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Well this is a bit confusing xD but in the first path which I called "Cuckoldry/Sharing" the player (if he is playing male MC) can actually choose to join or to watch. Even if he is a bisexual.
Good enough for me. As long as MC will not get forced to watch against his will on this path I'm in. :)

Bookmarked now, will download and keep an eye on it. Good luck! (y)
 
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"the wife is a cool and sexy ex-adventurer"

Everybody losing their minds because of NTR and I'm here just waiting for someone to use the obvious
 
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Oh cmon guys, it's hard to please everyone.xD I wanted to make a game with some kinks but almost all them can be avoided. If you follow the Pure route you will still have an adventure with some voyeurism and occasional love/sex scenes between the protagonists. There will be no "evil NTR" where some woman is being stolen from her man. Yes, Aaron is a sub guy. But he is a young simple guy with a girly face who were lucky enough to get himself a sexy wife. How can he not be sub?xD
 

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Oh cmon guys, it's hard to please everyone.xD I wanted to make a game
Don't let us tear you apart. It is good to listen to feedback, but don't bend over backwards to please everyone! You will never be able to. Do the things that please you. You will attract like-minded people and put off others. There will always be discussions.

Do your thing. Most people will respect that, even if they don't like your game.
 

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I wanted to make a game with some kinks but almost all them can be avoided.
And it is a pretty good game so far. Lots of well made animations, more than one per scene and different scenes along different paths. Also the kinks are tastefully explored. There is love between the couple regardless.

There will be no "evil NTR"
For the people who dislike NTR, all NTR is evil. :ROFLMAO:
 

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And it is a pretty good game so far. Lots of well made animations, more than one per scene and different scenes along different paths. Also the kinks are tastefully explored. There is love between the couple regardless.
Sorry, it may be love but that's femdom love. So, yeah, this game never give me scenes where male MC behaves as alpha or even as "equal" man to her wife. Male MC don't have chance to cheat, Male MC don't have chance to "initiate" MFF threesomes, Female MC don't have chance to became cuckquean etc etc. So, yeah, you should have also mentioned the other part of truth too, then the people who are reading comments will decide whether to go through it or not.
 

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Hey again, FluffyLynx, I've played the game now and have a quick feedback for you.

A good start.

The story and dialogues are still quite rough, but easy to follow.

The graphics are good. Animations are well looped, the penetration physics are sometimes a bit off.

I agree that there should be some way to either skip or speed up the animations. Or maybe have a button for each of the loops (positions) and a "cum" button so people can watch the animations they like for how long they like and skip other parts.

I miss the rollback function. So many people are used to rollback - especially in Ren'Py games - that this will become an issue.

I like the option for Aaron to be bisexual.

If you really want to split the story up along the 4(5) options presented (sharing/cuckoldry, cheating, voyeur, pure) and for both genders/MCs, which is extremely ambititous, you may want to seperate the routes better. For testing purposes I played every available combination and found a few inconsistencies:
[First, the timeline from what I puzzled together: 4 months ago A&I were not married. Five days ago the Danube was lost and the Hy-Do launched to go after them. That means that probably 10 days ago the Danube was launched. At that point, I guess A&I were married, considering that they've had a honeymoon after the marriage.]

- On the sharing/cuckoldry path Irene tells Aaron that she had sex with Mercury and John the day before the Danube launched (at which point A&I would have been married for a few days or weeks) and keeping it a secret, which would be cheating path content, not sharing/cuckoldry (or voyeur, or pure).

- Also on the sharing/cuckoldry path, Aaron sees Irene and Mercury having sex, which is also cheating. Playing Irene you can invite Aaron, the options playing Aaron are "join", which would have been sharing if the sexual act had been a joint decision and had he been there when sex was initiated, "watch and masturbate", which is voyeur, not cuckoldry (in cuckoldry everybody in the situation is aware of everybody else), and "go back to sleep".


As I said, it's very ambitious. Don't get me wrong, I like ambitious games with many different paths, just the borders between the paths and the definitions of them need to be very clear to avoid confusion, unwanted content and ultimately disappointment.

As I said before, I will keep it bookmarked and hopefully give you a dollar or two in the future.

Thanks and good luck! (y)
 
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Sorry, it may be love but that's femdom love. So, yeah, this game never give me scenes where male MC behaves as alpha or even as "equal" man to her wife. Male MC don't have chance to cheat, Male MC don't have chance to "initiate" MFF threesomes, Female MC don't have chance to became cuckquean etc etc. So, yeah, you should have also mentioned the other part of truth too, then the people who are reading comments will decide whether to go through it or not.
You don't disprove my point. You didn't like that the male MC didn't show initiative. It's a valid point. But it doesn't have to be this way in every story. The dev wanted to make something different. He can do whatever he wants. If you don't like the result, just move on.
 

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You doesn't disprove my point. You didn't like that the male MC didn't show initiative. It's a valid point. But it doesn't have to be this way in every story. The dev wanted to make something different. He can do whatever he wants. If you don't like the result, just move on.
But you should have mentioned what this game doesn't contain. You said what it contains. You didn't said about the other part of truth. So, I said the other part of truth, so that people read my lines too & take decision.
 

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Hey again, FluffyLynx, I've played the game now and have a quick feedback for you.

A good start.

The story and dialogues are still quite rough, but easy to follow.

The graphics are good. Animations are well looped, the penetration physics are sometimes a bit off.

I agree that there should be some way to either skip or speed up the animations. Or maybe have a button for each of the loops (positions) and a "cum" button so people can watch the animations they like for how long they like and skip other parts.

I miss the rollback function. So many people are used to rollback - especially in Ren'Py games - that this will become an issue.

I like the option for Aaron to be bisexual.

If you really want to split the story up along the 4(5) options presented (sharing/cuckoldry, cheating, voyeur, pure) and for both genders/MCs, which is extremely ambititous, you may want to seperate the routes better. For testing purposes I played every available combination and found a few inconsistencies:
[First, the timeline from what I puzzled together: 4 months ago A&I were not married. Five days ago the Danube was lost and the Hy-Do launched to go after them. That means that probably 10 days ago the Danube was launched. At that point, I guess A&I were married, considering that they've had a honeymoon after the marriage.]

- On the sharing/cuckoldry path Irene tells Aaron that she had sex with Mercury and John the day before the Danube launched (at which point A&I would have been married for a few days or weeks) and keeping it a secret, which would be cheating path content, not sharing/cuckoldry (or voyeur, or pure).

- Also on the sharing/cuckoldry path, Aaron sees Irene and Mercury having sex, which is also cheating. Playing Irene you can invite Aaron, the options playing Aaron are "join", which would have been sharing if the sexual act had been a joint decision and had he been there when sex was initiated, "watch and masturbate", which is voyeur, not cuckoldry (in cuckoldry everybody in the situation is aware of everybody else), and "go back to sleep".


As I said, it's very ambitious. Don't get me wrong, I like ambitious games with many different paths, just the borders between the paths and the definitions of them need to be very clear to avoid confusion, unwanted content and ultimately disappointment.

As I said before, I will keep it bookmarked and hopefully give you a dollar or two in the future.

Thanks and good luck! (y)

Thank you. There certainly be a button to skip animations in the next update. I wanted to implement it in this version but somehow forgot. Also the animation system maybe changed during the development process.
You got the timeline right.
Well, she did, but she actually told Aaron about this. xD She didn't tell him earlier because of the secrecy. On the cheating path she doesn't tell him.
On the first path they have an open relationship. That's not cheating because Aaron likes this. Do you think I should split this path into two parts and/or rename it?

 

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On the first path they have an open relationship.
Now that's an important information! In that case it's neither sharing nor cheating, nor cuckoldry, but open relationship. All consensual. Perfect! I like open relationships. Why not call it that? ;) Mind that that's just off the top of my hat though.
 

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Now that's an important information! In that case it's neither sharing nor cheating, nor cuckoldry, but open relationship. All consensual. Perfect! I like open relationships. Why not call it that? ;) Mind that that's just off the top of my hat though.

OK, I'll think about it.
Thank you for the feedback.xD
 
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OK, I'll think about it.
Thank you for the feedback.xD
By the way - just in case you didn't know - you can get a "game dev" badge and/or ownership of this thread, if you want. "Tickets" -> "open new ticket" -> "contact staff" and tell them who you are and what you want.
 
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The first game I want to introduce is called "The World with No Memory" and it's a story-driven Adult Visual Novel.
This game will feature: Multiple protagonists (male and female), Voyeurism, Cuckoldry (avoidable I think), Cheating, Pegging, Male with male (avoidable I think), and some more...
The fact that even the dev is not sure speaks volumes about the type of content you'll find here.
 

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The fact that even the dev is not sure speaks volumes about the type of content you'll find here.
How can you be sure of anything? Life is too unpredictable.XD
I had some plans for this year, but they were ruined because of this coronavirus epidemic.
I only write my wishes and intentions, and no one knows what the result will be.
 
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