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What character do you like the most?

  • Camila

    Votes: 1,231 45.2%
  • Emma

    Votes: 774 28.4%
  • Eva

    Votes: 425 15.6%
  • Alyna

    Votes: 292 10.7%

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Dec 9, 2019
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Unofficial review, Ver 0.03

Having just started playing this, I can say I'm enjoying it. The music is a nice addition, the graphics and renders are good quality and the story is... alright. My first problem comes with the plot. The story telling jumps between 1st person and 3rd person, which can be difficult to follow. And there is something about the dialogue that bothers me, I just can't quite understand what it is. It just doesn't seem to flow very well. Also, maybe have slightly different fonts for different characters? At least a different font for the AI, or simply when you're having a conversation in person vs on the radio/phone.

The renders are good quality, but the orgasm scenes are just silly. The faces are like something out of a bad manga and everyone is squirting like fountains. If squirting is your thing, go ahead. But I do feel like fixing the climax facial animation is a must. Just looks silly at the moment.
 

Tiur

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Nov 13, 2021
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i don't get the misuse of him and her .. when a female asks it depends on present or past tense ... like Emma asking a question in the past and you remembering it should be referred as " I remember her asking that " not " I remember him asking that "
see screenshot...
The dev/writer is not a native English speaker, and gendered possessives work differently in many other languages. This is a very common translation mistake to see.
 
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Kitchentable

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Aug 13, 2018
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oh one other thing ... especially important ... when your carrying a weapon like a rifle or machine gun ... other's stay off to the side of you .. or mostly behind you .. not infront of you like you have Emma walking ... i realize this is just a game .. but if they get attacked to quickly and you fire off several rounds .. Emma's most likely a dead babe .... wouldn't wanna see that :cry:
Excuse me good sir but what the acutal eff is your problem with appreciating the marvelous female form when it walks infront of you that you have to bring up rational realism?!?!?!?! ;):ROFLMAO:
 
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MrJay

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Apr 21, 2017
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Great stuff so far, a few areas to improve here and there but it's early yet so loads of time to get in the groove.

I have to say, I *really* hope and wish we get to rescue Emmas friends, they were just too damn cute. Also some of those female co-workers were really hot, wouldn't mind getting hot and heavy with them.
 

ImperialD

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Oct 24, 2019
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Excuse me good sir but what the acutal eff is your problem with appreciating the marvelous female form when it walks infront of you that you have to bring up rational realism?!?!?!?! ;):ROFLMAO:
well kind Sir ... i don't wanna blow her sweet little ass too hell and back before i get the chance to plow that field 1st ;)
 
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EvolutionKills

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Jan 3, 2021
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Escaping a city in a zombie apocalypse (which took less than 12 hours to trigger mind you). Something that a far better written game could spend chapters upon chapters exploring, here is over in done with a dozen lines of dialogue (yes, the MC just talks to himself the entire time) and half as many still frames.

Seriously, the game goes from bad nonsense spy-thriller to bad zero-threat zombie apocalypse and back to bad nonsense spy-thriller so fast that is causes whiplash.

Also, is Alyna supposed to be a massive cunt?
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Cause that's how you write dialogue for a massive cunt.

I'm only 10 minutes into this game, and I'm so checked out. The writing needs a native English proofreader, so we can avoid gems like '...listening to a music' or '...passion is for a literature'. Everything is nonsense. The game begins in medias res and uses that not to do anything interesting or exciting, but rather just a boring exposition dump; but only for the backgrounds of the supporting cast rather than actually explaining any of the spy-thriller-secret-agent-bullshit that is going on with the MC.

At the point when the MC is talking to the AI in his spy-work-phone (that he just used call his mom and sister) and it promises to destroy anything that approaches this tropical island mansion/safehouse, is the point where I checked out entirely. This shit is fucking nonsense, nothing here makes any sense or has any weight to it, and the game is actively trying to make me not care about anyone or anything (and it is succeeding). If the game can't be bothered to take any of this shit seriously, why should anyone else?
 

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Jul 15, 2021
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I'm less than an hour in and there's been like 3 scenes where the LIs squirt like 2 seconds into the scene. The last one was hilariously bad - the sister's leg rests on the other's crotch for like 2 lines worth of dialogue and then the next frame is her sitting in a gigantic puddle, which... not exactly how women work, dev

That + the MC's stupidly disproportionate dick is very off-putting
 

EvolutionKills

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Dude its a game about fucking your 2 nieces who have bodies of 10-year-olds, how many great loli novels do you know.
Is that a trick question?

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But seriously, if you just want loli porn to jerk off to, go grab a CG collection. This is being presented as a visual novel, and I found the 'novel' part to be utterly lacking.
 

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Dude its a game about fucking your 2 nieces who have bodies of 10-year-olds, how many great loli novels do you know.
Let me count... One. No. Wait. Two? Five? Maybe nine? Ah Hell. Who am I kidding. None. lol

i also got the feeling the MC had something to do with his sister also ... and that maybe the nieces ,, are more than nieces ;)
Probably. It's too bad the one girl I saw before was hairier than a sasquatch during mating season. :ROFLMAO:

I'm less than an hour in and there's been like 3 scenes where the LIs squirt like 2 seconds into the scene. The last one was hilariously bad - the sister's leg rests on the other's crotch for like 2 lines worth of dialogue and then the next frame is her sitting in a gigantic puddle, which... not exactly how women work, dev

That + the MC's stupidly disproportionate dick is very off-putting
Well, that's nothing. Back in the 70s there was a midget in porn that was 3' plus change that had a 10inch pencil for a dick. Talk about disproportionate. :LOL:
 
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