VN Ren'Py Abandoned This Time [v2306] [ApocalypseToday]

[King Slayer100]

Thanks guys. The game is based on the same styling as Phillygames (depraved awakenings and city of broken dreamers).
The intention is have story driven narrative with sexual elements be based upon as close to real life scenarios as possible (a long time crush that never seemed to materialise). The voyeurism tag was more meant towards peeping on Annie getting changed rather than the Chelsea getting nailed by another guy images. They were just there as a glimpse at Chelsea's baked body though I now see how that might put some people off.
The game is definitely not going to be NFT driven and any NFT elements (if you can call them that) are minimal.

I have learned a lot here so please keep the comments and feedback coming. The good the bad and the ugly

First of all renders looks good .
Philly games ? I don't remember Philly games ever showed li's getting banged even it was a prostiture . Real life scenario ,I don't think anyone want to watch or listen to that unless he is a cuck or something .

As for me I don't wanna watch my lis getting banged ,when you say it's it not ment to be a ntr and voyager game then don't you think there is too much of ntr-ish and voyager content for the first impression ?

Find a time traveling watch just to watch lis fuck random dudes.

Atleast put a WARNING on the op about it ,so people don't blindly jump into the game and see something they don't want to .

 

[chicken head]

isnt Annie the prostitute?

sorry my bad, English is not my native language my mistake I apologize, seeing Chelsea doing the stuff, I messed up recognise the character thanks for pointing out

 

[Look-see]

First of all renders looks good .
Philly games ? I don't remember Philly games ever showed li's getting banged even it was a prostiture . Real life scenario ,I don't think anyone want to watch or listen to that unless he is a cuck or something .

As for me I don't wanna watch my lis getting banged ,when you say it's it not ment to be a ntr and voyager game then don't you think there is too much of ntr-ish and voyager content for the first impression ?

Find a time traveling watch just to watch lis fuck random dudes.

Atleast put a WARNING on the op about it ,so people don't blindly jump into the game and see something they don't want to .

in depraved awakening you can see some of the girls being used by others if you make the choices for them. in one of the characters you see her in a gangbang but if i remember right those were just pictures. but she dies anyways sooo.

also the asian girl can blow one guy if you dont save her.

cant remember the rest.

 

[chicken head]

isnt Annie the prostitute?

I re-edit the post thanks for pointing out the mistake and saving me from ranting and facepalms

 

[King Slayer100]

in depraved awakening you can see some of the girls being used by others if you make the choices for them. in one of the characters you see her in a gangbang but if i remember right those were just pictures. but she dies anyways sooo.

also the asian girl can blow one guy if you dont save her.

cant remember the rest.

Her name was Stella or something she was not a li , I read that on the thread back then .she was drugged if I recall correctly .

And Asian girl pretty easy to avoid and it happens way later in the story by that time MC was an established chad so it doesn't suit him to sit there and watch

 

[Tragic Princess]

Thanks guys. The game is based on the same styling as Phillygames (depraved awakenings and city of broken dreamers).
The intention is have story driven narrative with sexual elements be based upon as close to real life scenarios as possible (a long time crush that never seemed to materialise). The voyeurism tag was more meant towards peeping on Annie getting changed rather than the Chelsea getting nailed by another guy images. They were just there as a glimpse at Chelsea's baked body though I now see how that might put some people off.
The game is definitely not going to be NFT driven and any NFT elements (if you can call them that) are minimal.

I have learned a lot here so please keep the comments and feedback coming. The good the bad and the ugly

I think the skip option button is your friend, make everything as optional as possible. Unfortunately for you some players are already turned off by your potential LI's so there's a void there in the matter of who to pursue next.

 

[apocalypsetoday]

Official release is now compressed @ 350mb.
Uncompressed version still available for those hardcore users.

 

[King Slayer100]

I re-edit the post thanks for pointing out the mistake and saving me from ranting and facepalms

How dare you mixup the names of a game that you played first time ,I will facepalm you that will teach you a lesson

 

[apocalypsetoday]

Thanks everybody. It seems as though there are many perspectives I hadnt considered myself but hey thats why I posted it here!

Before progressing onto chapter 2 I am going to re-evaluate chapter 1 and take the NFT feedback into account. I will either remove it entirely or give the options to skip as neccesary.

 

[chicken head]

How dare you mixup the names of a game that you played first time ,I will facepalm you that will teach you a lesson

what to say love the redhead beauty out of frustration minds goes, blank sir

 

[paust.alex]

I don't mean to be rude, but I didn't see anything story driven here. On the contrary, most of the scenes here are The grand piano in the bushes. For example, the prostitute at the beginning of the game, why, what's the point of that? Just to add a sex scene? Or the "whore" character, I didn't even want to know who she was. By the way, who is she? Why is she even needed in the game? But when I saw the scene with the naked woman down on her knees with a butt plug, I stopped. I mean, you're walking in the park and all of a sudden some strange people come up to you and offer to fuck some woman. It's all too sudden, there's no plot development, sex scenes are just thrown at you out of nowhere.

 

[apocalypsetoday]

in depraved awakening you can see some of the girls being used by others if you make the choices for them. in one of the characters you see her in a gangbang but if i remember right those were just pictures. but she dies anyways sooo.

also the asian girl can blow one guy if you dont save her.

cant remember the rest.

The first MC you meet in the first scene in depraved awakenings is a prostitute too. She goes on to be one of the most popular MCs in the game too!

 

[chicken head]

Before progressing onto chapter 2 I am going to re-evaluate chapter 1 and take the NFT feedback into account. I will either remove it entirely or give the options to skip as neccesary

Make it remove entirely(that's for me) or make it avoidable but please no skippable

 

[Look-see]

Thanks everybody. It seems as though there are many perspectives I hadnt considered myself but hey thats why I posted it here!

Before progressing onto chapter 2 I am going to re-evaluate chapter 1 and take the NFT feedback into account. I will either remove it entirely or give the options to skip as neccesary.

in some cases it's already skippable. i mean you dont HAVE to watch her get laid. its more like she comes off as a huge slut. she talks about getting fired for giving a customer a handjob under the table for example. potentially blowing her manager to get a new job also. so im like. "how does this guy have a crush on her again"?

and i already gave my opinion on the prostitute thing. if MC was her first client that might help. as well as giving an option for a maledom scene to balance out the femodom scene.

it mostly depends who you intend to attract with your game. Harem players? NTR players? or whatever. and this is more important than you think. many devs made the mistake of thinking the just cause a story is well written it will attract alot of ppl. sadly it tends to be which group of players you want to attract. good renders help. animations help. a sex scene in the first release helps. not having a weak MC helps.

but yeah i'd vote for a bit of rewrite over just skipping.

edit: it's been rewritten

 

[Look-see]

The first MC you meet in the first scene in depraved awakenings is a prostitute too. She goes on to be one of the most popular MCs in the game too!

ima have to learn you some of the abbreviations son.!

MC=Main character. usually used for the protaganist only.

LI= love interest the girls you can romance/sex

NTR= bad

NFT= no idea what that means first time i've seen it and already confusing.

 

[Jsd16]

It's nice to see u take others opinion . It would be nice if u remove it completely ( in my opinion ) so we can romance her . If u make it skippable ( it still happens while u choose to ignore it ) some hate that and don't see her as LI . I still haven't played this game yet .I'll wait once the remastered version comes out. I just stated my opinion or suggestion , in the end it is your game and u must do as u wish .

 

[Look-see]

I don't mean to be rude, but I didn't see anything story driven here. On the contrary, most of the scenes here are The grand piano in the bushes. For example, the prostitute at the beginning of the game, why, what's the point of that? Just to add a sex scene? Or the "whore" character, I didn't even want to know who she was. By the way, who is she? Why is she even needed in the game? But when I saw the scene with the naked woman down on her knees with a butt plug, I stopped. I mean, you're walking in the park and all of a sudden some strange people come up to you and offer to fuck some woman. It's all too sudden, there's no plot development, sex scenes are just thrown at you out of nowhere.

depends how you look at it.

the plot for the girls could be to introduce the sluttly college girls route. sadly you cant fuck her this update but yeah for me ts to early to tell if it has no significance. at the same time its completely avoidable so who knows.

 

[chicken head]

in some cases it's already skippable. i mean you dont HAVE to watch her get laid. its more like she comes off as a huge slut. she talks about getting fired for giving a customer a handjob under the table for example. potentially blowing her manager to get a new job also. so im like. "how does this guy have a crush on her again"?

and i already gave my opinion on the prostitute thing. if MC was her first client that might help. as well as giving an option for a maledom scene to balance out the femodom scene.

it mostly depends who you intend to attract with your game. Harem players? NTR players? or whatever. and this is more important than you think. many devs made the mistake of thinking the just cause a story is well written it will attract alot of ppl. sadly it tends to be which group of players you want to attract. good renders help. animations help. a sex scene in the first release helps. not having a weak MC helps.

but yeah i'd vote for a bit of rewrite over just skipping.

Always your the one speak up the mind what to say about it always agree with you

 

[Cthulhu4Prez2020]

ima have to learn you some of the abbreviations son.!

MC=Main character. usually used for the protaganist only.

LI= love interest the girls you can romance/sex

NTR= bad

NFT= no idea what that means first time i've seen it and already confusing.

Ya know...if yer gonna learn somebody some abbreviations...might help if you actually knew what they were first...

MC stands for "Main Cock"

j/k....don't flame me...these are the jokes....

 

[King Slayer100]

The first MC you meet in the first scene in depraved awakenings is a prostitute too. She goes on to be one of the most popular MCs in the game too!

But at no point it was shown she was fucking other guys(big difference) ,it doesn't makes sense since we are watching the world from MC's prespective anyway .