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wow is this your first game dev? One of the best beginnings I've seen in a while looking forward to what's next.
- Aug 19, 2018
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not bad so far. seems interesting enough.
i am curious if this a harem game.
im also curious about Lyons and Maleah. same with Mrs. lopez. you cant throw her in and not give us an opportunity(although i prefer a netori route with her rather then she has an open relationship with her husband. then again it could just be dream talk being the reason she said that in the first place.
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aside from that the tapping before the Elbow drop made me laugh.
i am curious if this a harem game.
im also curious about Lyons and Maleah. same with Mrs. lopez. you cant throw her in and not give us an opportunity(although i prefer a netori route with her rather then she has an open relationship with her husband. then again it could just be dream talk being the reason she said that in the first place.
)aside from that the tapping before the Elbow drop made me laugh.
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There's the ignore button at least. I don't use it though, I guess that's why I read/post less and less as time goes on...Are you new here?
Not a bad start. A bit pulled by the hair story wise, but at least, it's somewhat different from the usual ones.
Too early to make a fair review, but here's my feedback for now:
-Too many big boobs. Smaller boobs needs love too.
-The Mc's dick looks odd, more like it's a plastic dildo attached to him than an actual dick.
-The sperm/saliva, looks very very very odd as well in the couple of scenes.
-The choices are not always clear on which will potentially give points, and which points as well.
-The renders are fine, they're not subpar, and are slightly above the average in my books.
Other than that, the game seems off to a good start.
Too early to make a fair review, but here's my feedback for now:
-Too many big boobs. Smaller boobs needs love too.
-The Mc's dick looks odd, more like it's a plastic dildo attached to him than an actual dick.
-The sperm/saliva, looks very very very odd as well in the couple of scenes.
-The choices are not always clear on which will potentially give points, and which points as well.
-The renders are fine, they're not subpar, and are slightly above the average in my books.
Other than that, the game seems off to a good start.
- Sep 5, 2022
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one of the more interesting games I`ve played in the last couple of months.
Interesting choices.
just wondering: does "beeing cautious" do something for you?
I mean, as her driver, getting a blowjob from a drunken girl, especially if her best friend handed her over to you in trust, seems like a dick move.
but it seems, accumulating risk points is "the way". am I right?
Interesting choices.
just wondering: does "beeing cautious" do something for you?
I mean, as her driver, getting a blowjob from a drunken girl, especially if her best friend handed her over to you in trust, seems like a dick move.
but it seems, accumulating risk points is "the way". am I right?
- Jun 5, 2017
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- Jan 16, 2023
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Randy orton's entrance song problythe funniest thing hit me when i saw this vn ..... its a song i can't remember the name of it ....
i hear voices in my head they council me they understand they talk to me ....
odd that hitting me like that ....
ahh shit never mind this vn says voiceless ... ok forget what i said
- Apr 29, 2018
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- Feb 10, 2018
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I liked it,i think have a huge potential just dont fucked up example with freeroaming ^^
- Mar 27, 2022
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Doubtful.
The dev's only got patreon apparently, so unless he's unaware that incest is not allowed on patreon...
- Mar 23, 2018
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a good start and nice to see a decent sized opening content wise.
the 'batman' start had me eyerolling and some of the choices seemed....odd, unintuitive.
one example is the choice not for MC to take a change of outfit to the gym and not shower, which could have given an opening for a short shower scene of being or doing some peeping with ana or the blonde trainer, even if it had no further game impact. just as a possible example.
it just would have seemed to me a more natural choice situationally than the rather mindless choice of going to a job smelling of stale sweat and in dirty workout clothes. this minor plot device just didn't ring plausible, out of character.
the art is great the writing is on point. not going to be everyone's cup of tea but in no way is it an uncomfortable read, and not filled with spelling errors so immersion is not broken. an all too common issue with many developers.
plus the mechanics seem solid, no obvious issues with them for me.
we also have a step-sister in game so incest fans may well feel a naughty pulse below for future content.
all-in-all it is a very decent opening and personally i can see a future purchase on the horizon should it continue as it has started. certainly one to watch.
well done dev
the 'batman' start had me eyerolling and some of the choices seemed....odd, unintuitive.
one example is the choice not for MC to take a change of outfit to the gym and not shower, which could have given an opening for a short shower scene of being or doing some peeping with ana or the blonde trainer, even if it had no further game impact. just as a possible example.
it just would have seemed to me a more natural choice situationally than the rather mindless choice of going to a job smelling of stale sweat and in dirty workout clothes. this minor plot device just didn't ring plausible, out of character.
the art is great the writing is on point. not going to be everyone's cup of tea but in no way is it an uncomfortable read, and not filled with spelling errors so immersion is not broken. an all too common issue with many developers.
plus the mechanics seem solid, no obvious issues with them for me.
we also have a step-sister in game so incest fans may well feel a naughty pulse below for future content.
all-in-all it is a very decent opening and personally i can see a future purchase on the horizon should it continue as it has started. certainly one to watch.
well done dev
- Jun 26, 2018
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Hey dev, this is a pretty good start. MC's corny ass jokes can be a little cringy, but I can see the tone you are going for.
Just a quick suggestion for a scene that I'm reading through right now. After the MC takes care of business with those two hooligans at home, I feel like he could be a lot more firm with Alaina and especially Madelyn. If you pick the "not ok" option to scold her for being so reckless, he should also give Madelyn an ear full for being a bad influence on his sister. As it was, he didn't hold Madelyn accountable at all.
I'm not advocating for a new route or something, but just some flavor text to give the impression that MC doesn't want his sister doing dangerous shit. Basically, the persona I was imagining for the MC was someone who will do whatever it takes to make money, so that his (step)sister can finish college without any worries. Someone who is ready to dive into the underworld and do any shady shit to provide for his loved ones so that they don't have to get dirty. I thought this theme could be explored a bit more seriously, but it seems like this organization he joined is actually like a Robin Hood thing instead of a shady organization.
Oh, and I feel like that scene could have used a sequence where Alaina is surprised and a bit worried that MC has a gun all of a sudden (if he brings the gun with him).
Just a quick suggestion for a scene that I'm reading through right now. After the MC takes care of business with those two hooligans at home, I feel like he could be a lot more firm with Alaina and especially Madelyn. If you pick the "not ok" option to scold her for being so reckless, he should also give Madelyn an ear full for being a bad influence on his sister. As it was, he didn't hold Madelyn accountable at all.
I'm not advocating for a new route or something, but just some flavor text to give the impression that MC doesn't want his sister doing dangerous shit. Basically, the persona I was imagining for the MC was someone who will do whatever it takes to make money, so that his (step)sister can finish college without any worries. Someone who is ready to dive into the underworld and do any shady shit to provide for his loved ones so that they don't have to get dirty. I thought this theme could be explored a bit more seriously, but it seems like this organization he joined is actually like a Robin Hood thing instead of a shady organization.
Oh, and I feel like that scene could have used a sequence where Alaina is surprised and a bit worried that MC has a gun all of a sudden (if he brings the gun with him).
- Dec 17, 2020
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