VN Ren'Py The Singer [v0.75 Part 2] [IntensiveCareGames]

[Firaxius]

My man... I need to make money. I make my living through this game.

You are right, it after all your time spend on making it, so they should be patient and support you either mentally and if can't wait then they should support your financialy, you make a great game that is worth its money.

 

[yakargi]

Do any of you guys use a MAC and have Steam installed? I'd like to ask a couple of questions...

 

[0000000nowhere]

You know, it's bad enough when NTR games boil down to "Do you also want to cheat or just get cucked?", but in this case, you don't even control who MC ends up sleeping with half the time

Now, I don't feel like leaving a negative review, but I'll say this: had this game offered the option to get rewarded for resisting temptation (on both sides) instead of merely the illusion of choice, it would most likely have gotten a much better reception.

 

[ashitanojoe]

Excellent answer! I will take note of what you wrote. Thanks!

Visuals aren't everything, you should not take Stoper as an example, his numbers aren't even that impressive. Innocence or money has worse visuals by far and has 1000 patrons more than Stoper, starting later. How that dev did it? He launched the first versions of his game in Steam for free (that way he got a lot of players) and got the patrons from there, if they want to play the new versions, they must support him. Here the most of the people are pirates, they will not support you, in Steam happens the opposite.

I haven't played your game, but I already saw some flaws:

- The banner of your page here it's not favorable, despite of the good quality, the most of the people don't want to see the desire fruit (the girl) hugged by a man. It's better to show her alone in a sexy pose.

- Your Steam page can be improved:

The trailer looks pretty amateurish. The title logo isn't bad but you shouldn't show it more than 5 seconds (you are showing it 15 seconds at the beginning, too long). Put the clips in full frame, don't crop them as you did. You just put random clips in the trailer, you should tell the players in few sentences what they are going to play too. Freshwomen is the most successful adult VN in steam, you should watch their trailer

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Regarding a female protagonist game, Steps Debauchery is doing it very professional too

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Take them as examples.

The banners and previews are better with a background and not with an empty black or gray space as you have them.

This is a lot better

than this

- It seems like you didn't do a good launching in Steam, you should tell your patrons and fans to write reviews of your game in steam since the first day, that's very important to get more visibility. You only have 5 reviews so far.

- An important way to succeed in steam is to put your game available in several languages. Freshwomen is available in 15 languages, SOD in 10 and Innocence or Money in 30. The dev asked their patrons to make the translations. You could reward the translators with free copies of your game and bonus renders, for example, as if they were top tiers.

- I also read some reviews here talking about the engrish in your game. You should have a proofreader then.

- The beginning of the game is hugely important, if the story isn't clear and not enganging since the start, the people who already played it and don't like it aren't going to play it again, it doesn't matter that much that you release frequent updates of the game. If you have flaws there, you should correct them. Stoper doesn't have support just because of his beautiful renders, he works with an experienced erotic writer to help him.

- Regarding the banners, if you aren't very good with them you could ask for help here in f95zone https://f95zone.to/threads/gfx-request-thread.57341/ You should ask for permission to use them in steam.

 

[mikoko67]

yo,

just bought ur game. I said earlier that it wasnt exactly my kind of game (mainly because the main girl is getting too slutty for my taste (i prefer when male are "in control" if u know what i mean) and the main male caracter has no logic (why is it that everygirl are into him???) BUT, you keep giving nice and regular update.
So congratz

 

[yakargi]

Visuals aren't everything, you should not take Stoper as an example, his numbers aren't even that impressive. Innocence or money has worse visuals by far and has 1000 patrons more than Stoper, starting later. How that dev did it? He launched the first versions of his game in Steam for free (that way he got a lot of players) and got the patrons from there, if they want to play the new versions, they must support him. Here the most of the people are pirates, they will not support you, in Steam happens the opposite.

I haven't played your game, but I already saw some flaws:

- The banner of your page here it's not favorable, despite of the good quality, the most of the people don't want to see the desire fruit (the girl) hugged by a man. It's better to show her alone in a sexy pose.

- Your Steam page can be improved:

The trailer looks pretty amateurish. The title logo isn't bad but you shouldn't show it more than 5 seconds (you are showing it 15 seconds at the beginning, too long). Put the clips in full frame, don't crop them as you did. You just put random clips in the trailer, you should tell the players in few sentences what they are going to play too. Freshwomen is the most successful adult VN in steam, you should watch their trailer

You must be registered to see the links

Regarding a female protagonist game, Steps Debauchery is doing it very professional too

You must be registered to see the links

Take them as examples.

The banners and previews are better with a background and not with an empty black or gray space as you have them.

This is a lot better

than this

- It seems like you didn't do a good launching in Steam, you should tell your patrons and fans to write reviews of your game in steam since the first day, that's very important to get more visibility. You only have 5 reviews so far.

- An important way to succeed in steam is to put your game available in several languages. Freshwomen is available in 15 languages, SOD in 10 and Innocence or Money in 30. The dev asked their patrons to make the translations. You could reward the translators with free copies of your game and bonus renders, for example, as if they were top tiers.

- I also read some reviews here talking about the engrish in your game. You should have a proofreader then.

- The beginning of the game is hugely important, if the story isn't clear and not enganging since the start, the people who already played it and don't like it aren't going to play it again, it doesn't matter that much that you release frequent updates of the game. If you have flaws there, you should correct them. Stoper doesn't have support just because of his beautiful renders, he works with an experienced erotic writer to help him.

- Regarding the banners, if you aren't very good with them you could ask for help here in f95zone https://f95zone.to/threads/gfx-request-thread.57341/ You should ask for permission to use them in steam.

Thank you very much for taking such an interest.
Everything you wrote is true.
Yeah, I didn't get off to a good start on Steam. The visuals in the store... all the content in the store was done in a hurry. I used the material I had available. It will all be updated in the future.

Every day I'm improving, learning something new. My priority right now is grammar. I'm updating most of the dialog in the game.
A friend of mine corrected almost all of the dialog. But it takes time to transfer it to the game. In the next update "Engrish" will be fixed for the most part. I am also thinking of adding other languages.

 

[Big Rooster]

Thank you very much for taking such an interest.
Everything you wrote is true.
Yeah, I didn't get off to a good start on Steam. The visuals in the store... all the content in the store was done in a hurry. I used the material I had available. It will all be updated in the future.

Every day I'm improving, learning something new. My priority right now is grammar. I'm updating most of the dialog in the game.
A friend of mine corrected almost all of the dialog. But it takes time to transfer it to the game. In the next update "Engrish" will be fixed for the most part. I am also thinking of adding other languages.

Hey, Use

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. It's great and I've been using it for years.
Back story, I had a massive stroke, and it wiped out the

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region of my brain. Slowly I'm getting better but I still have a lot of problems writing. Finding Grammarly was a life changer for me. And best of all... It's FREE!

 

[yakargi]

Hey, Use

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. It's great and I've been using it for years.
Back story, I had a massive stroke, and it wiped out the

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region of my brain. Slowly I'm getting better but I still have a lot of problems writing. Finding Grammarly was a life changer for me. And best of all... It's FREE!

Oh dude! Get well soon!
If I remember correctly, you recommended grammarly before. Don't worry, that problem is almost solved. My friend fixed most of the dialogs. It will be added to the game in the next version. But there are 25,000 lines of dialog and I have to check them and import them into the game. So I have a lot of work.

 

[Big Rooster]

Oh dude! Get well soon!
If I remember correctly, you recommended grammarly before. Don't worry, that problem is almost solved. My friend fixed most of the dialogs. It will be added to the game in the next version. But there are 25,000 lines of dialog and I have to check them and import them into the game. So I have a lot of work.

Thank you,! You have made a great game.

 

[yakargi]

The Singer version 0.70


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Change log;

296 images

32 animations

Gallery updated.

Have fun!

 

[boulimanus]

Nice update. English still no ideal, not sure who your reader is (e.g Ria doesn't want to interview the news, they want to interview her).
But damn, I'm starting to miss some scenes now. Choices really starting to make an impact.
I've worked out the Thomas alone scene was related to the blackmail choice (which I hadn't picked before because I don't like those options) but how about the final scene? Didn't get it yet. EDIT: Got it, a simple choice
Also, too bad we don't see Michael's creampie. Ria's pussy full of cum is always a pretty sight. But it was a great scene nevertheless.

 

[Bob69]

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[Bmagada]

Thank you very much for taking such an interest.
Everything you wrote is true.
Yeah, I didn't get off to a good start on Steam. The visuals in the store... all the content in the store was done in a hurry. I used the material I had available. It will all be updated in the future.

Every day I'm improving, learning something new. My priority right now is grammar. I'm updating most of the dialog in the game.
A friend of mine corrected almost all of the dialog. But it takes time to transfer it to the game. In the next update "Engrish" will be fixed for the most part. I am also thinking of adding other languages.

Stay this humble and all will fall into place. You've already done better than most by doing the most basic thing most people miss, having a coherent story and a plan for where you want it to go. I've seen high render art be torn apart because the story just makes no sense....then come the rewrites. Most 4 year cycle games I've seen have everything progressively get better as the dev gets more experience.

 

[alyssssssssss]

One of the most beautiful updates, the game is progressing well, Ria has her beautiful career, double career, Singer and Prostitute, generally loves mature and ugly men, but with the particular very large endowment, on the contrary, MC, has found her right work and balance, now he has a great job, his boss is beautiful, the boss's daughter too, he fucks Angel the star, he fucks the beautiful barrista, plus for now he lives off the back of his friend with benefits Vicky, in her villa, well, dear Mc, better than this, these NTRs are the best, no drama, no humiliation, etc. just fun and sex, it's money, I prefer the closure of the story of the two friends with benefits as the final act, honestly Ria does what she has to for career and lust, while MC has a nice pool of women who love him, if I'm objective, Ria she doesn't have a man who sees her as a companion, but is seen only as a piece of meat, or a way to make money, whereas MC, quite the opposite, the women who revolve around him, love him, care a lot about him to have him close. MC beats Ria on the level of respect, MC is respected, Ria on the contrary is just used, but the new graphics are very nice, perhaps something to review on the shapes of the dicks, they could be designed a little better. Kudos to DEV for his product

 

[BeastMaster59]

One of the Games which Im supporting on Patreon, and this update was one of the best with her and the old man.

 

[grahegri]

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[pango173]

im impressed and i could cry because so much progress since last view but not even one MMF

 

[bloop___]

Gallery Unlocker ( TheSinger-0.70 )

 

[sin(α)]

im impressed and i could cry because so much progress since last view but not even one MMF

Well, it's a corruption game and dev has to save something for later. Anticipation and stuff.

Gallery Unlocker ( TheSinger-0.70 )

That's nice and all, but this game already has a gallery mod by hds666. Which was updated couple of minutes ago and is identical to the one you posted?

 

[NewTricks]

I would have liked to see the scene, but... umm... well...