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myuhinny

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I named the MC Loser and reading in the comments I saw how the MC is like so I edited the one line to. You are Loser III, Spineless king of the great kingdom of Thelarius. But it doesn't look like he's spineless anymore.

This line needs some editing. The two of you had 3 daughters. This makes it sound like they died or something. It should say the two of you have 3 daughters.

Emilia is nice looking Nicoleta is nice looking Sofia is alright looking but there is no way in hell I'm touching that fucking old hag.

I saw some spelling errors here and there.


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Euron13

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I mostly figured out the brave/dominance system on my first go, so that wasn’t an issue for me.

Overall I liked this episode/chapter though. A touch light on H content, but considering it’s early days that’s fine. For the most part I’m intrigued by the setting and the story. Once the MC finds his footing within the story a little more and if impregnation gets worked into the game...well, I might have found myself a new favourite. It has potential, and it might even be the sort of game I throw my support behind.
 

Look-see

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gotta admit wasnt bad.

the thing with Sofia wasnt much of a surprise kinda expected considering how she was introduced. i also thought the MC was a bit of an asshole at first and sort of still is. but considering alot of people around him are just as much of an ass or manipulative i can be ok with him being a dick.

for MC's mom i dont mind the elvira look but yeah maybe give her a potion of rejuvenation or something. she kinda scary looking and not in the hot way.

looking forward to next update.
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syfy88man

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WOW good story, I played both route and really like where this is going. As for artwork, great work on the details and that the ladies are not some teenie bop looking lady that needs to be banged to make sure that the virgin status is taken care of
 
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damien_sensei

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This is a pretty good start and setting, the whole a small kingdom goes to war against a Vampire kingdom is something refreshing, and honestly the part that surprised me was the Dominant choices just felt natural in this setting seeing as we play a MC who is surrounded by people who wanna exploit him and his power...and i can only hope the MC can recognize and treat his allies/LI's better, like being tough where it matters and not in an assholey way, a bit short but the story keeps it intriguing, can't wait for the next chapter (y)
 

gregers

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Not too shabby for a first chapter. Models are decent, writing not terrible. It's silly fantasy porn, and as long as you approach it with that mindset, it's fine.

Never really thought people would not like to sleep with certain characters, but I can make some optinal, no prob
I hope the youngest daughter will continue to be avoidable, for those of us not into kids.

I agree this creator needs to either fix the bravery system or get rid of it entirely, cause as a king in the middle of a war you should start with 10 bravery at less and standing up to mother should need 5 bravery at best.
I agree with the criticisms of how harsh the points system is for now. Would be good to have a couple of points leeway in either direction.

You can get around it using the console, of course (Shift+O), if you don't mind cheating a bit:
Code:
dominant = 10
perv = 5
 

Machinist

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Adding Milf will be more enjoyable
I will make sure to add some, regardind Tereza I really wanted her to have an older look, it's the 15th century we are talking about :ROFLMAO:

The "brave" system seems really poorly implemented or straight up useless. Unless you go back to the start of the game to change your options, you are dialogue locked into being Tereza's bitch. What king would allow her to slap him and undermine his authority? You have to be "brave" enough to talk to a chained up prisoner? The King seems to have done some tyrannical acts and has a short fuse but then is too afraid to stand up for himself at times.
I agree this creator needs to either fix the bravery system or get rid of it entirely, cause as a king in the middle of a war you should start with 10 bravery at less and standing up to mother should need 5 bravery at best.
I'll take a better look at it, also there's now a walkthrough in the OP

What is the paranormal content here ??
Some Lovecraftian references, twisted to fit the story.

No quick menu buttons on android version ?? It is a headache
Machinist
I'll fix that, sorry.

Thanks for playing, guys (and gals).
 
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