VN Ren'Py Abandoned The New Queen [Ch. 1] [Machinist]

[LWtbo]

Spoiler: Choices In the game

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I was trying this game despite this info and it had my interest right up untill mommy confronted the MC in the kitchen.
I looks like the Idea seems to be have a FemDom path and a MaleDom path.
And I can appreciate that may be tricky and maybe limiting in options to write a game that way.
I don't like games that give the false idea that to be dominant you have to be mean agressive and act without thought which tends to end badly some of the time ie."act first repent later".
And if you are Nice foughtfull and restrained then you must odviously be weak.
But being Nice foughtfull and restrained just means you know when to be agressive and when not to be it dosn't make you non dominant.
If i have to be agressive at every choice or else I fail to be able to be agressive when it warrents my MC being so then its not really a choice to start with.

But by playing this game it did show me that choice system in my book is flawed and the way being mean is the only way to be dominant while being nice just makes you the weak sub in this game then it isn't for me.
But good luck with it anyway.

Just Sayin

 

[Lol00000]

Is there a quick menu for the android version?

 

[Deleted member 15555]

I'll take a better look at it, also there's now a walkthrough in the OP

I think it will be better if you get rid of that and just let players choose when to be kind or when to be "brave" and cold etc
rather than a system like that because it will limit replayability.
There is one thing very weird in the 1st chapter that is not addressed, I expected to be able to talk to the priest and fucking kill him for what I see when spying, is very clear they are brainwashing her and ofc I don't expect Sorina to be free after I did jail her ......... it all comes as kinetic if it all happens no matter what.

 

[Belzeebub$]

i did

Thank you for the MOD btw, I forgot to show my gratitude in my earlier reply.[and I heartily apologise for that]

 

[mastayuzen]

Very good story plot and I enjoyed it very much. All the characters look stunning as well. I hope creator won't drag long for full sex scenes but there has to be some built up which will make it more juicy. My wishes.

 

[punisher2099]

Ok other than a few grammar issues this is good and i like how everyone teleports away when finishing conversations i can almost hear the "pop" sound

 

[gtz-god]

Is the Mc's name changeable?

yes

 

[larry69]

I like the games premise very much and the characters are mostly good (especially the redheads) but the choices seem a bit too extreme like : tell her to leave/throw in dungeon. Also a few grammar mistakes exist and while the dialogues are mostly very formal some extremely informal phrases pop out. Good luck with the game!

 

[liege_n]

Played the update. I do agree that I feel like its a bit much to hvae to be an asshole the entire time not to be a complete wimp to Tereza, I feel like you should be able to at least have half a spine if you're a standard king. Interested to see if the traitor is hinting at something besides Sofia/the priestess, because if its a hint towards something we see out of character immediately after, then that is kinda lame. Not really much of a hint if you get given the answer immediately after. Normally I'm not too keen on daddy daughter stuff but it fits with the timeline somewhat lul.

Weird to see Transylvania as independent and not just a part of Hungary but then again its also weird to have a fourth Romania in the middle of Romania, so that's fair enough.

Cthulhu > Dracula is what I believe the moral of the story will be, and I am very much down with that. Fun game so far I will wait to see if the next update (in Feb, you said you hoped) is good and if I enjoy it then I will probably join on Patreon.

 

[Jimbog]

Throughout my life, I have had a policy to never throw women who have had my penis in them, into the dungeon. That policy has served me well.

 

[amBest]

Don't listen to all these girly girls, keep the rough stuff! Let me hit them!
Loved this demo!

 

[whenimclownin2]

is there any femdom scenes or routes in this? thanks

 

[vader667]

liked it.

keep up the good work!

 

[eddie987]

The game got better after the prologue, but I have to agree with some other commenters about the point system. You have to either go full dominant or full passive, which doesn't make much sense to me. I don't want to be a dick to everyone, just to be able to do it to those who deserve it, but at the same time it's not fun to play as a doormat. You either need to go even more complex and add dom/sub points for each character separately (which I don't think is worth it to be honest) or just make the point system a little bit more flexible. For instance the spanking scene needs all the dominance points you can get up until that point. Why not lowering it a little bit so the players can a have a small margin for error, instead of locking them out of that scene, just because they might have gotten one less point?

Now about the story. It's actually interesting so far and although we didn't really get to know any of the characters yet, some of them seem to be likeable. I hope in the next update we'll be able to put some people in their places (especially Sofia) and deal with the priest we were supposed to talk to in the morning, but for some reason that never happened. I also have a slight suspicion that Daria is actually Stephen's illegitimate daughter and the reason they kept it hidden was because her mother is an elf.

 

[Machinist]

Just uploaded the Pc version with no stat points, if anyone's interested. I'll rethink this whole thing. On one hand, no stats makes it easier to play, but on the other makes some choices useless, but it is what it is. Don't know if I'll remove them completelly or water it down.
Anyway, enjoy it!

 

[Pig Slayer Shaolin]

Just uploaded the Pc version with no stat points, if anyone's interested. I'll rethink this whole thing. On one hand, no stats makes it easier to play, but on the other makes some choices useless, but it is what it is. Don't know if I'll remove them completelly or water it down.
Anyway, enjoy it!

The new Android version is already patched and with the quick menu as well.

 

[gregers]

Just uploaded the Pc version with no stat points, if anyone's interested. I'll rethink this whole thing. On one hand, no stats makes it easier to play, but on the other makes some choices useless, but it is what it is. Don't know if I'll remove them completelly or water it down.
Anyway, enjoy it!

I don't think there's any need to remove them completely: The player being able to mold the mc with their choices is emphatically a good thing. But I would suggest (a) making the stats visible somewhere and (b) knocking a few points off the requirements.
The spanking scene currently requires dominant 4 and perv 2, meaning players who've rejected either looking through the peephole or the dream sequence with the youngest princess are locked out from asserting themselves. Reducing the requirement to 3 and 1 would give the players a bit more leeway, without making choices meaningless.

(A minor matter, but it's also a bit confusing that the game tells you "you're not brave enough" even if the barrier isn't dominance. "You're not perverted enough" would be more accurate in those cases.)

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Is the mc a murdering POS because he's emasculated at home? The way he just casually talked about burning down a village and murdering that girl parents after licking his moms heels has me scratching my head. This would've been better if the mc was like 12 like Joffrey from GoT.

 

[Euron13]

I’d honestly be more surprised if the MC was a nice guy, given the setting and era. Most of the rulers in that part of Europe at the time were pretty monstrous as a necessity for how cutthroat politics were at the time.

Which does make me curious about the story here. Because clearly there’s a mixture of history and myth, so where does the Ottoman Empire fit into things? In both the fictional and historical depictions of Vlad Dracula, a lot of his cruelty and inhumanity was a reaction to the Ottoman attempts at conquering Europe.

 

[Machinist]

I’d honestly be more surprised if the MC was a nice guy, given the setting and era. Most of the rulers in that part of Europe at the time were pretty monstrous as a necessity for how cutthroat politics were at the time.

Which does make me curious about the story here. Because clearly there’s a mixture of history and myth, so where does the Ottoman Empire fit into things? In both the fictional and historical depictions of Vlad Dracula, a lot of his cruelty and inhumanity was a reaction to the Ottoman attempts at conquering Europe.

I'll get into the Ottoman Empire when we see more of Wallachia, but I'm not sure how much of it I'll show, since (I believe) at this time their armies used firearms, which is something I don't like a lot in medieval settings (I'm more of a sword and shield fan).

Of course I'm no history especialist, so I can make some mistakes in the historical portrayal, aside from the fantasy elements.