VN Ren'Py Onhold The Path [v0.1a] [LeFrench]

[SpyderArachnid]

Not bad. Usually not into fantasy games, but this one seems pretty good. Though like primoo said, she jumped pretty quick to lusting after the Orc after just meeting him and then masturbating right there. Same with getting topless and basically naked in front of him. At least give us choices for that kind of stuff. I'd rather not go full slut mode right away.

Maybe build up to it first, instead of making the MC a horndog straight from the beginning. I personally prefer more storytelling than just straight up smut for the sake of having it.

Otherwise, it seems pretty decent so far. Interested to see where this goes and meet the other party members that will eventually join up with them. Thanks for your work.

 

[Zedire]

Very nice game LeFrench! I am already a fan. I like the Orc/Human romance point a lot and these games are hard to come by. One thing that would be nice to see would be to make our female protagonist less slutty/lusty for an Orc. That was the thing that threw me off.
Maybe this is a new trend you're starting haha but it definitely threw me off and I would like her to be subdued in a traditional sense and not just willingly want to be with him.

In a realistic sense, no woman is wanting that traditionally. However some persuasion and brainwashing and trickery can definitely happen.

I agree with almost everything you said, although for myself, personally, I'd like the option for the MC to want the Orc due to growing curiosity and/or attraction to him (and probably subconsciously for the forbidden/ "perverse" nature of it) as she gets to know him during her travels, rather then being manipulated or tricked into it like 95% of other games out there.
Again, I have nothing against other people preferring trickery and there being a route for that, I'd just prefer having options for a more authentic route to the romance and sex, for those of us who like that kind of thing. Something consensual.

 

[kuaijie01]

nice

 

[Grozar]

Hope you will add bunch of goblins to join the fun

 

[Zedire]

I see what you guys mean. All I can say is the Orc/Human definitely belong on a dark lustful path as Nash has absolutely no interest in female human physique so she has to make the move.

I'm pretty curious: What sort of physique is Nash interested in, or rather, assuming that he may find a female orc's physique pleasing, how different would that be from a female human, besides being taller and a fair bit more muscular?
I get not wanting to have the orc all over the human female the moment he sees her - if not because of his personality and him having other priorities, than because it's refreshing from the norm - and I know developing feelings can make you find someone attractive in a way you didn't see them before, thus developing an interest in her body (and if that's the case it makes sense). But idk, It's a little hard to envision a convincing romance and sex path if the guy isn't at all physically attracted to her/her body.
Unless I'm missing something (which may well be the case)?

 

[Ifartedtoolong]

Maybe he's only interested in the male physique.

 

[primoo357]

I agree with almost everything you said, although for myself, personally, I'd like the option for the MC to want the Orc due to growing curiosity and/or attraction to him (and probably subconsciously for the forbidden/ "perverse" nature of it) as she gets to know him during her travels, rather then being manipulated or tricked into it like 95% of other games out there.
Again, I have nothing against other people preferring trickery and there being a route for that, I'd just prefer having options for a more authentic route to the romance and sex, for those of us who like that kind of thing. Something consensual.

I'm a bit on the fence too. I agree with you that the romance option can be a very organic and natural, consensual thing to develop between this odd pairing. But then again from what I saw... it felt like she was the most lewdest chick on the face of the Earth and so lustful lol... IDK
And the Orc was aloof to what was going on. You'd think the roles would be reversed but I don't know. Maybe this is a fresh take on a direction that I never knew existed?

Either way I'm definitely looking forward to the updates. The high-quality renders were just amazing and thank GOD it's not another goblin game. Sick and tired of green dwarves thinking they run shit lol!

 

[Ifartedtoolong]

Well she's horny as she was going to be fucking whoever her partner was that night but they ran off with all of the loot. Hopefully we'll be able to run into them again and kick their ass.

 

[BunnygirlBoobies]

Might wanna watch out, you might have to change the name if it gets too big...

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[Zedire]

lol uuuh... I don't want to spoil too much, but Orcs in my lore only like one thing in a female.

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Oooh okay, that sounds pretty intriguing (and rather kinky)! It's cool you're putting a lot of thought into this rather then just making it yet another porn game with the same over-used tropes. I'll definately be keeping an eye on this one, and looking forward to it!

 

[FMag]

This is a demo, so the purpose should be to show the game's potential. I played it and here's my impression:

I agree on the full slut mode, I'm not a fuck-fest fan, so having a gradual and consistent progress might be more enjoyable.
The renders are very nice and there are some well done animations (definitely a plus)
It reminds me "Alenja's adventure", which could have been a great game, but after the remastered thing and the lack of action I lost interest, so now I'm hoping this game will not follow the same path.

With this kind of games what is really important are the dev's decisions: the reasoned relationship between the orc and the protagonist is surely a sign of good structure for example.
I'll wait to see what kind of adventures and creatures she will encounter; personally I wouldn't exclude goblins or others weird characters.

 

[primoo357]

Bump! Juno is a goddamn heaven-sent. Amazing renders as usual man!

 

[FMag]

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Sixth and Last Character Reveal: Cpt. Beatrix

This character is very dear to me, weeks of small tweaks for that never-ending search for perfection.

She will arrive a bit later in the story. I am making it so because by the time she joins the team, relationships will already be set for some time and that is something she doesn't give a damn about. If you ever think, over the course of events that our protagonist is too forward or lusty (she isn't meant to be the demo was an exception).

Well... buckle up.

There is no control over her actions. Choices will be there of course but the consequences are unpredictable. No means yes basically.

I saved my best for last, I hope you will like her because I do. Very much.

Thank you for your support and Au revoir !!

-LeFrench

PS: Oh and Rum... lots of Rum, in-game and IRL when posing her future scenes.

Surely she looks very realistic: the last picture looks like a real photo, so in my opinion you hit the target.

 

[locoraptus_69]

Seems interesting. I've seem some people complain that they want "more story" and not to go "slut mode", but fuck that, I love games that go straight to the point.
I'm more into horny Orcs as well, but let's see what you manage to do with this not so lustful Orc, here's hoping to another great monsters vs hot girls game, good luck.

 

[Scholomance]

I see what you guys mean. All I can say is the Orc/Human definitely belong on a dark lustful path as Nash has absolutely no interest in female human physique so she has to make the move. It will slowly evolve into a romance between two warriors but that path will also descend pretty deep in depravity, or not it's all choices.

Great to see the 'or not' included, depending on the choices made. This is what adds depth to the experience instead of making everything stereotypical or otherwise not giving the player any real impact on the narrative choices.

That scene in the demo was spontaneous indeed haha. I had to crank up the speed for the demo's sake.
Things will be a little slower-paced from now on but not too much, I'm a player too and I want none of this blue-balling crap.

Looks like a truly beautiful visual novel from the demo, even if parts were sped up for the sake of it. As long as the style remains the same, as that is what we're judging the future upon. Looking forward to seeing more!

 

[Ifartedtoolong]

I'm fine with the orc Juno looks hot if the young wizard is the dude in the background doing that green spell or whatever it is I'll be ignoring them though.

 

[OrcDra]

That was pretty nice! Hope to see more soon.

 

[FMag]

Great use of lights and shadows

 

[Ahmet Kaufman-Katz]

Hey dev, you're doing quite cool so far. The renders are fine, the dialogues are just long enough for immersion yet brief enough to not get bored. Godspeed!

 

[Ahmet Kaufman-Katz]

Any chance there will be pregnancy-related content or endings?