VN Ren'Py The Singer [v0.75 Part 2] [IntensiveCareGames]

[BunnyBehaviour]

I love the concept! I did look that the post was first done at 2020, which I can assume was when this project first started.

That's the part I unfortunately dislike, no idea if the quality has improved in recent updates but I can't push myself past the basic and crude start of the story. Concept great! Execution AT THE START not my cup of tea (only got like a day and a half of the game).

If the game is higher quality later on then I guess I miss out and I hope maybe a rework is in place.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

At first glance, there appears to be a mistake early in the game, when Ted goes for a coffee just before starting work? If you choose not to take another coffee, Liz still puts two coffees on the counter, and when Ted queries this, she says the other one is for her. But when he later enters the Pizzeria, he's carrying two coffees, and proceeds to give one to Julia. Is this an error? Or is it a mechanism within the game, designed to prevent the player having zero relationship points with both Liz and Julia?

Later that day, Ted goes back to the coffee shop and admits that he bought the coffee for Julia, and Liz tells him she likes an honest guy ( which adds three relationship points for Liz). But of course you chose not to buy coffee for Julia, so how can Ted admit to something that he never did?

It's almost like the game is forcing you to make a positive choice for either Liz or Julia? Ultimately, Ted has to get naughty with one of them, and you can't choose for him not to?

 

[yakargi]

There's a mistake early in the game, when Ted goes for a coffee just before starting work. If you choose not to take another coffee, Liz still puts two coffees on the counter, and when Ted queries this, she says the other one is for her. But when he later enters the Pizzeria, he's carrying two coffees, and proceeds to give one to Julia. This surely is an error?

Thanks, I'm checking.

 

[single_guy_from_au]

It looks like in the last Instagram post Ria got confused and instead of taking of her shoes (in the shoe store), she is taking off her dress?!

 

[BrandonX13]

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0.75 p2

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Don't get me wrong, I really like this game. It's one of those I look forward to. But up until this update, I'd only played the Cheating Path, so I never really considered the choices in the game except from the perspective of that kind of relationship. So the problem I have with it now, is the Love Path, where the MC cheats on his girlfriend, whatever choices you make. Surely, if it's a true Love Path, you should be able to avoid cheating completely? If Ria cheats once, then she becomes a cheating bitch, whether the MC knows or not. But the MC can fuck Angel, Lizzy/Julia, Lily, Megan, Fiona and Jessica, and as long as Ria doesn't find out about it, it's somehow not classed as cheating, and we're still on the Love Path, which doesn't make a lot of sense to me. Yeah, later on in the game, you can stop the MC cheating. But by then he's already established himself as such a compulsive cheater, it's hard not think, if it was just down to him, he wouldn't think twice about doing it?

For it to be a true Love Path, the MC should be able to avoid having sex with everybody, but Ria. We're given the ability to choose for Ria, so why not the MC? This is another reason why I can't help feeling Ria is the MC, rather than Ted. Because you can make meaningful choices for her, that determine what kind of a person she becomes. But for Ted, for a large part of the game, you're just stuck with this really immature guy, who struggles to resist any kind of temptation. I mean, if they're on the Love Path, then they could still be moving towards an open relationship or swinging lifestyle, without the necessity of one or either of them having to cheat.

Now as I said before, I play the Cheating Path as well, and I think it's really good. And if you play the game purely towards that end, everything makes sense. But with the Love Path, I just don't understand the logic of having no choice whether the MC cheats, because surely then, he's just on another version of the Cheating Path?

So maybe the Dev can explain his logic behind making it impossible for Ted to avoid cheating on Ria, until late on in the game? Because perhaps I'm missing something?

 

[JohnVitor]

I'm not getting Curtis's two scenes

 

[NewTricks]

Don't get me wrong, I really like this game. It's one of those I look forward to. But up until this update, I'd only played the Cheating Path, so I never really considered the choices in the game except from the perspective of that kind of relationship. So the problem I have with it now, is the Love Path, where the MC cheats on his girlfriend, whatever choices you make. Surely, if it's a true Love Path, you should be able to avoid cheating completely? If Ria cheats once, then she becomes a cheating bitch, whether the MC knows or not. But the MC can fuck Angel, Lizzy/Julia, Lily, Megan, Fiona and Jessica, and as long as Ria doesn't find out about it, it's somehow not classed as cheating, and we're still on the Love Path, which doesn't make a lot of sense to me. Yeah, later on in the game, you can stop the MC cheating. But by then he's already established himself as such a compulsive cheater, it's hard not think, if it was just down to him, he wouldn't think twice about doing it?

For it to be a true Love Path, the MC should be able to avoid having sex with everybody, but Ria. We're given the ability to choose for Ria, so why not the MC? This is another reason why I can't help feeling Ria is the MC, rather than Ted. Because you can make meaningful choices for her, that determine what kind of a person she becomes. But for Ted, for a large part of the game, you're just stuck with this really immature guy, who struggles to resist any kind of temptation. I mean, if they're on the Love Path, then they could still be moving towards an open relationship or swinging lifestyle, without the necessity of one or either of them having to cheat.

Now as I said before, I play the Cheating Path as well, and I think it's really good. And if you play the game purely towards that end, everything makes sense. But with the Love Path, I just don't understand the logic of having no choice whether the MC cheats, because surely then, he's just on another version of the Cheating Path?

So maybe the Dev can explain his logic behind making it impossible for Ted to avoid cheating on Ria, until late on in the game? Because perhaps I'm missing something?

Ted is only really here to rope in the fans of harem games lol. He is basically a harem game protagonist with an inconvenient girlfriend who belongs to a NTR game. I think that the dev wants to show NTR and Harem fans that not only do they belong together but they deserve each other.

 

[SamualHand]

Isn't Ted part of Rias Harem?!

 

[yakargi]

Don't get me wrong, I really like this game. It's one of those I look forward to. But up until this update, I'd only played the Cheating Path, so I never really considered the choices in the game except from the perspective of that kind of relationship. So the problem I have with it now, is the Love Path, where the MC cheats on his girlfriend, whatever choices you make. Surely, if it's a true Love Path, you should be able to avoid cheating completely? If Ria cheats once, then she becomes a cheating bitch, whether the MC knows or not. But the MC can fuck Angel, Lizzy/Julia, Lily, Megan, Fiona and Jessica, and as long as Ria doesn't find out about it, it's somehow not classed as cheating, and we're still on the Love Path, which doesn't make a lot of sense to me. Yeah, later on in the game, you can stop the MC cheating. But by then he's already established himself as such a compulsive cheater, it's hard not think, if it was just down to him, he wouldn't think twice about doing it?

For it to be a true Love Path, the MC should be able to avoid having sex with everybody, but Ria. We're given the ability to choose for Ria, so why not the MC? This is another reason why I can't help feeling Ria is the MC, rather than Ted. Because you can make meaningful choices for her, that determine what kind of a person she becomes. But for Ted, for a large part of the game, you're just stuck with this really immature guy, who struggles to resist any kind of temptation. I mean, if they're on the Love Path, then they could still be moving towards an open relationship or swinging lifestyle, without the necessity of one or either of them having to cheat.

Now as I said before, I play the Cheating Path as well, and I think it's really good. And if you play the game purely towards that end, everything makes sense. But with the Love Path, I just don't understand the logic of having no choice whether the MC cheats, because surely then, he's just on another version of the Cheating Path?

So maybe the Dev can explain his logic behind making it impossible for Ted to avoid cheating on Ria, until late on in the game? Because perhaps I'm missing something?

You are absolutely right! Let me explain...
4 years ago, when I started this game, I didn't think I would get this far. I was working a stressful job and spending a few hours in the evenings. The first draft of the story I wrote was very simple. I know it still has many flaws.
I don't have a full-time job at the moment and I'm living off this game, so I'm not complaining.
Anyway... The love path will be fixed. I've been thinking about what you said for a long time. In real life, I'm for equality between men and women, and in my game, they should be equal.
But I've noticed that the vast majority of people want Ria to be an unadulterated bitch. And unfortunately, I'm a little impressed by that majority.
Don't worry, I'll make a strong correction towards the final.

 

[packard1928]

Love the game ! One thing I noticed is you have not approached any Cuckold or swapping in the game ? Is that on purpose ? Lot of cheating going on...

 

[toxic4u]

Don't get me wrong, I really like this game. It's one of those I look forward to. But up until this update, I'd only played the Cheating Path, so I never really considered the choices in the game except from the perspective of that kind of relationship. So the problem I have with it now, is the Love Path, where the MC cheats on his girlfriend, whatever choices you make. Surely, if it's a true Love Path, you should be able to avoid cheating completely? If Ria cheats once, then she becomes a cheating bitch, whether the MC knows or not. But the MC can fuck Angel, Lizzy/Julia, Lily, Megan, Fiona and Jessica, and as long as Ria doesn't find out about it, it's somehow not classed as cheating, and we're still on the Love Path, which doesn't make a lot of sense to me. Yeah, later on in the game, you can stop the MC cheating. But by then he's already established himself as such a compulsive cheater, it's hard not think, if it was just down to him, he wouldn't think twice about doing it?

For it to be a true Love Path, the MC should be able to avoid having sex with everybody, but Ria. We're given the ability to choose for Ria, so why not the MC? This is another reason why I can't help feeling Ria is the MC, rather than Ted. Because you can make meaningful choices for her, that determine what kind of a person she becomes. But for Ted, for a large part of the game, you're just stuck with this really immature guy, who struggles to resist any kind of temptation. I mean, if they're on the Love Path, then they could still be moving towards an open relationship or swinging lifestyle, without the necessity of one or either of them having to cheat.

Now as I said before, I play the Cheating Path as well, and I think it's really good. And if you play the game purely towards that end, everything makes sense. But with the Love Path, I just don't understand the logic of having no choice whether the MC cheats, because surely then, he's just on another version of the Cheating Path?

So maybe the Dev can explain his logic behind making it impossible for Ted to avoid cheating on Ria, until late on in the game? Because perhaps I'm missing something?

It's NOT cheating when the man is doing it, it's called spread the seamen, it's a natural thing. ONLY women cheat, bc. they are sluts. A man cannot be a slut, he is a slut-maker.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

You are absolutely right! Let me explain...
4 years ago, when I started this game, I didn't think I would get this far. I was working a stressful job and spending a few hours in the evenings. The first draft of the story I wrote was very simple. I know it still has many flaws.
I don't have a full-time job at the moment and I'm living off this game, so I'm not complaining.
Anyway... The love path will be fixed. I've been thinking about what you said for a long time. In real life, I'm for equality between men and women, and in my game, they should be equal.
But I've noticed that the vast majority of people want Ria to be an unadulterated bitch. And unfortunately, I'm a little impressed by that majority.
Don't worry, I'll make a strong correction towards the final.

Don't get me wrong, I'm quite happy for Ria to be a complete whore on the cheating path and for Ted to be equally as promiscuous. Up until now that has been my path through the game, and is still my favoured route. But if I'm playing the love route, then I'm playing the game from a different perspective, and expecting different outcomes from the main characters. But I get now why it is, the way it is, and it's good to know that you're planning to change the early part of the game eventually, to make the love route a bit more realistic

 

[Zara Scarlet]

It's NOT cheating when the man is doing it, it's called spread the seamen, it's a natural thing. ONLY women cheat, bc. they are sluts. A man cannot be a slut, he is a slut-maker.

'Spread the seamen'? I love it when people are trying to take the piss and say unintentionally hilarious things.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Love the game ! One thing I noticed is you have not approached any Cuckold or swapping in the game ? Is that on purpose ? Lot of cheating going on...

Yeah sadly there's the one conversation between ted and ria on the loyalty path about swinging, yet it never really goes anywhere afterwards....

Though in the latest update, at the very end, there's a scene that more closely resembles swapping or swinging when mc and megan hook up at the same house party while ria and daniel do as well, though they're all in separate rooms.

'Spread the seamen'? I love it when people are trying to take the piss and say unintentionally hilarious things.

US NAVY: SPREADING SEAMEN WORLDWIDE FOR OVER TWO CENTURIES.

 

[Miranha157]

0.75 Part 2 here have some vestiges of a mod:
View attachment 4112679
Wondering now if the download has been altered in some other ways.

Apparently they are letting the changes go unnoticed, after all the dev himself said that there is no such folder in the original game.

 

[yakargi]

 

[estrada777]

Updated Android port. Nothing too fancy but let me know if you have any issues.

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[Savadekah]

Updated my android port.

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[Enlight432]

I don’t mind unavoidable NTR as long as the MC isn’t a loser. Is he a loser, or can he also make a big difference with the right choices?
Please answer without spoilers