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this game has some promise but PLEASE turn down the INNER MONOLOGUE of the mc.
it starts getting annoying after a while because as he gets up he starts talking to himself for like a whole 2 minutes, and in any other situation talking to himself for to damn long LOL.
Like I legit had to start skipping so I can get back to the story and game.
So yea to much inner monologue and I think it needs to be cut down a notch. Him talking to himself and really not saying much of nothing most of the time slows down the pace of the game.
it starts getting annoying after a while because as he gets up he starts talking to himself for like a whole 2 minutes, and in any other situation talking to himself for to damn long LOL.
Like I legit had to start skipping so I can get back to the story and game.
So yea to much inner monologue and I think it needs to be cut down a notch. Him talking to himself and really not saying much of nothing most of the time slows down the pace of the game.
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My (additional) initial feedback (v0.3 Part 1):
Considering this is a first project for Albatrozz, I am going very easy on everything (not even going to mention language & grammar
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Thank you for being sincere; this is exactly what I'm looking for! And thanks for sticking around. Your explanation is very clear, and it has made me realize where I need to improve. It means so much to me. I appriciate!My (additional) initial feedback (v0.3 Part 1):
Considering this is a first project for Albatrozz, I am going very easy on everything (not even going to mention language & grammar
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The story is probably good but this should of been called a slice of life story and I never cared for them they are boring to me.. The depressing story of the fairy losing all of it's kind to not find what it's looking for. The depressing life stories of the girls like Luselia.
I can tell it's a good story IF you like slice of life stories. Comedy? I don't think so it's too serious of a story for that it bored me to death before first day was even done.
1. Story 4/5 (but must like slice of life it's a good story line for many races to learn to accept other races)
2. Sound 4/5 (great sound track and used appropriately for the areas)
3. UI 4/5 (seems good for what it is since no relation points or that to track)
So if you like Slice of Life Drama than this will be right up your alley and would be at least a solid 4 star for you. But please put somewhere in the OP that this is Slice of Life and very slow. No fast action comedy and hilarity here. I don't even get how this got a Comedy tag on it as it does not fit this game at all.
I can tell it's a good story IF you like slice of life stories. Comedy? I don't think so it's too serious of a story for that it bored me to death before first day was even done.
1. Story 4/5 (but must like slice of life it's a good story line for many races to learn to accept other races)
2. Sound 4/5 (great sound track and used appropriately for the areas)
3. UI 4/5 (seems good for what it is since no relation points or that to track)
So if you like Slice of Life Drama than this will be right up your alley and would be at least a solid 4 star for you. But please put somewhere in the OP that this is Slice of Life and very slow. No fast action comedy and hilarity here. I don't even get how this got a Comedy tag on it as it does not fit this game at all.
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. Peer issues? Look here.Minigames hated? Can confirm. They have no place in porn games, and I am unanimous in that. Just added a game to my ignore list because of all the mention of minigames all over it's place, in the reviews.My (additional) initial feedback (v0.3 Part 1):
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If you just have to have them, make them skipable. With the skip = win. Seen a few where they let you skip but you get screwed out of whatever the 'prize' is. Those get ignored too. 2 things I *NEVER* come to pron games for. Mini games, and puzzles. They're a waste of time and my life. And no, not because they're too hard. It's because they're tedious as all living fuck and I have better things to waste my life on.
So im giving this a go, and the game just started. A girl appeared, and cause she woulnt say anything. then MC started crying ??? wtf is going on. Why would he cry, Is he a wimp ? Its not a reaction I would ever think of it. its just a big wtf moment for me.
if it had been some amazing staring competition, it would of been amusing. But wtf is this crying and singing. Just makes the MC look pathetic...... and cringe. More accurate, The truth is nothing but cringe.
Cant say its a great first impression <.<
if it had been some amazing staring competition, it would of been amusing. But wtf is this crying and singing. Just makes the MC look pathetic...... and cringe. More accurate, The truth is nothing but cringe.
Cant say its a great first impression <.<
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From your description this game seems like something I would enjoy, however I am worried about some very important things, first of all I guess this is more of a question for the dev but it would be good to know if there are any more extreme tags planned, like NTR, hopefully not,
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finally I would like to know if the MC is really a self insert or not, what I mean is that another trend lately are games that let you name the MC but then he clearly already has another name, this is usually toghether with the horror elements, I originally skipped this game because it seemed to be like that but if it is more of a normal slice of life I am willing to try it,
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I don't think there will be sharing, cheating and/or NTR in the future (so far there is none of that stuffs) because MC is the only male in this gameverse and this is a harem game (most likely a Haremon catch em all type, Albatrozz did not clarify on the harem type).
So far there is NO futa or trans, the other characters are virgin girls (possibly there is girl lose her virginity to the MC before he suffered memory loss though). Don't know if there will be futa or trans characters in the future.
Not sure about the horror stuff, so far there isn't any hint of horror, not even dark gloomy scenes or places, no eerie musics too. Most likely not.
But yeah, you can wait for Albatrozz to give a definitive answer if you don't want to play it yet. No one wants to start playing a game which they will later stop playing because of surprise future contents.
Thank you for the answer, I read some of your rewiew and it was helpful, I disaggree for the moment about it not standing out because of the aforementined horror, for now there is none and if it keeps going like this it will stand out from the current trend,
I personally hate the existential horror and fake MC stuff, as a harem fan more interested in romance and that hates sharing I found very difficult finding a game that does not have those and also is not horror, I should specify that I only play self insert games, in case it was not clear by my hate for fake nameable MCs, so normal harem romance is more common than that but it usually has a named MC, which should be a tag honestly,
I probably will wait for a more definitive answer as I have been burned too many times before and this seems like a game that requiers you to get emotionally invested to actually enjoy it, and I do not want to do that and then find random dicks where they should not be, thanks again.
Thank you for asking. I'll add more information on my Patreon page.
As for your question, First, I'm not a fan of NTR, Futa, Tran, or Tentacle, so I won't be including those elements in the game.
Second, I'm not good in the horror genre (it scared me), so there won't be any horror elements in the game (though I'm not sure if the scene when you first meet the black-haired gothic girl could be considered horror).
Lastly, there's only one MC in this game, and he has a single name that the name you give to him.
I hope this clears things up, but if you have any more questions please don't hesitate to ask. Thank you!
Thanks for the information, it is helpful to have confirmation from the dev, I feel more at ease trying the game now.
Edit: the dream sequences with the gothic girl are exactly what I meant with existential horror, for now however they are mild enough that they are not a problem, I will keep playing for now and possibly update later.
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" forgets his past "
I have to honestly admit that the beginning of the game I am incredibly annoyed, after a while I started to just skip the internal dialogue of the MC, I do not see the need to read that in front of me there is a table with two chairs and next to it there is a vase with a flower that has one green leaf, another green leaf and a third green leaf and as if that was not enough there is a fourth green leaf on a stem that grows from the soil poured into a vase in a room with a large dressing table...
I have the impression that you depended on a large amount of text and not the presentation of some facts.
What is this, a guy wakes up with absolutely no memory and the next day goes to work? Still work as a teacher? What is he going to teach anyone when he can't remember anything? xD
The fact that thoughts are differentiated from speech in italics is a huge misunderstanding, at times you can get lost,on top of that 8 billion thoughts per minute of our MC, terribly annoying.
Maybe I'll give another chance when I see the new update and won't remember that I played it, I'll hold off on giving one star for now.
Good luck in spite of everything.
I have to honestly admit that the beginning of the game I am incredibly annoyed, after a while I started to just skip the internal dialogue of the MC, I do not see the need to read that in front of me there is a table with two chairs and next to it there is a vase with a flower that has one green leaf, another green leaf and a third green leaf and as if that was not enough there is a fourth green leaf on a stem that grows from the soil poured into a vase in a room with a large dressing table...
I have the impression that you depended on a large amount of text and not the presentation of some facts.
What is this, a guy wakes up with absolutely no memory and the next day goes to work? Still work as a teacher? What is he going to teach anyone when he can't remember anything? xD
The fact that thoughts are differentiated from speech in italics is a huge misunderstanding, at times you can get lost,on top of that 8 billion thoughts per minute of our MC, terribly annoying.
Maybe I'll give another chance when I see the new update and won't remember that I played it, I'll hold off on giving one star for now.
Good luck in spite of everything.
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I think I will just watch the thread for now in the hopes that this game will eventually get a proofreader.
ermagerd...this prologue is ridiculously too long. 15-20 minutes and I'm just as confused as the MC. Is there a game hidden in here somewhere??????
Hi, it's me. I wanted to share some additional information about a game and I wanted to take a moment to thank you for this website. Without it, I wouldn't be where I am today. There are so many fantastic games and developers that have inspired me, and the community here has been incredibly supportive by writing comments and offering suggestions. I really appreciate having all of you here, you are all amazing!
Regarding the game, when I reread the first version, I found it difficult to understand due to a lot of confusing words in an Asian style. (Yep, it hurts my brain) I decided to revise the dialogue again, but please keep in mind that this is only version 0.1 and I'm still working on the whole game. I hope that the revisions have improved it, but I would appreciate it if you could let me know if it is still hard to understand or not.
And I'm going to launch two polls on Discord - one for a behind-the-scenes vote, where you can select from the girls that appear in the game's recent version, and another for a popular vote, where you can choose from all the main girls to ensure they appear in the next version. If you're enjoying the game, please consider voting for it.
Lastly, I started working on this game on 07/21. At first, I only intended to create a prologue, but it ended up being longer than I had planned. Therefore, I decided to call it version 0.1 instead of a prologue. To sum up, there is no prologue, it's just version 0.1.
Thank you for taking the time, I hope we'll have the chance to meet again.
Regarding the game, when I reread the first version, I found it difficult to understand due to a lot of confusing words in an Asian style. (Yep, it hurts my brain) I decided to revise the dialogue again, but please keep in mind that this is only version 0.1 and I'm still working on the whole game. I hope that the revisions have improved it, but I would appreciate it if you could let me know if it is still hard to understand or not.
And I'm going to launch two polls on Discord - one for a behind-the-scenes vote, where you can select from the girls that appear in the game's recent version, and another for a popular vote, where you can choose from all the main girls to ensure they appear in the next version. If you're enjoying the game, please consider voting for it.
Lastly, I started working on this game on 07/21. At first, I only intended to create a prologue, but it ended up being longer than I had planned. Therefore, I decided to call it version 0.1 instead of a prologue. To sum up, there is no prologue, it's just version 0.1.
Thank you for taking the time, I hope we'll have the chance to meet again.
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It is true that there is no Prologue version and the first release is version 0.1. However, for some players (especially me) the earlier part of the game feels a lot like a prologue, which basically meaning introduction to the game/story. Hence, those players (including myself) loosely referred to it as prologue (even if it is version 0.1). For me, the game really starts when the MC goes to the Academy.
However, I do hope you understand that what the players actually mean with their feedbacks. I can only speak for myself, I do not dislike the 'prologue', introduction is good. What I dislike is the lengthy inner monologues the MC had, especially when most of it is just random ramblings and not really important stuff. But it is just my opinion, other may think differently and ultimately it is your game and story, so develop and tell it the way how you like it.