First of all, WOW. The renders in this game are fantastic. The character models look amazing, the various scenes are interesting and detailed, and it really helps the world come alive. You and your team have outdone yourself in this regard. Although there are some inconsistencies with the detail level of various character models, you’ve mentioned it is being actively worked on and will change in the next chapter. I cannot wait to see what that will look like, as the game is already looking stunning.
I was initially hesitant to download this game. I do not often enjoy AVNs in the fantasy setting, as the imaginative worlds often ends up feeling lackluster, but this game does not suffer that fate. The world you have built seem well thought out, with the various realms and their major and minor clans/houses, as well as their history. A rich world really helps the story feel alive and you’ve outdone yourself here. It never felt like porn with filler dialogue, rather a story with naughty bits.
The characters are beautifully written and they all, for a lack of better words, feel unique. They all have their strengths, and they all have their flaws. Ley, being compassionate to a fault; Kali, struggling to control her anger and let go of the past; and Naya, battling her insecurities despite her strength.
I understand that this is not something everyone necessarily agree with, but the only "criticism" I have is that the MC is a little bit too emotionally detached from the main love interest. Yes, realistically speaking, there would not be much emotion left in a person after living through several millennia of wars, death, and court-like behavior. I understand that that is the MC’s character flaw. However, from a player point of view, the MC just ends up feeling a little… hollow?
The game is heavily centered around the bond and its loving nature, yet the most prominent emotion the MC shows is callousness. I miss cooing. I miss endearment. The scene where the MC and Ley are taking a swim together, and they have the stereotypical “would you still be with me if [stupid scenario]” talk – I miss more of that.
Please don't get me wrong - it does not make the MC insufferable or off-putting by any standard, and it did get better throughout chapter 2 (with the confession and the aforementioned bath scene). Also, these are my preferences. I totally understand if that is not what you're going for here. Me actually giving a shit about this just shows that the characters are well-written and easy to feel for!
Overall, you and your team have spoiled us with visual quality and compelling characters. This game is fantastic, and with a developer so engaged in his community, this game looks to have a bright future as well. Looking forward to the next chapter!
