VN Ren'Py Onhold The Office [Ep. 3 v0.3] [Damaged Coda]

[Mokey]

"... The size of the game might seem small, that’s because the images have been compressed with 90% quality..."

Gonna start using that explanation in the bedroom.

 

[crwatcher]

Feedback time,

1. How was the update overall? 7/10
2. what improvements can be made? Less rendering on secondary/3rd characters and focus on render with
Gail on scene
3. What's lacking? the holy of holies .. more coitus uninterruptus
4. How's was the action? nice, Car scene was good, Office scene cool too
5. What was the best part according to you? Office time, catfight, Boss time
6. How was the writing in the update? 7/10
7. Was the length of the update good enough? 7/10
8. The last one, did you like Gail's tits pushed up in the pink dress? ye

Extras: 1- Gangbang route will be nice
2- if the developer includes a s3cond gallery of fanart selected by him it will be a nice touch for the people of is using sometime for creation of images

 

[QwertyBam]

Hi guys!
Ok, so the game is up here already!

Feedback time

Fantastic renders, excellent character design, very erotic writing, but fuck, my dude, the pacing. The game starts fast, only to now and then slow down to a crawl.

Like, the dinner scene with the landlord. It may have been fine at the beginning, but come on, this late into the game it's just maddeningly slow.

 

[Tvrzvn]

What are the relationships at the beginning supposed to actually be?

 

[crwatcher]

..., my dude, the pacing...

 

[Fazed]

This MC is basically my perfect woman this games amazing. Also I never understood the complaint about ugly male characters in games like these, like why do you care? your eyes should be on the MC or other female characters 99% of the time anyway?

Because they are in the sex scenes? The fuck? I don't enjoy watching an ugly fuck defile a perfect woman. How is that hard to understand.

 

[Fazed]

Hi guys!
Ok, so the game is up here already!

Feedback time,
1. How was the update overall?
2. what improvements can be made?
3. What's lacking?
4. How's was the action?
5. What was the best part according to you?
6. How was the writing in the update?
7. Was the length of the update good enough?
8. The last one, did you like Gail's tits pushed up in the pink dress?


and you can definitely add more stuff in the comment, likes and dislikes about the game so I can further work on it...
let me know what you guys think about this update


Thank you !!!

I am a faithful route player. I am still miffed about the forced scenes between Dave and Gail but the rest has been ok. I haven't been forced to do anything else so far.....Except I refused Mr. Lucas' date offer and Ava agreed to help with the rent but I still got the date scene. Why is that? Please tell me that it was an oversight and not another forced encounter, because there really is no point to a faithful route if stuff keeps happening when you say no. Fake options dont make your game better. I really hope it was just a simple mistake this time.

On another note I like that Gail seems to have a plan to finally deal with Dave by getting his wife involved. I really hope that doesn't lead to dead end. It should have happened sooner in my opinion.

P.S. The catfight was great.

 

[PCPrincipalBro]

Awesome game and beautiful renders

 

[Seif10]

Do i need to download the whole game with each update or is there an update file?

 

[jackozwell1]

Because they are in the sex scenes? The fuck? I don't enjoy watching an ugly fuck defile a perfect woman. How is that hard to understand.

Lol well I guess people have different opinions on this, personally I couldn't give a shit how the guy looks in the sex scenes It doesn't affect my enjoyment as long as the woman is hot that's all that matters to me. Plus it gives some realism, you think all these old businessmen are going to be hot young guys or something?

 

[Afma]

Android?

 

[Fazed]

Lol well I guess people have different opinions on this, personally I couldn't give a shit how the guy looks in the sex scenes It doesn't affect my enjoyment as long as the woman is hot that's all that matters to me. Plus it gives some realism, you think all these old businessmen are going to be hot young guys or something?

No I don't but they don't have to be ugly as hell either. It is legit a porn trope that some people actually enjoy though. Just look at how many ugly bastard/creepy old man hentai exists. You might not care either way, and that's fine, but they are half the interaction in the scene so of course somebody is going to take notice of it.
Also...realism? In this game? Man, I didnt know that 8 out of 10 guys are likely to be sex predator just waiting for a woman dumb enough to simply exist within a 5 foot radius of them. The scenarios in this game are laughably convenient and ridiculous. It's not realistic at all lol.

 

[Losersriot]

Hi guys!
Ok, so the game is up here already!

Feedback time,
1. How was the update overall?
2. what improvements can be made?
3. What's lacking?
4. How's was the action?
5. What was the best part according to you?
6. How was the writing in the update?
7. Was the length of the update good enough?
8. The last one, did you like Gail's tits pushed up in the pink dress?


and you can definitely add more stuff in the comment, likes and dislikes about the game so I can further work on it...
let me know what you guys think about this update


Thank you !!!

1. How was the update overall? ][ 11/10 MAGNIFFICENT!
2. what improvements can be made? ][ MORE romantice with black businessman in bantley car and evening routs!!!!
3. What's lacking?][ EMOTION, sensitivity, hugs and kisses, ROMANTICE RELATIONSHIPS
4. How's was the action?][ Exellent
5. What was the best part according to you?][ Date with house owner in his car and diner and... his watch (Rolex!)!
6. How was the writing in the update?][ I dont care, i use translator3000
7. Was the length of the update good enough?][ TOOOO SHOOORT!!!
8. The last one, did you like Gail's tits pushed up in the pink dress?][ Gale is Iem. I like MY body, but i want something else. Emotional ADULT expiriense. Game include many prepuberty crap like blowjob in car or little priks in restaurant.

 

[RottenPlum]

I saw Theo groping and kissing scene inside her office in img folder, how to get that scene? Started from 0.3 and enabled max corruption and other stats and it still skips that.
After enabling only max corruption i could see rest of the scenes, it's kinda shame she can't be also slutty for her boyfriend because choosing girlfriend points locks some of the scenes while at the same time still enabled other ones that require corruption.

 

[lookthesea]

you newer seen book? If you had read at least one book, you would have noticed the same thing. This is a NOVEL.

A book does not means no sounds,ok? Have you heard about audio book? I just share my opinions,and I do believe it will up a new level if the developer added sounds in.

 

[Miss Kobayashi's]

I really liked the game at first I thought that everything would be banal like in other games, but no, the plot went in a good direction and the developer makes the game with a soul and loves it very much and everything is perfectly drawn and done conscientiously, success and a lot of fans for him

 

[ezequiel02]

Can I change this in the game in the last update? I did not set them in the right way at the beginning

I have the same issue here, anyone knows a way to change the relationship settings in game?

 

[dolfe67]

I have the same issue here, anyone knows a way to change the relationship settings in game?

There is a way with Unren. If you don't know what it is, it'll be easier to restart a game

 

[Pogo123]

Hi guys!
Ok, so the game is up here already!

Feedback time,
1. How was the update overall?
2. what improvements can be made?
3. What's lacking?
4. How's was the action?
5. What was the best part according to you?
6. How was the writing in the update?
7. Was the length of the update good enough?
8. The last one, did you like Gail's tits pushed up in the pink dress?


and you can definitely add more stuff in the comment, likes and dislikes about the game so I can further work on it...
let me know what you guys think about this update


Thank you !!!

hey there ^^
1. the update was really solid! good amount, nice renders as always, glad to see gail again nice outfits, just not interested in most characters in this update and there the scenes mostly but still enjoyed it to see gail in those
2. this is VERY subjective so i don't want to influence you in that i have a few things i would like to see way more than other stuff but gameplaywise i am totally happy cause its not too complex, you have not too quick sexual stuff but also don't have to wait several updates for stuff happening, no fighting, good dialogues, you can skip older content - smooth!
3. maybe eventually more deeper/serious choices? different kink paths you can choose/avoid? thats all for me personally
4. solid
5. dinner was sweet but i enjoyed boss scene the most as always
6. very solid in my opinion
7. yes. i think an update can't be long enough if its a game with a mc girl like gail, i wished some scenes would be shorter (taxi scene) and some longer (boss scene) but overall solid length!
8. YES did chose the pink aswell

9. thx that there is less bf content (taxi driver looked like aged boss of gail lol xD and i wish there would have been a scene with the truck driver and not the two boys but thats again personal pref ofc)

 

[critter]

I found a wrong animation of a car-footjob between picture 2074 and 2075 in the restaurant-scene with Noah and the two bullies.