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so far i liked it. the only thing that hurts this game from getting alot of attention is the art. hopefully it gets better down the line. the english isn't super bad. at the very least it's good enough to get through the story with no major issues.
i did have an issue with people calling him "Tutor" some parts of the game it didnt make sense. even then, Tutor isnt a title that people are addressed as especially since he is/was a teacher. not some dude who went to the students houses individually for one on one seesions.
i would prefer they call him "Mr.(Last Name)" it would make more sense.
the game could probably use a different title as well. maybe something like "One hell of a Teacher" since it has demon based mind control elements. i say this cause i'm pretty sure there is another game called Tutor.
overall i look forward to the next update. i hope grind isn't too bad in sanbox. good luck dev.
i did have an issue with people calling him "Tutor" some parts of the game it didnt make sense. even then, Tutor isnt a title that people are addressed as especially since he is/was a teacher. not some dude who went to the students houses individually for one on one seesions.
i would prefer they call him "Mr.(Last Name)" it would make more sense.
the game could probably use a different title as well. maybe something like "One hell of a Teacher" since it has demon based mind control elements. i say this cause i'm pretty sure there is another game called Tutor.
overall i look forward to the next update. i hope grind isn't too bad in sanbox. good luck dev.
YogSothoth1982
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As I have indicated, I like the romance and harem part. Whether I like corruption will depend on exactly how it's implemented. I usually don't like submission (I just noticed that it also has the maledom tag, and I only like that if it's light or if it's just role playing). I guess I'll wait to see how the game develops to see if I'm interested.
I won't know how as teacher you would mess with your female studentsHaha... don't say because I was a teacher
I hope you like it and have fun with my novel
So far the biggest issue I have is the amount of unnecessary animations at the beginning. It gets distracting trying to read while there's repetitive movements going on right next to the words, and a lot of them don't even have a point and just involve a character moving their head around or something. Not to mention, it also puts a lot of strain on my CPU for no reason. It gets a lot less problematic later on, but if you're gonna start doing it as much as you did at the start in later updates, at least give us the option to swap out the more pointless ones for static images.
It would also be nice if the characters had default names. I don't want to choose a name for the family members, but if I leave the prompt blank then they end up nameless.
Aside from that, it's good so far. The Engrish could definitely use some work, but it isn't *nearly* as unreadable as a lot of games on here, or even as bad as the game's description originally was.
It would also be nice if the characters had default names. I don't want to choose a name for the family members, but if I leave the prompt blank then they end up nameless.
Aside from that, it's good so far. The Engrish could definitely use some work, but it isn't *nearly* as unreadable as a lot of games on here, or even as bad as the game's description originally was.
I just finish prologue. I liked almost all. You are making a good work.
I like animations and dialogue. Just could be useful have some indications about corruption/love/respect for important ppl to know how it's going with them.
A just a typo as you see in attached pic: I guess it should be "potion" instead "position"
I like animations and dialogue. Just could be useful have some indications about corruption/love/respect for important ppl to know how it's going with them.
A just a typo as you see in attached pic: I guess it should be "potion" instead "position"
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Thank you very much for your criticism!!
I will take it into account more than anything that the characters refer to the main character as a tutor... what you said is not wrong, I plan to do the sandbox more than anything so that the main character can go to the houses of different students to give them tutoring (I don't count anymore...).
I'll also try to make sandbox grinding necessary and fun... I'll explore that in more detail later.
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I am going to focus a large part on the formation of the main character, since originally he was not interested or interested in more than simple sexual relations.... but as the story unfolds, he will change his way of being.
I also want that to be part of the player's decision... (so I have a lot of work to do
)(Sorry if I can't give you many details but I don't want to ruin the idea I have about the game)
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Thank you for playing it... I hope you liked it and look forward to future updates.Thanks for your work. Good luck. I'll get a try but renders already catch me
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No, it's something I've never done... but here under the anonymity I can tell you that it's not something I haven't thought about doing either.I won't know how as teacher you would mess with your female students
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I also thought that the animated renders at the beginning were very unnecessary... in the end my intention is that the player becomes fond of Ginn and wants to know more about her story, that is why I focused a lot on the beginning that was animated... But after that I'm going to remaster it to make it look more fluid since they were from my first renders and the truth is I'm not happy with how it turned out
I tried to give the characters their default name in case the player didn't want to put them on but the code didn't come out... now I really need help on that part.
And as you say, I have to give my English a polish and write well what I write... I will do my best to make the dialogues as readable as possible
Without further ado, thank you very much for playing my novel and I hope you liked it.
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Oh thank you very much... I will change that immediately if you see more errors I would be grateful if you tell me...
And yes I will be working on a GUI so you can see how the corruption / love and respect of the different characters goes
In fact I said "would". I understand what you mean, girls around seventeen and eighteen are really interesting and someone still innocentNo, it's something I've never done... but here under the anonymity I can tell you that it's not something I haven't thought about doing either.
You can count on it! I'll look forward for updates because you had a good idea and also development is interesting. So continue with this way and update regularly and I'll become also your patron.Thank you for playing it... I hope you liked it and look forward to future updates.
Learn from critics but don't be mad to them, because you can't satisfy everybody.
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Seriously, thank you very much... I was very nervous about having bad reviews... but now talking to you and the others motivated me a lot to continue with my novel...You can count on it! I'll look forward for updates because you had a good idea and also development is interesting. So continue with this way and update regularly and I'll become also your patron.
Learn from critics but don't be mad to them, because you can't satisfy everybody.
I will take into account what you tell me and I will thank you very much if you support me on my patreon...
Haha... and about your other comment... you can't even imagine how young women are now... they are very daring.
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I'll probably update this as I play maybe.
But the main menu is a little.. annoying..
They should go from left to right honestly, just makes it look neater. Also when you hover over one of the options, it makes a sound and flashes to the girl.. But if you hover between 2 of them, it freaks out and rapidly swaps between the 2 girls every millisecond. With sound and flash.
But the main menu is a little.. annoying..
They should go from left to right honestly, just makes it look neater. Also when you hover over one of the options, it makes a sound and flashes to the girl.. But if you hover between 2 of them, it freaks out and rapidly swaps between the 2 girls every millisecond. With sound and flash.
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I will take into account your suggestion and for the next update I will change the order and size of the buttons... thank you very much
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there is no need to be nervous at all.Seriously, thank you very much... I was very nervous about having bad reviews... but now talking to you and the others motivated me a lot to continue with my novel...
I will take into account what you tell me and I will thank you very much if you support me on my patreon...
Haha... and about your other comment... you can't even imagine how young women are now... they are very daring.
Every developer started at some point, and no one has been perfect right from the scratch so far (not even the top-dog developers)
There is just a HUGE difference whether a game got good basics where constructive critics can be based on - compared to crap games, which are just so worse, that every try to fix issues will make the game more broken.
You need a good foundation to built on - and your game is solid.
Everyone who knows me, also knows that i don't hesitate to trash-bash games whenever they are worse. But i am also honest whenever i like a game.
Your game is definitive within the second.
Just keep on going - listen to people, but take care not to easy try to please all - trying to fullfill every kink, even for the smallest groups never worked out so far - in neither game.
Reality has shown multiple times, that whenever you please one group, you will also upset 2-3 others. So live YOUR way, listen to people who are with you by that and do your vision - just ignore all others - better disappoint a few rather than upset many (except that niche would be exactly what you intended right from the beginning).
Be truthful from the start - changing things during ongoing project will end badly - the ones who disliked your start will probably not notice the change as they skipped and got you on ignore, whilst the others, who liked your game because of what is has been so far, will be upset and disappointed because of the changes.
But again: imho you did well so far, and i am keen on getting more soon (just really hope, the sandbox will not destroy the fun)
PS:
Sandbox can be ok whenever you just decide where to go and in what order to do different paths. Sandbox will ALWAYS suck, whenever you need to repeat scenes senseless to progress and whenever they even don't match together.
BAD example:
girl in school - bitching
girl solo - bitching (but you raise stats)
girl in school - bitching and reacting like nothing happened
girl solo - bitching (but you raise stats)
girl in school - bitching and reacting like nothing happened
... repeat that 10 times
then girl solo - she doesn't bitch anymore
girl in school - suddenly acts like she always loved you
got what i mean?
Sandbox always has a BIG risk of being inconsistent between different routes and stages. Just my humble opinion for a first game: avoid sandbox and just tell a story. Sandbox is REALLY hard to do well