From the looks of it you no longer get any points with the doctor so she must be out.
I edited the script and changed fiance to wife and changed Penelope to their daughter and edited other spots as well. Though I guess I could just leave it as a fiance and just state he got her pregnant out of wedlock and that Penelope is his.
Hannah's name is hard to see as it blends into the grey boxes background.
Mothers one line to Penelope is backwards.
It should be *Better early then late, off you go.
Saw a few spelling errors here and there.