VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Manifest: Shadows Over Manston [v2.2] [White Phantom Games]

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myuhinny

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Maybe the cars name is kitt and it drove it's ass to the hospital or maybe one of the people from the force brought it there so that you had something to take home after you got out of the hospital.
 

Bagger288

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I've tried to follow the argument about the car and the gun, but I just can't. They're both silly, but in the wrong way.

The main character is dead from a shotgun wound and was treated with nanomachines that regenerate tissue before the parking meter on his Jaguar ran out. Let's keep the intro sequence short and move on to him fucking his all of his remedial PE students while hopped up on synthetics from evidence already.
 
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myuhinny

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Maybe the doctor was talking about a different head being blown off maybe that would explain his horse cock as they had to sew it or a replacement back on.
 

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Maybe the doctor was talking about a different head being blown off maybe that would explain his horse cock as they had to sew it or a replacement back on.
Personally, I am a big fan of POV male characters with huge gear. If I'm going to have an avatar in a game, I don't mind if he's better equipped than I am, because odds are he's about to get laid a lot more than I am anyway. It's fantasy, not reality. I don't play these games so that I can play myself, I want to play as someone who makes out a little bit better in life. My vote is not to change that, Dev.
 
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myuhinny

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Me personally I'm tired of the same horse cock over and over as almost all MC's in most games have the same horse cock and it gets boring after awhile and you tend to just spam past some scenes like the bj scene. School, love & friends the protagonist has a normal sized dick and the scenes in the game are are a lot hotter then any of the games where the MC has a horse cock.
 

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Me personally I'm tired of the same horse cock over and over as almost all MC's in most games have the same horse cock
me personally i'm tired of the same small penis over and over, it's your problem if u have a tiny penis irl and offended by the game, it's porn game, not real life.
 
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myuhinny

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90+ percent of the games out there the MC has a horse cock you rarely see one that is a realistic size and I find it hard to believe that you have actually seen that many games with a realistic size dick.
 

loqex

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Wha... you mean Mandingo isn't the norm!? :FeelsBadMan:

Shhh.. don't start on MC's 6-pack abs. :perservingface:

Oh heck there goes my bubble. :coldsweat:

People enjoy their bubbles.. no matter how fantastical it maybe.
 

WhitePhantom

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Shhh.. don't start on MC's 6-pack abs. :perservingface:

Oh heck there goes my bubble. :coldsweat:
Like I play American Football for Uni and I'm built like that, all you need to do is put aside two/three hours a day man, doesn't need to be a bubble

Sorry about the delay on the update, I added another couple of scenes but then I realised the other path would leave you drastically behind with Penelope compared to it so I'm rendering a short night scene with her so you're not too behind if you go that way. Should be done soon, maybe this evening, if not tomorrow

The next update has minimal porn in it but it's setting up the weekend where you'll be able to smash a variety of people depending on how you act in this (Tues) and the next two updates (weds and thurs). I kinda roadmapped it now, I've also managed to sort my disasterous lighting as I've purchased a preset package that stops it looking shit (which is why the end of this update renders look a world apart from the early ones in my eyes)

Cheers,

WP
 
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loqex

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Just to be clear, wasn't putting the game in a negative light. Was just expressing people tend to live and enjoy their bubble(s) and when something interferes with that bubble, they get touchy.
 
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yoyomistro

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I'll be honest, I'm British, we leave High School at
16. I thought I'd Americanise it because everything asset wise is American, and I thought you could get held back and have 18 Year Olds still in school this way, whereas normally they'd be too old.

Secondly to teach in a school here you have to a degree in teaching, so by making them failures forced to do gym as just a non-examined credit it would enable me to explain why exactly a cop is being given that job without the right qualifications.

I also had planned two of the characters being incredibly embarrassed about even being at school as they were supposed to graduate top of their class the year before, and this would lead to a bullying path by the other girls with non-intervention.

I'll take it onboard and have a think though, like I said, it's not in the game yet, so can be changed.

On another note, to answer the other questions, you cannot violently rape anybody in this game, nor is there any femdom (there will be lesdom if a certain route is followed, but not of the MC). I have about 20 renders left before the next update, hope to have it out by the end of the weekend.
There are plenty of high school students who are 18 in their final year of high school in the US following a normal schedule. Some of them are even 19. I was 17 when I graduated and I was one of the youngest people in my class, like 3rd youngest or so out of 120-something.
 

myuhinny

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In the locker room you can't tell who is talking in the first scene as the name isn't dark enough to stand out so you can read it.

Other then that it looked pretty good.

@Ayrik Eyronphist

Did you start a new game? If not try that. Did you get Hannah's phone number when you picked her up? The 2 errors hannahnumber and hannahtext pertain to her.
 

Safetydummy

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Has anybody else gotten the pool side scenes from the OP preview? If so, how? Any info is appreciated.
 

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In the locker room you can't tell who is talking in the first scene as the name isn't dark enough to stand out so you can read it.

Other then that it looked pretty good.

@Ayrik Eyronphist

Did you start a new game? If not try that. Did you get Hannah's phone number when you picked her up? The 2 errors hannahnumber and hannahtext pertain to her.
Yep, new game fixed it...:coldsweat:
 
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