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I've got a problem at 4th day night when I've tried to go to bed :
-It told me to check on Joanna but it didn't work, I've tried all I could possibly do
 

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You know you cant see the money or the items what the heck?
Not until you click on whatever you find out what it is.
That was a mistake if it wasnt for the walthrough I would not know that.
They need to fix that this is no good without a walkthrough.
Also the bathroom is not on the 1st floor but the 2nd floor a typo there.
 
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All the good stuff was removed?
Is that way this is smaller then the last version?
What? Nothing has been removed from the game. If you're taking about the CG, yes, I removed images that weren't in the game.

You know you cant see the money or the items what the heck?
Not until you click on whatever you find out what it is.
That was a mistake if it wasnt for the walthrough I would not know that.
They need to fix that this is no good without a walkthrough.
Also the bathroom is not on the 1st floor but the 2nd floor a typo there.
Other than the typo issue, I'm not sure what you want me to do. Most point and click style games, which my VN emulates don't tell you what you will find when you click on an object. Are you just looking to find issues?
 
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What? Nothing has been removed from the game. If you're taking about the CG, yes, I removed images that weren't in the game.


Other than the typo issue, I'm not sure what you want me to do. Most point and click style games, which my VN emulates don't tell you what you will find when you click on an object. Are you just looking to find issues?
Women he lives with?
Is that a fairy rule or does he have to do it in that house?
Will there be more women living there?
Is it something special about that house ?
Was it built on top of a fairy burial ground or something like that?
Just want to make sense out of this story.
So no Im not looking for issiues so dont make me go Alnold Swatzenigger on you.
Also why does he live there and why does she give him money?
Is he there to rent a room or keep her company?
Great story by the way. Only 2 main characters plus the pizza man and no interest characters like the mall so far but great story regardless.
 
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Women he lives with?
Is that a fairy rule or does he have to do it in that house?
Will there be more women living there?
Is it something special about that house ?
Was it built on top of a fairy burial ground or something like that?
Just want to make sense out of this story.
So no Im not looking for issiues so dont make me go Alnold Swatzenigger on you.
Also why does he live there and why does she give him money?
Is he there to rent a room or keep her company?
Great story by the way. Only 2 main characters plus the pizza man and no interest characters like the mall so far but great story regardless.
You cannot progress the story without reading the landlady's journal. I suggest you do that. It will explain a lot.
 
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You cannot progress the story without reading the landlady's journal. I suggest you do that. It will explain a lot.
I did but I dont see how that helps to progress the story.
Its pretty much a summary of what they already did.
Every time he opens his mouth bad things happen.
Did he have to tell her he was adopted?
Did he have to tell her he was looking for his parents?
Did he have to tell her the name of his real mother?
No wonder he talks to himself a lot.
 
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I finished this version. Now I see where the incest part comes in.
I was wondering about that when I was about done with ther version.
I also figured it would end with the cheating husband showing up at the end.
Very rare to see black couple adaopt a white child.
Something the mc forgot to mention to Joanna.
Very intriguing story a lot more happens at college then at home.
Cant wait for the next version.
 

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A preview of two new characters coming in v0.6
View attachment 399252
Looks like next version is gonna be full of people or at leat that house.
I hope that house has more room for more characters.
We need to fill up that house and we only have less then a week to do it.
Instead of 15 days the fairy should have said 30 days or a year/
What's going to happen after the 15 day? Will this story end?
 

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Well the best news about it is it will have new characters added.
So that could mean he has 2 more chances to complete the wish .
I mean they are gonna live in that house so it counts righ?
 
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