- Aug 14, 2023
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First of all, thank you for the feedback. I appreciate you taking the time to write this upA story-heavy adult VN about pirates? I am on board, captain. The premise is really interersting too, so I'm excited to see where things go.
Since you asked for feedback, there were a few issues I had with the game. First, the sex scene with Sabetha felt rushed. It was quick and impersonal, and currently feels like the MC lasts about 20 seconds. I'm playing this game to ESCAPE my reality, man. I think you should spend a bit longer on the actual penetration and having sex part. Maybe give the characters a few lines of dialogue during that too. Even if it's just moaning and talking about how it feels or even where he's cumming, then showing that. It'll all help make it feel more exciting and less impersonal.
Also, PLEASE give your characters nipples that are actually modeled. Just using a picture of a nipple on flat skin does not look good. The default, unmodeled jpeg nipples feel like a hasty nude mod for a game. Even with a story focused game, half the reason we're playing is to see boobs, so it's not a good place to cut corners. There are a ton of options for putting 3d modeled nipples on girls in DAZ too. It also gives you more customization, besides boob size, to make the different LIs unique: long, short, innie, pierced, puffy (my personal favorite), tiny, pancake, whatever you want to do, just make the nipples modeled.
I also wasn't a big fan of the music in the game. I love the pirate, fantasy setting, but the music didn't lend itself towards selling that atmosphere. Especially the modern songs with lyrics in them. I don't like having music with lyrics in VNs anyway, as listening to lyrics while I'm reading a story is distracting and pulls me out of the story. I ended up having to mute the music. I don't think I'm alone in feeling that way either, since 90% of VNs just use lyric-less background music.
Despite my gripes, I did think this was a promising start. I'm excited to learn more about Elva and what's going on with her. She's who I'm guessing I'll chose as my love interest, as so far, the other girls haven't quite been my cup of tea. Also, I really hope that redhead Laura on the other pirate ship is a LI as well. I'm a sucker for gingers with freckles and she is cute as hell.
In regards to your constructive criticism:
- The Lewd Scene - This is definitely the area in which I took a step back in. Multiple people have already stated the initial lewd scene (the lewd scene in the old version) was much better than the first for the reasons you've outlined. I'll definitely be adding more content to the lewd scene for the next update.
- The Nipples - I do use the basic DAZ nipples. The Spice Pirate is extremely low budget... so I would rather the money going towards the environment, clothing or characters than better nipple assets. Having said that, I'll try playing around with the nipple sliders in Daz, and if I come across a good nipple asset on sale somewhere I'll grab it.
- The music - this is a bit more subjective. I am a massive fan of lyrics in AVNs, so when I was developing TSP I knew I wanted a few songs with lyrics in them. Unless the overwhelming majority of people want me to change the music, then I won't do so - as personally I am a fan of the current music. However, I'm always on the lookout for ways to improve TSP so if I do come across some music that I think will fit better, I'll definitely change it. I'm also extremely limited to free music allowed in NSFW projects... which barely exists (just ask a few other devs).
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