VN Ren'Py Onhold The Office [Ep. 3 v0.3] [Damaged Coda]

[Gr8Dumper]

Excellent update! He put in a lot of work into this one.

 

[lookthesea]

what a shame without any sounds

 

[Losersriot]

what a shame without any sounds

you newer seen book? If you had read at least one book, you would have noticed the same thing. This is a NOVEL.

 

[leffs]

It took quite a long time to release this update but the time payed off. Very good in general.

 

[javikaston]

Excellent update! He put in a lot of work into this one.

goto his discord and suggest that to him

 

[m3nic]

what do you like the most about it and what do you like the least so far ?

We play as Gail here and MC could choice between corruption path and lovely girl friend path. So we can be free to take this game where we want to go . Thats way this more interesting for me.

 

[Sadowdark]

I NEVER trusted Grace. I think she's the most dangerous. A lying schemer and manipulator. The first time I saw her, I hated her. So what? My doubts turned out to be correct! What kind of clothes did she bring me, supposedly wanting to help!?

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In my opinion, we should have a choice here to whom Grace will bring what clothes, it would be much more interesting.

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[jackozwell1]

This MC is basically my perfect woman this games amazing. Also I never understood the complaint about ugly male characters in games like these, like why do you care? your eyes should be on the MC or other female characters 99% of the time anyway?

 

[DamagedCoda]

Hi guys!
Ok, so the game is up here already!

Feedback time,
1. How was the update overall?
2. what improvements can be made?
3. What's lacking?
4. How's was the action?
5. What was the best part according to you?
6. How was the writing in the update?
7. Was the length of the update good enough?
8. The last one, did you like Gail's tits pushed up in the pink dress?


and you can definitely add more stuff in the comment, likes and dislikes about the game so I can further work on it...
let me know what you guys think about this update


Thank you !!!

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

Hi guys!
Ok, so the game is up here already!

Feedback time,
1. How was the update overall?
2. what improvements can be made?
3. What's lacking?
4. How's was the action?
5. What was the best part according to you?
6. How was the writing in the update?
7. Was the length of the update good enough?
8. The last one, did you like Gail's tits pushed up in the pink dress?


and you can definitely add more stuff in the comment, likes and dislikes about the game so I can further work on it...
let me know what you guys think about this update


Thank you !!!

1- overall it was a decent 7/10 rating
2- work on the details, improve the dialogue and the plot
3- a bit of plot is missing and the consequences of the choices made previously, I think we need a more ramified and articulated plot
4- not always a lot of action makes the game better, the corruption was too fast
5- the best part was in the office with theo, the worst part was in the taxi and bus, totally meaningless and unreal
6- sufficient writing
7- good duration
8- disliked boobs, I keep saying that the proportions of the body are too exaggerated

 

[Yuri_Boyka666]

Hi guys!
Ok, so the game is up here already!

Feedback time,
1. How was the update overall?
2. what improvements can be made?
3. What's lacking?
4. How's was the action?
5. What was the best part according to you?
6. How was the writing in the update?
7. Was the length of the update good enough?
8. The last one, did you like Gail's tits pushed up in the pink dress?


and you can definitely add more stuff in the comment, likes and dislikes about the game so I can further work on it...
let me know what you guys think about this update


Thank you !!!

1. 7/10 just coz of plot and story

2. Improve the delay in updates please and also the plot it escalated too quickly at some point (the cab and bus scene)

3. Lack of character building and story kinda change I think your vision is changed its not the same as you started in previous 2 chapters

4. Action was okay also the cat fight in the office (although some previous chapter 2 actions doesn't follow up with chapter 3 for instance if Gail denies for dinner with frank still in further story the dinner is locked and happening fix that please)

5. The Boss (Hugo) Scenes was good as a start for further story and also the frank (landlord)route but it doesn't add up with her bold action in cab and bus

6. It's mixture of good and bad at different situation some of the writing is wrong specifically in those 2 dresses where it's bra vs underwear

7. Length was good but not that good for so much months that took to update the game

8. Okay if you like it that way but don't need to add 2 dresses with same scene but different fetishes Ik still it kinda took you more renders and it's like scamming us with saying 1000 + renders biggest update where most of it was same repeated dialogues for both fetishes (my suggestion is don't add such dresses scene for now what you can do is when you are done with the game in future you can add those things later as a add on just my opinion learn form other devs like "Heaven studios" they did the same and if you want charge for extra later in future when whole game is completed but as a bonus



Also don't atleast make the people who paid wait so long it's not fair and please work on those goals as well I saw you funds was down coz you delayed the updates on patreon few 100 $ were reduced try to keep up with the subscribers and not just teaser but some possibilities of when you will update it ,Rest of the things you are doing great

Thank you for listening and some of us were worried that something happened to you DamagedCoda keep the audience updated take care and make us surprised with your further magic in the game

 

[Darknesssilent]

and you can definitely add more stuff in the comment, likes and dislikes about the game so I can further work on it...
let me know what you guys think about this update

If your plan was to turn Gail into a cocksleeve then remove the faithful path and and the fake choices you have given us. turn the game into a Kn and write your story but as of right now the choices don't change much besides the bus and cab and let us get rid of the stupid boyfriend cause my god hes an idiot. all i really have to say tell the paths are diffent and have meaningful chioces on both paths where they are not the same paths then this game is going to be getting alot of hate.

 

[Gerson876]

I'm definitely not good enough to be a critic, but I will just say what I observed

1. How was the update overall?

Maybe 7.5/10
It's bcoz I feel like 7 is a bit low and 8 is a bit high.

2. what improvements can be made?

I think bringing in some close characters who can be there for more than 1 scene would be much better than strangers for every teasing scenes like how you brought in theo (Maybe Gail's friends/long lost crush or Boyfriend's friends).

What's lacking?

I think it's lacking a good relationship build other than the boyfriend.

How's was the action?

I totally loved the catfight

What was the best part according to you?

It is the catfight and the dinner event. Those backgrounds and details was really amazing.

6. How was the writing in the update?

Writing was fair to me but I can't say much cause English isn't my first language.

7. Was the length of the update good enough?

It was good enough until I was the dinner event. I thought there will be different set of scenes when you said branches, but that was disappointing.

8. The last one, did you like Gail's tits pushed up in the pink dress?

When you showed it in the teaser I thought it was too much but then I really liked it in the game.
But in the Bus teasing scene, I think there was a noticeable difference in the size of left and right boob.

 

[seif19]

Hi guys!
Ok, so the game is up here already!

Feedback time,
1. How was the update overall?
2. what improvements can be made?
3. What's lacking?
4. How's was the action?
5. What was the best part according to you?
6. How was the writing in the update?
7. Was the length of the update good enough?
8. The last one, did you like Gail's tits pushed up in the pink dress?


and you can definitely add more stuff in the comment, likes and dislikes about the game so I can further work on it...
let me know what you guys think about this update


Thank you !!!

her tits looked great in the pink dress for sure. decent update i still think this can be one of the best games of all time by the time it finishes. My notes about the new update is i think there were so many unnecessary sequences like the one in the car. She also instantly became the biggest slut in the universe i feel like before it was only whatever she had to do to climb the ladder but this update she wanted to do whatever just because. hoping for some more penetration sex with characters that aren't childish and annoying, like paul and the landlord. I also can't wait to see her bring dave back home, i feel like her relationship with david is the best one yet. She's totally getting dominated by him like when she rimmed him and ate his spit. I liked that. All in all still a great game and i will always support the project and hoping for more updates more frequently since i really think this game has the highest potential by a mile compared to other pure female protagonist games. good job damaged coda

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

Hi guys!
Ok, so the game is up here already!

Feedback time,
1. How was the update overall?
2. what improvements can be made?
3. What's lacking?
4. How's was the action?
5. What was the best part according to you?
6. How was the writing in the update?
7. Was the length of the update good enough?
8. The last one, did you like Gail's tits pushed up in the pink dress?


and you can definitely add more stuff in the comment, likes and dislikes about the game so I can further work on it...
let me know what you guys think about this update


Thank you !!!

Ok my feedback on the update
1 overall I would give it a solid 8 out of 10

2 for improvements to the game, think you needquicker updates, even if they are little smaller, less talking on frank date and more teasing and action

3 needed more action in this update, too much teasing not enough pleasing. I know some people complain aboutGail being slutty, but that’s based on our choices, if she’s being slutty it’s cause I picked those choices

4 needed more action in this update for me, the renders are beautiful but think you could have cut half thedate dialogue out and something should have happened with the waiter or the valet. She could have flashed him under the table rubbed her heel on hisface, it was missing some mischief

5 best action to me was the cat fight and Hugo with Gail in his office also would like the body guard to join in the fun. Lucky fat kid on the bus, very daring, don’t know how they didn’t get caught. Maybe next time she can hj or bj him. Cab ride was good but those losers can’t aim their cumshots

6 writing was fine for me, except too much dialogue at their dinner date

7 length of update was adequate but needed more action, wanted to see Noah go a little further with Gail, maybe those bully’s bother him again that they need to more proof like Noah grabbing her tits and ass and her grabbing his cock &they keep progressing for more each update

8 Gail’s body is perfect I wouldn’t change a thing

 

[Sadowdark]

Hi guys!
Ok, so the game is up here already!

Feedback time,
1. How was the update overall?
2. what improvements can be made?
3. What's lacking?
4. How's was the action?
5. What was the best part according to you?
6. How was the writing in the update?
7. Was the length of the update good enough?
8. The last one, did you like Gail's tits pushed up in the pink dress?


and you can definitely add more stuff in the comment, likes and dislikes about the game so I can further work on it...
let me know what you guys think about this update


Thank you !!!

1. 6+/10
2.More choices
update the galleries.
i want to know what i have miss
e.g, In my opinion, we should have a choice here to whom Grace will bring what clothes, it would be much more interesting. It is known to whom Grace will bring which clothes. This is terribly predictable. So that Gail wouldn't dress like a whore all the time
3. a bit of plot is missing and the consequences of the choices made previously, I think we need a more ramified and articulated plot
4. not always a lot of action makes the game better, the corruption was too fast
5.the best part was in the office, and when the women fought, worst part - bus, taxi,At the restaurant with my aunt, In the toilet with a T-shirt
6.sufficient writing
7.good duration
8.Too big tits

 

[Yuri_Boyka666]

1. 6+/10
2.More choices e.g, In my opinion, we should have a choice here to whom Grace will bring what clothes, it would be much more interesting. It is known to whom Grace will bring which clothes. This is terribly predictable. So that Gail wouldn't dress like a whore all the time
3. a bit of plot is missing and the consequences of the choices made previously, I think we need a more ramified and articulated plot
4. not always a lot of action makes the game better, the corruption was too fast
5.the best part was in the office, and when the women fought, worst part - bus, taxi,restaurant
6.sufficient writing
7.good duration
8.Too big tits

You must be a friend of PietruccioTheHilander as you copied and altered his feedback just saying it was funny though

 

[Eucalyptuz]

Honestly such good renders!

 

[Sadowdark]

You must be a friend of PietruccioTheHilander as you copied and altered his feedback just saying it was funny though

How do I agree on the same things then what?

 

[Yuri_Boyka666]

How do I agree on the same things then what?

Then I feel most of our feedback is kinda 80 % similar right so it will be good for Dev to work on it it's a win win for everyone