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VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Sinful City Fight for Love [v0.4] [Peacemaker]

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REALLY DEVELOPER, i tried no to burn you but was impossible, i has downloaded the 3 faaaaking files already 2 times on a day , patched as, people were saying here, BUT NOPE CANT even pass from the first update 0.25, and yes i has already tried all the choices to follow on that one, such awful way to update a game NEVER SEEM BEFORE


WORSE TO WORSE he think he is doing a favor cause we dont had to download too much , puuf

give me a file of 30 gb 4k that i can play, and i will merry , but this piece of buggy crap that WE DONE KNOW WHAT ROUTE FOLLOW

to go from 0.25 to 0.3 what to do ? any idea ? what is the right path on this riddle.

AND I AM even using 4 hours the x51 file to watch options but nope it kick me nicely on the balls at the end on the 0.25

WHAT A MESS .
If this game is this buggy and annoying, I might ignore it. I downloaded the game recently and still haven't played it yet. Is it worth the time?:unsure:
 

Steinchen

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If this game is this buggy and annoying, I might ignore it. I downloaded the game recently and still haven't played it yet. Is it worth the time?:unsure:
no it is not buggy that is not the problem.
the initial release has 12 gb and every update comes as singel version,and you need to have the initial release and then download every single update,and update the game in the right order to get to the actual version.
i loved the initial release,but at some place the branching of the pathes beginns and then it gets complicated.
from that point on it´s difficult to find the new content when an update gets out.
and if you not play all the pathes you miss some story elements.
and not all pathes are available and some choices for the pathes not finished are not available.
and how i understand it you probably need to start over for every branch/path your taking.
don´t know if its from the start or from some point in the game TBH.

read a few pages back in here there is a lot of explaining there.
 
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GrannyJuices

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Whoever thought it was a good idea to make the download system this way is actually retarded. Especially if the base download (0.25) doesn't automatically go to the most recent version with a single patch. What happens when the game reaches 0.7, new players are going to have to download 7 different files or what? Shit's just annoying.
 

Acsuka

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No one has mentioned that Abbi was fingering her urethra while giving MC a BJ? Uhh dev you might want to do some anatomy research or watch some porn before making these animations
At first I didn't really understand what you were talking about... Now I got to this scene and WTF... :ROFLMAO:

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Kekpepa

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at first, i don't know why it's 0.40 and still did not have even a briefly walkthourgh yet. now i know.
 

billybob2010

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when he went down on abbie she squirted, then when he entered the back door, and she cum, they said it was her first orgasm, but she had one before that.
 
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trumpthatbitch

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I thought this game would be worth a follow considering it's size but it's 11gb and around 15mins on the path I choose. Here is where the dev makes the classic mistake he assumes players want to play 10-15 paths we don't. We want content not running around editing the rpy files trying to figure out howto get on a path where the content is.
 

sergerserj

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Yea... This game path system still one big mess. I genuinely don't understand what Dev doing... Ruining his own game, I guess...
 

sigvar

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At first I didn't really understand what you were talking about... Now I got to this scene and WTF... :ROFLMAO:

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WTF, indeed! That's not how that works. That's not how any of this works!!!

--edit--
Also, I thought that some of the dialog was strange, but most of it seemed ok. I couldn't tell if it was weirdly translated or not but I couldn't really tell.

First of all, if you did a find and replace and changed every then to than, you would have a good chance to get more correct than not. I don't understand why they get switched around so damn often and almost consistently. Than and then are not the same word!

Then again, that probably is just someone that doesn't know how to spell or is trying to get something posted quicker, rather than proofreading their work. (btw, see how they are supposed to be used there?)

Of course I basically have to assume it was the later, rather than (not then) the former when I came across the option in the studio: "sucom to your primal desires". Seriously, sucom? I can't type that out without being assaulted by the red squiggly lines in the editor here!

Normally I have to suggest to a developer on here to please get a proper translator. In this case, just type this out in any mediocre word processor if you can't be bothered to proofread your script.

--edit 2--
God damn it, I go further and I am greeted by even more 'prose': "So pross and cones"!

Alright, I give up. Some of the words being incorrect can be attributed to passing a spell check but not fitting. Like that quote just now. Cones is spelled correctly, even though it is not the word that should be there. The visuals, poses and animations are a cut above a lot of the games on this site, but the presentation of the script invalidates and detracts from any of that.

If you have a writer, please get another. If you don't, please get one. You have some good potential with this game, but it is extremely rough and will not succeed the way it is going now.
 
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bobdillan

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Damn, that's taking NTR paranoia to a new level, even for this board. This game is not Summer with Mia, for goodness sake.
Where did I say the game was NTR for having it... I said it was a poor choice for an easter egg because that game is NTR.
 

Slickjack

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WTF, indeed! That's not how that works. That's not how any of this works!!!

--edit--
Also, I thought that some of the dialog was strange, but most of it seemed ok. I couldn't tell if it was weirdly translated or not but I couldn't really tell.

First of all, if you did a find and replace and changed every then to than, you would have a good chance to get more correct than not. I don't understand why they get switched around so damn often and almost consistently. Than and then are not the same word!

Then again, that probably is just someone that doesn't know how to spell or is trying to get something posted quicker, rather than proofreading their work. (btw, see how they are supposed to be used there?)

Of course I basically have to assume it was the later, rather than (not then) the former when I came across the option in the studio: "sucom to your primal desires". Seriously, sucom? I can't type that out without being assaulted by the red squiggly lines in the editor here!

Normally I have to suggest to a developer on here to please get a proper translator. In this case, just type this out in any mediocre word processor if you can't be bothered to proofread your script.

--edit 2--
God damn it, I go further and I am greeted by even more 'prose': "So pross and cones"!

Alright, I give up. Some of the words being incorrect can be attributed to passing a spell check but not fitting. Like that quote just now. Cones is spelled correctly, even though it is not the word that should be there. The visuals, poses and animations are a cut above a lot of the games on this site, but the presentation of the script invalidates and detracts from any of that.

If you have a writer, please get another. If you don't, please get one. You have some good potential with this game, but it is extremely rough and will not succeed the way it is going now.

I found the language usage in the .40 update really strange, as well.

In defense of the developer, he is not a native speaker of English and may not speak the language at all. He has used someone or some-bot to translate it into English and has acquired the use of a proofreader for previous installments of the VN. While I was unimpressed by the proofreader in my previously posted opinion of the ver 0.30 release, the 0.40 release was several degrees worse as far as language usage is concerned. I noticed you didn't even mention the use of "gland" for the anatomically correct "glans" or other poor choices. This should not be laid at the feet of the English-challenged Dev. I recall saying, previously, that the proofreader needed to up his game but I thought with just more commitment on the proofreader's part he could avoid snarky comments from people like me.

Of course, snarky comments from people like me represent the only way for the Dev to know whether the proofreader has done his job or not as the Dev has insufficient English proficiency to be able to make a knowledgeable judgement.

The 0.40 update was really no more than a continuation of a single scene begun in previous update. Had the player not followed the correct path in his previous choices, I don't believe he would have had any meaningful update at all. The renders were stunning, the language was poor, and there was no effort to fill in the previous "WIP" paths. In the grand scheme of things, should Peacemaker manage to complete the VN, this update will merely meld into all of the things that went before the finale. However, I can sympathize with players who did not follow the path to wind up in the photography studio with Abbie.

As it seems Peacemaker has designed the VN to require multiple playthroughs to benefit from all of his content, I would hope that he would now shift his focus to the "WIP" paths.

- sj
 

sigvar

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... I noticed you didn't even mention the use of "gland" for the anatomically correct "glans" or other poor choices. This should not be laid at the feet of the English-challenged Dev. ...

- sj
Yeah, I did notice that, but on this site I have gotten used to mentally auto-correcting quite a bit. There are a lot of non-English speaking devs that use auto-translate tools that don't really do that well, so things like that example I usually just suffer through. The level of misspelling I had started to run into had nothing to do with some auto-translate tool. It was so egregious that my internal auto-correcting couldn't keep up. Once in a scene or two is not good, and definitely should only happen in a beta release, but what was happening was every other slide.

I couldn't take it anymore. Which is frustrating, because the story, MC, LIs, art, etc. all were pretty good, as I said. It bothers me more than some other games that are so completely garbage throughout all categories because with them, I can see there is nothing worth even bothering with.

This guy seriously just needs a good writer and translator. Even what is being said in the dialog is ok if the spelling, grammar and structure was on point.
 
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