery story isn't just for the intro and we'll see more of it.
"The Manifest" refers to the documents you find there, along with having porn in it, I intend to fully flesh out the crime story side of things :) Day 3/4 will introduce this stage though, I want to set up the main areas and the people at bit first.
 
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kongflcl

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Really great premise so far, mainly the resource officer/highschool girls and failing marriage. Someone mentioned how rough the wife looks but I love it that way tbh, more of a reason to be tempted by my stepdaughter and her beautiful friend Hannah. Really looking forward to the future of this game. Also love the way you can try to force yourself onto Hannah, I don't exactly have a rape fetish but in a choice based game its always weird to me that you don't have the choice to force yourself on the women you're pursuing.
 

CloudX

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I'm not 100% sure, I planned on just adding getting your job as the next update, and it was going to be pretty quick.
Now I've added a morning scene (incomplete), the school (complete), police station (complete) after work (complete) and evening (incomplete). So I've got about 30-40 more renders to go, and some of them are taking about 16hours on my laptop. It should double the story length though, plus I'm building a desktop Monday which I hope will significantly reduce the render times going forward.
thanks ^^
 

Marquesse

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Meh, cop in action... has a car that no cop can afford in RL... has a hot daughter... fucks the hot friend of his hot daughter... has a hot wife... an expensive house...
Basically this game is a young boy's fantasy. -.-
 

Gomly1980

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I'll be honest, I didn't expect much.

It got dark real quickly but not in a bad way. I really liked what was there.

Meh, cop in action... has a car that no cop can afford in RL... has a hot daughter... fucks the hot friend of his hot daughter... has a hot wife... an expensive house...
Basically this game is a young boy's fantasy. -.-
It says where the money came from at the start.
 
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Bagger288

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Interesting start with some unique flavor, but I thought the introduction was a) too long b) too bloody.
It was difficult to care about these unknown characters for so many pages, and the wounds they sustained were beyond deadly. I'd at least suggest a blurb saying who's who at the very beginning, instead of the cold open.
 
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WhitePhantom

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Hi guys. Just a quick update, so I finished my desktop and holy shit the difference in render times is night and day. Next update will be released this Friday. It will add a significant amount to the game, although it is primarily story related, there is a sex scene but it's short. Cheers for the continuing feedback.
 
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wep

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Hi guys. Just a quick update, so I finished my desktop and holy shit the difference in render times is night and day. Next update will be released this Friday. It will add a significant amount to the game, although it is primarily story related, there is a sex scene but it's short. Cheers for the continuing feedback.
Cool!
two questions:
1)Are you planning an harem ending?
2)Must I close the other thread in discussion? it is up to you but personally I think it is probably better.
 

WhitePhantom

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Cool!
two questions:
1)Are you planning an harem ending?
2)Must I close the other thread in discussion? it is up to you but personally I think it is probably better.
Yeah might as well, or merge it? :)

Maybe there is going to be an ending like that, I'm not 100% sure yet, I've got the first week mapped out, but I'm not too far ahead of that yet in too much detail.
 

myuhinny

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As long as you can get Hannah the daughter and number 4 no not the one with the blue hair the other number 4 I'll be happy. But the first one on the list is Hannah.
 

ilovenudemods

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Not a bad start. I wish there was more to it. Also, consider making the player's cock a normal human size. Not many people who play this game will have 10" inch pringle can dicks. It kind of breaks immersion. I hope you keep up with it and add a lot more content to check back on.
 

Deadlyreaper

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that was a damn strong start from this game really well done sexy female caracter and very interesting story which really makes me curious about more i am really looking forward to the next update with hopefully more content and only one more thing maybe you can work on the facial expressions because if

you say something what friendly and then the girls tear so much the mouth on which one thinks the scream one like in the hospital I invite a picture up so you know what I mean but sunday good work as far as I hope for the update that you continue to do so
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AGoodDay2Die

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'7.62' is just the metric equivalent of imperial .300 caliber. .308 is actually 7.82 mm, not 7.62, another misconception of the imperial measurement system.

Any '.30 caliber' round is 7.62... I haven't played the game, so i did not know they said rifle, was only going on what i saw in the post. Ergo, if you are anywhere that uses Metric, and needed to have your 300 H&H Magnum rounds created, you would order it by Metric size, e.g. 7.82x72.39.

There are only 3 countries on earth that don't use the Metric system, Burma, Liberia and the USA, and it's not gonna last. Holland and Holland (the company that makes the .300 H&H mag), being British based, has already converted all their calibers to Metric, and give the loading info in Metric now, with the imperial equivalent as an afterthought :p
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Well, since 7.62 is what the metric countries call a .308 - even if the bullet diameter is actually 7.82mm, and ALSO what they call the Kalashnikov round (7.62x39), even though that bullet is actually a 7.92mm diameter, it would seem that it's the METRIC countries that are the ones screwing the pooch. Of course, as you should know the ACTUAL bore diameter and stated caliber have rarely ever been the same. British .303 Enfields used bullets ranging from .309"-.318" (7.85mm-8.08mm), though it was referred to officially in metric as "7.7x56R". Variations also occur because in some countries they go by the full bore diameter and in others (like the UK,) by the diameter between the lands.

Regardless, Russian perp with rifle in America noted to be 7.62 is almost certainly using 7.62x39 Soviet in an AK derivative or a sniper rifle in 7.62x54R. The rapid-fire on scene likely rules out the latter. Any cops on scene are gonna tell by the spent brass 'cause no cop is gonna look at a bullet wound and give you that.

Dev, I still wanna know what his car is doing at the hospital. It makes no sense for it to be there. Did it just magically appear? He should either be calling his wife, a buddy, or a taxi to get home. Of course, then you have to change the encounter with the daughter's friend, too.
 
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