VN Ren'Py Onhold The Office [Ep. 3 v0.3] [Damaged Coda]

[javikashton]

Ah, whatever. I complain about writting in this game because IT WAS FINE ALL THE TIME BEFORE THAT and IT DOESN'T FIT THE GAME. My shortcomings in english language has very little to do with it. I don't like poetry for example. If you had a book written in prose and author later changed in whole into poetry, you probably wouldn't be too happy about it either. This is meaningless. You simply don't want to understand what I mean.


Tags doesn't matter, it's still a game, where woman is cheating on bf with her boss, or is abused by him. As I mentioned before, be it romantic novel I really don't care, it would probably fit, but in this game it doesn't.

Ok, that's all that I will write. If you all are ok with this change of writting in the middle of the development of the game, if you enjoy reading such stuff, well, be my guests. For me it's just a shame to ruin potencially one of the best games out there by such writting. Peace.

what part are you talking about?

 

[Sombramain22]

Ah, whatever. I complain about writting in this game because IT WAS FINE ALL THE TIME BEFORE THAT and IT DOESN'T FIT THE GAME. My shortcomings in english language has very little to do with it. I don't like poetry for example. If you had a book written in prose and author later changed in whole into poetry, you probably wouldn't be too happy about it either. This is meaningless. You simply don't want to understand what I mean.


Tags doesn't matter, it's still a game, where woman is cheating on bf with her boss, or is abused by him. As I mentioned before, be it romantic novel I really don't care, it would probably fit, but in this game it doesn't.

Ok, that's all that I will write. If you all are ok with this change of writting in the middle of the development of the game, if you enjoy reading such stuff, well, be my guests. For me it's just a shame to ruin potencially one of the best games out there by such writting. Peace.

you can't critze the game

 

[whf]

what part are you talking about?

You mean about when the writting goes to shit imo?
From this part all the way to the end of the game (or the content there is so far). Though it is related mostly to sex scenes' narration, dialogues are still ok.
It is when Gail gets home after "negotiating" with Dave about her leave because of her graduation ceremony the next day.

 

[Sorrow85]

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Hi everyone,

Here's a progress report for the next update and sneak-peak from event-1.
I'm trying a different approach for the development this time, divided the whole thing into events and working accordingly instead of rendering everything. Till now this does seem more organised and productive.

The event list for this update (Note: Subject to change)
Event 1: Gail, Ava and Noah go to a fast-food chain to get a bite to eat.
Event 2: Gail's ride home in a cab.
Event 3: Gail reaches home.
Event 4: Next day at the office (consists of series of sub-events)
Event 5: Ava meets Gail at her apartment.
Event 6: Gail meets Kat at the spa.
Event 7: Dinner date with the Landlord.
(Not giving many details because that would take away the surprise factor)

Thank you!

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This wasn't here yet(?) its about ten days old.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

Thanks. Anything that can speed up the development process without cutting into the game's quality is welcome.

 

[javikaston]

Tell me honestly am I the only one in love with Gail? I can't be the only one besides coda of course else does?

 

[r0rschack]

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Tell me honestly am I the only one in love with Gail? I can't be the only one besides coda of course else does?

I think those tits are tad bit too much and still I love her. I think she’s the best Female lead of all the games I’ve played so far

 

[javikaston]

I think those tits are tad bit too much and still I love her. I think she’s the best Female lead of all the games I’ve played so far

I will agree those tits took me a minute to get used to but the way coda made her. they don't look like they don't belong tho either

 

[FightmeLaiLai]

You mean about when the writting goes to shit imo?
From this part all the way to the end of the game (or the content there is so far). Though it is related mostly to sex scenes' narration, dialogues are still ok. View attachment 1451787
It is when Gail gets home after "negotiating" with Dave about her leave because of her graduation ceremony the next day.

Recalled reading somewhere about a new writer. So that probably explains the difference and change of tempo.
I do agree there are some bizarre choice of words during the sex scenes since the change lol

 

[Sorrow85]

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[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

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Hi everyone,

Here's a progress report for the next update and sneak-peak from event-1.
I'm trying a different approach for the development this time, divided the whole thing into events and working accordingly instead of rendering everything. Till now this does seem more organised and productive.

The event list for this update (Note: Subject to change)
Event 1: Gail, Ava and Noah go to a fast-food chain to get a bite to eat.
Event 2: Gail's ride home in a cab.
Event 3: Gail reaches home.
Event 4: Next day at the office (consists of series of sub-events)
Event 5: Ava meets Gail at her apartment.
Event 6: Gail meets Kat at the spa.
Event 7: Dinner date with the Landlord.
(Not giving many details because that would take away the surprise factor)

Thank you!

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This wasn't here yet(?) its about ten days old.

So in that 3rd image of the boys checking out Gails ass, is that Noah or just a noah lookalike ?

 

[Jokr_]

Please don't tell me those ugly kids are going to bang Gail

 

[cold_arctus]

So in that 3rd image of the boys checking out Gails ass, is that Noah or just a noah lookalike ?

Noah is the guy sitting on the table. The other boys in the teaser are either his classmates or random students.

 

[javikaston]

Please don't tell me those ugly kids are going to bang Gail

which ugly kids?

 

[javikaston]

it would be nice to see gail get some people in her life that actually deserve her. but shit give me some more content to make another ass-beating fan fiction part 2.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

Seems like just some random people to me.

it would be nice to see gail get some people in her life that actually deserve her.

Hear, hear!

So far her assistent is the only one who isn't a total creep, scumbag or useless moron between the male cast.

 

[javikaston]

Seems like just some random people to me.


Hear, hear!

So far her assistent is the only one who isn't a total creep, scumbag or useless moron between the male cast.

so far. but hes very wimpy he could use some confidence

 

[Pogo123]

Please don't tell me those ugly kids are going to bang Gail

don’t worry i think (and hope) that moustache guy will get his chance to do this or you will at least have the choice.
and yeah not a big shota fan myself too many cover this already

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

don’t worry i think (and hope) that moustache guy will get his chance to do this or you will at least have the choice.
and yeah not a big shota fan myself too many cover this already

There’s no shota tag

 

[Pogo123]

There’s no shota tag

With shota I mean young boys. Shota for hardcore analysts mean more kid-boys. For me everything which looks below a grown man is shota ^^