VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Tutor [v1.1] [c.Shadow]

[c.Shadow]

That should not matter as long you can prove you developed this game and follow the rules.

Hello... I wanted to ask if there is any way to be able to change the tags of the game... I did not understand rule 5 well and I want to fix it

 

[AlBetGam]

Hey OP, looks like you've set an ambitious project for yourself. Based on your overview, I'd recommend you get a good proofreader to help you out. I can't do that long-term, but here's a cleaned up version of the overview:

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Good luck!

 

[AL.d]

Good luck with your game. Pretty good for first effort and it has potential for a nice revenge story.

Since you are planning to do sandbox, at least try not to have grind in it (gather x amount of this to do y). It's just boring

 

[Ennoch]

"..until you meet a nice demon who comes from another world and she offers you her help.."
Initial Release:
2 bad endings.

What could go wrong

 

[EvolutionKills]

Pet Peeve Checked: Initial release labeled Version 1.0 (rather than 0.1), a designation reserved for gold/gone to print/final release.

 

[c.Shadow]

Hey OP, looks like you've set an ambitious project for yourself. Based on your overview, I'd recommend you get a good proofreader to help you out. I can't do that long-term, but here's a cleaned up version of the overview:

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Good luck!

Thank you very much, I will need someone to help me correct what I write... the truth is that I am not very good at English but I am learning more and more

 

[c.Shadow]

Good luck with your game. Pretty good for first effort and it has potential for a nice revenge story.

Since you are planning to do sandbox, at least try not to have grind in it (gather x amount of this to do y). It's just boring

Thank you very much, I will try to make the revenge the decision of the player and the grinding part I do not want to lie to you if there will be... more than anything focused on money and lust (but I do not want to say more so as not to ruin it).... more than anything I will seek to make a fun game that is not so easy or complicated for the player and that grinding is necessary but accessible

 

[c.Shadow]

"..until you meet a nice demon who comes from another world and she offers you her help.."
Initial Release:
2 bad endings.

What could go wrong

Haha... it will be your decision if you want to see those endings, they are short but I hope you have fun

 

[c.Shadow]

Pet Peeve Checked: Initial release labeled Version 1.0 (rather than 0.1), a designation reserved for gold/gone to print/final release.

Oh... I really had no idea... I really wanted to start from version 1.0 and from there go forward

 

[incest lover m/s]

incest father and daughter for sure...i prefer m/s but wish the developer luck

 

[c.Shadow]

incest father and daughter for sure...i prefer m/s but wish the developer luck

Thank you very much... I hope you can play it and enjoy it... There is going to be incest... but that will be later... and M/S if I'm not mistaken it's mother and son in this novel I don't think I'll put of that type but I'll give you a little spoiler if all goes well.

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[Deleted member 1571716]

Oh... I really had no idea... I really wanted to start from version 1.0 and from there go forward

Don't listen to people like that. Number it how you want.

 

[incest lover m/s]

Thank you very much... I hope you can play it and enjoy it... There is going to be incest... but that will be later... and M/S if I'm not mistaken it's mother and son in this novel I don't think I'll put of that type but I'll give you a little spoiler if all goes well.

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m/s is mother and son, my favorite fetish, sorry for my bad english

 

[c.Shadow]

m/s is mother and son, my favorite fetish, sorry for my bad english

Don't worry I'm also bad at English and it's also one of my fetishes son and mother, I hope you're playing Restore Her Career and Sweet Affection those two are very good M/S games

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[c.Shadow]

thx

thx 2 u!!

 

[CountKael]

Another Teacher+Corruption combo, I swear yall teachers license should be revoked . atleast we have a sexy demoness with us this time. good luck dev! omw to try this one out

 

[Hyperserver]

not bad for a first release - and no worries about "bad english" - not everyone does speak english propperly (i am also not native).
But the only (little annoying) thing you really need to change:
Him/his = refering to males
Her = refering to females

He is her brother, and she is his sister. Trousers belong to him, while skirts belong to her.

Mostly you did it correct, but i remember definitively some "wrong" lines regarding that.

 

[FluffyStudio]

Omg you created Out of Puberty!!!
First of all I want to tell you that I love your game... and it's one of many that motivated me to make my own game. I hope we can get along and give each other some advice, but you who have more experience...
And if my toaster then makes me depressed because I want to work on new renders but it takes about 1 hour to open HS I can't imagine what it would be like with Daz... I hope to update my computer soon to work better... sorry if I wrote a lot but it's just that I'm excited that I'm talking to you.

Holy shit! I never thought of hearing this. Your Game inspired me. Dam. Right in the feels! Thank you!

Yes I see no issue in regards to getting along I'm on my way to upgrade my PC as well.

I'm getting next month an additional SSD Driver so I can just dump everything I have regarding DAZ and HS on their and my PC can breath a bit more.
I hope to actually remaster Out of Puberty, since the Original Game was on Tyranomaker and not on Renpy.
I may actually change the story as well a bit, to make it a bit better You tent to notice and change things with experience But that's still only on paper. For now I'm concentrating on one Game. Which is something I would love to give you as an advice. Work on one Project. Don't expand your Game Library while the other Games are still barebones.

 

[FluffyStudio]

Trousers belong to him, while skirts belong to her.

Pfff.... Tell that to the Scots. They might disagree