Thank you for your feedback.@Zee95 I must say your game was well designed and thought out so far. The chemistry between the MC and Adele was great. The chemistry between Monique and the MC was great, too, and you captured the feelings of the MC and her in the aftermath very well. It is easy to see how difficult this was for both of them. Not to mention Monique has a fine firecrotch! I am a fan of bushes.
I see Monique will return eventually from what I have read in this thread so far. That's great! I also think there is a good balance between dialogues and visuals here. Obviously, sex is a big part of the game but story is also important.
Having some sort of romantic storyline content (dates, kissing, talking, etc.) would be great, too, but this is obviously not something that the market demographics, which is heavily male, would be interested in. Nevertheless, if that kind of content can be incorporated as perhaps an optional part, that would be excellent. It could even be skippable for those who don't care for that.
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A few questions:
1.) Will the return of Monique be dependent on what route you took? Fortunately, I have saved the point where routes was to branch out (I consulted the walkthrough). Although... it would not be ideal to have to lose Adele for her...
2.) I noticed that MC's younger sister Anna was said to be 14. Which means that she would have been 18 by the time MC completed his 4 years at the college (if it is a four-years university, which is most likely, rather than two-years community college).
This fact made me suspect that there may be a possible relationship with Anna at some point in the late game, if it is planned for this story to span the four years of college and possibly beyond. But I'd like to hear what your plan is on that. Of course, these numbers could be just a pure coincidence.
Unless relationships with 14-years old is not considered prepubescent which is expressly forbidden in the rules of this forum? Sorry, I am a little unclear on this. Can someone from the forum staff here clarify this point for me? Thanks.
3.) So far, I don't think we have seen Adele completely nude yet (at least not that I recalled apart from photo which was taken from the behind long ago) but it does begs a question for me to ask: does she have a bush or at least a landing strip? Inquiring mind wanted to know!
I liked bro-sis romance as they are familiarly intimate but having pubes would be a bonus to the intimacy. An icing on the cake, if you will. Since we already had red-hot bushes with Monique, Adele having bald pussy isn't a huge game-breaker for me if that is the case anyway.
4.) Since there is no harem tag assigned, does that potentially mean I can't pursue both Adele and Monique? That is, if the possibility for re-establishing a relationship with Monique becomes an option and if both girls are OK with an open relationship. My biggest concern is the fact that Monique, if I remember right, broke up with her boyfriend for cheating on her. On the other hand, it might be different if the MC is at least honest with her about Adele.
The main thing is that I am not seeking a large harem or anything. None of that nonsense. On the other hand, allowing us to have relationships with more than one girls and to be selective about with whom to pursue.... I can see that potentially becoming a big mess to work with as the developer. I am not a programmer, however, so obviously only you can answer this.
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Well, I think these questions should suffice for now, lest I make this post too long by now, if it isn't already.Finally, I think this game has real potential and I sincerely hope that you can manage to conclude this game to its fullest potential. I will be keeping my eyes on the development of this game. Good luck and keep up the great work on this!
Regarding questions about Adele. We'll probably find out soon. (about landing strip XD)
About Monique, and so on, maybe I'll add an option to tell her, or offer to be a threesome. I haven't thought about it yet.
About Anna, I'm going to change the story a little bit, at this point in time she's 16 years old, I've decided to add two years to her. But there won't be anything illegal in the game.
About dating. I would like to add such an option, and there will be an offer of dating, and there will be an opportunity to agree or decline. I hope so.
I hope I answered all the questions
