VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Story of Cindy [Ch. 2 Ep4] [Sam]

[Trasher2018]

Ok ... no offense to the voice actors, but it is not good. Imho - better no VO than bad VO, and good VO is hard to get. In general I prefer no VO in these games, because most of the times the voices in my head (and there are a lot of them, even when I am not playing games ^^) are better ... because they are mine

Why is the maid leaving when the guests arrive? That is the time she is needed ... and why is the table set up for 8 without any reason? When she is in her room and the boys come up ... when you check the sound she instantly changes her clothing - so the dressing scene just gets cut out ... poor work.
Then in that flashback she says the girl was completely naked, but she is just in her underwear. And why does drinking more wine increase your intelligence? ...
Most of the "dialogs" feel like they are all unrelated to another ... as if there are whole sentences missing. And because we have no background or context everything is bland and confusing. Who are these girls, who is that dude ...

And then chapter 2 starts and the game jumps the shark big time.

WTF? ... I dont know what drugs you take, but maybe you should first map out the story and then start the rendering ....

Chapter 1: Some wannabe models arrive at a house with a maid, drink wine and meet their ... agent ... I guess and he says tomorrow is a photo shoot. END
Chapter 2: They meet some new girls and want to go to the photo shoot ... then they attack aliens or something like that (even if you pick cindy route to gather intel ... what? why? WHAT?)...

... then I just skipped thru this fking mess ...

Chapter 3: Cindy is doing yoga (WHAT??? WHY? .. when does she went there - what?) - there are NO choices to make.

END ...

WOW ... THIS IS SO BAD ... it is over the point of being funny bad and it is just BAD BAD... And even the renders are not good and I think Cindy might be one of the aliens .. she looks alien.

Conclusion .. the bad voice over is the best in this mess.

Edit:

Just checked the patreon page ... WTF?

Hi,
welcome. I hope you'll enjoy this story, created with passion by all talents that worked on it. More and better to come, we just started with 4K 2160p and voice acting. Stories are written by professional writers.

What story? I can write a better "story" drunk as a skunk .... There is no story ... there are ... scenes? ... with rendered persons (they are no characters) that do things. Yeah - I know technically it IS a story, but everybody know what I mean.

The "story": Some wannabe models rent a house, drink some wine. Then one of them meets more girls and they kill some aliens and shower. Cindy, our heroine, is doing yoga during these events .. or after them ... we dont know. The End.

Oh ... and with a that hardware the renders should look WAY better .. especially the lighting.
4x NVIDIA GTX 1080 Ti

 

[Priappus]

(This story features the life of Cindy and her team, an AI group defending the Earth.)

I would prefer to save the men making them one good blowjob. (sorry for bad english)

 

[Mormont]

I wasn't expecting the whole Alien side story that was a little different not sure why that was added still I found it rather fun. Then we have the Cindy and Shani yoga scene that was enjoyable but I don't think Shani want's to let down Ann they seem to be enjoying each other and I guess she doesn't want to lose that.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Defending the Earth from what. Guess we'll hand a lot of other things we have to lay to find out.
I only want to know why it's 2GB long, Maybe it has a good story...peace.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

(This story features the life of Cindy and her team, an AI group defending the Earth.)

I would prefer to save the men making them one good blowjob. (sorry for bad english)

I would prefer to save the women, forcing them to give one damn good blowjob.(better)

 

[Takkertje]

The MEGA Windows link in the OP and the GOGGLE link above is for a file called 3.0 but when unpacking, the folder name is 2.0 which is confirmed to be displayed when you start the game. I haven't played the game before so i don't know if the folder name and displayed version in-game is wrong or if the upload is wrong. I haven't checked the other upload sites.

Same here.
Looks like we are the only ones with this problem????
Or else my glasses must be replaced.

Cindy route doesn't play.
Asks for an update.
Huh???

 

[Takkertje]

Ok ... no offense to the voice actors, but it is not good. Imho - better no VO than bad VO, and good VO is hard to get. In general I prefer no VO in these games, because most of the times the voices in my head (and there are a lot of them, even when I am not playing games ^^) are better ... because they are mine

Why is the maid leaving when the guests arrive? That is the time she is needed ... and why is the table set up for 8 without any reason? When she is in her room and the boys come up ... when you check the sound she instantly changes her clothing - so the dressing scene just gets cut out ... poor work.
Then in that flashback she says the girl was completely naked, but she is just in her underwear. And why does drinking more wine increase your intelligence? ...
Most of the "dialogs" feel like they are all unrelated to another ... as if there are whole sentences missing. And because we have no background or context everything is bland and confusing. Who are these girls, who is that dude ...

And then chapter 2 starts and the game jumps the shark big time.

WTF? ... I dont know what drugs you take, but maybe you should first map out the story and then start the rendering ....

Chapter 1: Some wannabe models arrive at a house with a maid, drink wine and meet their ... agent ... I guess and he says tomorrow is a photo shoot. END
Chapter 2: They meet some new girls and want to go to the photo shoot ... then they attack aliens or something like that (even if you pick cindy route to gather intel ... what? why? WHAT?)...

... then I just skipped thru this fking mess ...

Chapter 3: Cindy is doing yoga (WHAT??? WHY? .. when does she went there - what?) - there are NO choices to make.

END ...

WOW ... THIS IS SO BAD ... it is over the point of being funny bad and it is just BAD BAD... And even the renders are not good and I think Cindy might be one of the aliens .. she looks alien.

Conclusion .. the bad voice over is the best in this mess.

Edit:

Just checked the patreon page ... WTF?



What story? I can write a better "story" drunk as a skunk .... There is no story ... there are ... scenes? ... with rendered persons (they are no characters) that do things. Yeah - I know technically it IS a story, but everybody know what I mean.

The "story": Some wannabe models rent a house, drink some wine. Then one of them meets more girls and they kill some aliens and shower. Cindy, our heroine, is doing yoga during these events .. or after them ... we dont know. The End.

Oh ... and with a that hardware the renders should look WAY better .. especially the lighting.
4x NVIDIA GTX 1080 Ti

And this is exactly why the stories don't bother me at all.
Too childish and inconsistent.
Or the knowledge of the english language sucks.

Just in it for the FAP!
Only here for horniness

 

[Trasher2018]

And this is exactly why the stories don't bother me at all.
Too childish and inconsistent.
Or the knowledge of the english language sucks.

Just in it for the FAP!
Only here for horniness

Na, that doesnt work for me. Just for pussy, ass and titties I can go on some pornsite and watch them in masses.
I am here for the indulgence of stories and fantasies.

 

[Takkertje]

Na, that doesnt work for me. Just for pussy, ass and titties I can go on some pornsite and watch them in masses.
I am here for the indulgence of stories and fantasies.

And there it is where our deferences become clear.
Movies and clips don't excite me that much.
No real porn games either.
I do like homemade comics and drawings.
For the sex and the art.
Incredible how some devs manufacture all this beauty.

But i state my case , an adult 'game' must be based on sex.
The 'story' can be draped around it.

Sorry , english is not my home language.

It has come to my knowledge allright that many others think otherwise.
It's my opinion , and mine only.

 

[AlecVentrue]

That what a bit, well lets call it sigh, nasty, is cut the Video or Photoscenes, you can only add 12 in the Boxes and not all of them and what else i would like, is some more Sexposes from the Girls and Cindy self, not always the same.

 

[PeggyBlackett]

Is there any fucking?

 

[Danathor]

Seriously. Before you release any more new games, you should probably finish one game first.
You've already looked at your Patreon page, right? There must be a reason why you don't have one yet.

 

[sssaam.cindy.2019]

so skinny.

Yes - that's my girl

 

[sssaam.cindy.2019]

No PC Win version for down! Links is for mac

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- there is also a demo store (new) where you can find the CH02 P03 (demo)
On Patreon I have also a lot of free novels (stories about Cindy in College written by a professional lady writer) costs me a fortune

 

[sssaam.cindy.2019]

Is there any fucking?

Yes - voiced with options to choose positions and some animations

 

[sssaam.cindy.2019]

I will definitely follow the game in the future, although the voice actor was not to my taste.
In fact, the first time in these games than I heard the voice acting.
(If you don’t count the BAIDK prologue with Jill)

I have changed the main character Cindy to a NSW professional maybe you like it more... voice was over 2.000 USD

 

[sssaam.cindy.2019]

LMAO I have give props for the voice actor here. I think some of the line deliveries feel flat. Just as if they are just reading lines without emotions. So I think if you are going to have voice actors, it is a good idea that they can express feeling and emotion instead of sounding like they just sent their lines through their cell phone.

Voice actors changed.. I am not sure what version this was, big changes happened. Free new demo on

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[sssaam.cindy.2019]

Nice start, nice characters i like the choices system with the extra info, the story so far is good.
The voice acting need's a bit of work but it's nice and fresh at least for me.

Good job Dev and good luck.

Thank you! I just discovered this here... I did some changes and here is some demo:

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[Sorrow85]

I have changed the main character Cindy to a NSW professional maybe you like it more... voice was over 2.000 USD

Thanks, I will try again

 

[sssaam.cindy.2019]

No PC Win version for down! Links is for mac

I like games with a female protagonist, but have a lot of sex Dev!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes - first I wanted to do SFW and then I found NSFW voice actors. The new version has a lot of sex and a lot of choices (foot fetish, different positions and some animations)
You can find the new version from SEP 2020 on itch or on my patreon (for 2 USD all access)