Hey again,
FluffyLynx, I've played the game now and have a quick feedback for you.
A good start.
The story and dialogues are still quite rough, but easy to follow.
The graphics are good. Animations are well looped, the penetration physics are sometimes a bit off.
I agree that there should be some way to either skip or speed up the animations. Or maybe have a button for each of the loops (positions) and a "cum" button so people can watch the animations they like for how long they like and skip other parts.
I miss the rollback function. So many people are used to rollback - especially in Ren'Py games - that this will become an issue.
I like the option for Aaron to be bisexual.
If you really want to split the story up along the 4(5) options presented (sharing/cuckoldry, cheating, voyeur, pure) and for both genders/MCs, which is extremely ambititous, you may want to seperate the routes better. For testing purposes I played every available combination and found a few inconsistencies:
[First, the timeline from what I puzzled together: 4 months ago A&I were not married. Five days ago the Danube was lost and the Hy-Do launched to go after them. That means that probably 10 days ago the Danube was launched. At that point, I guess A&I were married, considering that they've had a honeymoon after the marriage.]
- On the sharing/cuckoldry path Irene tells Aaron that she had sex with Mercury and John the day before the Danube launched (at which point A&I would have been married for a few days or weeks) and keeping it a secret, which would be cheating path content, not sharing/cuckoldry (or voyeur, or pure).
- Also on the sharing/cuckoldry path, Aaron sees Irene and Mercury having sex, which is also cheating. Playing Irene you can invite Aaron, the options playing Aaron are "join", which would have been sharing if the sexual act had been a joint decision and had he been there when sex was initiated, "watch and masturbate", which is voyeur, not cuckoldry (in cuckoldry everybody in the situation is aware of everybody else), and "go back to sleep".
As I said, it's very ambitious. Don't get me wrong, I like ambitious games with many different paths, just the borders between the paths and the definitions of them need to be very clear to avoid confusion, unwanted content and ultimately disappointment.
As I said before, I will keep it bookmarked and hopefully give you a dollar or two in the future.
Thanks and good luck!