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Hellkinglucifer

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Game looked interesting at 1st and dev said he was using philly games as inspiration but i have yet to see a LI getting fucked by another guy/girl in city of broken dreamers. Victoria is a high class whore and Chandra is a drug addict who likes to fuck around BUT you never see them fucking somebody else or even talked about their past sex life. Struggling to see the comparison here.
 

apocalypsetoday

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Game looked interesting at 1st and dev said he was using philly games as inspiration but i have yet to see a LI getting fucked by another guy/girl in city of broken dreamers. Victoria is a high class whore and Chandra is a drug addict who likes to fuck around BUT you never see them fucking somebody else or even talked about their past sex life. Struggling to see the comparison here.
Hi,

Chapter 1 is being tweaked as we speak so that the prostitution scene has an alternative to the sex and so that it has a little background (Its her first and last night being a prostitute).
Also Chelsea wont be a slut any more and won't be fucking other guys or talking about fucking other guys.

Stay Tuned and thanks for the feedback:)
 

TiffanyMonroe

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Thanks for the feedback.
The intention is definitely to get up to shenanigans with the stopwatch. It was difficult to try and balance the story driven nature of the game with the romance scenes with this being the first chapter. I thought it was also a good opportunity to get some feedback and perspective on what people would want to see happen with the stopwatch before committing to anything.

Do you have any ideas in mind?

Some that were going through my mind (If I had the stopwatch) would probably be spying in changing rooms and sleep sex.
You can ask me. I have all the BEST ideas. :sneaky:
 
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apocalypsetoday

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You can ask me. I have all the BEST ideas. :sneaky:
You can't just post that and not follow it up with a good idea!
Come on now we are waiting ;) lol

But seriously any good ideas do please post them in here, I can't guarentee they will happen but I take inspiration from wherever it finds me.
 

TiffanyMonroe

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You can't just post that and not follow it up with a good idea!
Come on now we are waiting ;) lol

But seriously any good ideas do please post them in here, I can't guarentee they will happen but I take inspiration from wherever it finds me.
Have you seen those timestop japanese hentai and porn? I was thinking more along the lines of rape and molestation. The mc could knock up married women in front of their husbands. Sneak into girls locker rooms, take all their virginities and breed them all. Or he could just rob banks and feed the poor. Be a super hero and save people. I have a lot more darker stuff but this the most innocent.
This could be optional for all the weak hearted people.
 

judgenot93

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i like what's there. You're not gonna get the hevay anti-NTR crowd on board with your approach, but who cares. maybe have the prostitute insist on condoms while working going forward, but the concept of de-whoring a LI is something i havn't seen so far i think, and i like the idea.
 

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Have you seen those timestop japanese hentai and porn? I was thinking more along the lines of rape and molestation. The mc could knock up married women in front of their husbands. Sneak into girls locker rooms, take all their virginities and breed them all. Or he could just rob banks and feed the poor. Be a super hero and save people. I have a lot more darker stuff but this the most innocent.
This could be optional for all the weak hearted people.
might take a while since atm MC's watch only works for about 30 damn seconds. :cry:

What has been seen cannot be unseen.
i've unseen it.(y)
 

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You can't just post that and not follow it up with a good idea!
Come on now we are waiting ;) lol

But seriously any good ideas do please post them in here, I can't guarentee they will happen but I take inspiration from wherever it finds me.
Better tell the story you want to tell than changing it due to some criticism. If you start changing your game you will end burned and the game abandoned. Stick to your vision, you can't please everyone.
Good luck with the project.
 
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apocalypsetoday

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Better tell the story you want to tell than changing it due to some criticism. If you start changing your game you will end burned and the game abandoned. Stick to your vision, you can't please everyone.
Good luck with the project.
Thanks! Its nice to see some different sided opinions emerging too rather than everybody being upset about the accidental NTR (I didnt even know what it was until this morning!)
Story is certainly 1 element I wont compromise on. Im ok with tweaking character personas at this early stage and given the large amount of people upset with the accidental NTR Its something I am happy to tweak as it won't interfere with my future plans :)
 

paust.alex

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There is no need to make a whore into a nun, she won't stop being a whore, because her model and her name have already been tarnished in unworthy deeds. I'd let her stay on the path of a complete whore who has no hesitations or regrets, maybe there's a lover for that too, in the The Witcher many choose Yennifer, and Triss is not far behind in being a whore. Just give the player an option to morally humiliate her for her moral choices and let her know that there is no bright light in the end of her life with the MC, maybe she'll even cut her veins, it would be interesting to see such a storyline, I have not seen it.
 
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Hellkinglucifer

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Hi,

Chapter 1 is being tweaked as we speak so that the prostitution scene has an alternative to the sex and so that it has a little background (Its her first and last night being a prostitute).
Also Chelsea wont be a slut any more and won't be fucking other guys or talking about fucking other guys.

Stay Tuned and thanks for the feedback:)
Like someone said before know what your target audience is makes it a lot more easier to not make the mistakes who already cost you some players. I am guessing you are going for a vanilla game but a little more real life based. NTR and voyeurism are the biggest no no for vanilla players. It doesn't matter if it's a LI, future LI or a random woman never to be seen again most vanilla players don't care about seeing a sex scene if MC isn't in it. I've seen some dev that think a sex scene per update is necessary so they do things like showing random couple having sex or a Li with her current bf, DON'T make that mistake.
 

desmosome

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Thanks for the feedback.
The intention is definitely to get up to shenanigans with the stopwatch. It was difficult to try and balance the story driven nature of the game with the romance scenes with this being the first chapter. I thought it was also a good opportunity to get some feedback and perspective on what people would want to see happen with the stopwatch before committing to anything.

Do you have any ideas in mind?

Some that were going through my mind (If I had the stopwatch) would probably be spying in changing rooms and sleep sex.
Man, it would have been better if you had no idea what NTR was lol. Do you want to write a story that you want? Or do you want to apply artificial boundaries and keep things "safe" to maybe draw in some more players that are too sensitive? There was nothing NTR about this and it's so childish to judge characters on some stupid porn harem logic. Redo or change whatever if you feel like it's a better approach. Don't blindly change the story because some people on the forum are complaining about character backgrounds and the plot. Criticism regarding the execution and delivery of the plot, sure, but the direction of the plot? That's your own creative output.


Are prostitutes not people? Are they disqualified from being a central character? The sympathetic and thoughtful prostitute is a concept used in many stories, be it games, TV, movies or literature.

Is settling into a platonic friendship a foreign concept? The text clearly says there was some sexual tension at first, but MC and Chelsea just settled into a friendzone because neither of them acted on it. Now they are just friends. Are you gonna deride a friend for being a whore because she is sexually liberal? If a male gets head under the table, you high five them. If a female friend gives a handjob under the table, she's a slut and whore that we should cut ties with?

It's so asinine what happens in every single thread. People arguing about who is worthy of their "love" lol.



Anyways, about your question regarding the stopwatch. There are obviously too many applications for it, but the biggest adventage of time stop is doing stuff in public and basically being rapey lol. You know, fucking people who are going about their day to day lives. Like a mother walking her daughter to school, a couple on a date in the park, public transport, your colleges, incest targets.. lol whatever. The other cool trope with it is the delayed orgasm, where you build up their arousal in time stop and then release it for some 100000x super orgasm.

The thing is, time stop in a porn setting is almost never used for good. The curious thing about the game so far is that it is being framed with a good natured MC or a heroic type of story. Time stop rapey fun and this type of set up... I wonder how it will play out. Of course, you might have some corruption of the MC in mind, or find some wholesome time stop sex if that kind of thing is even possible.

Good luck...
 

apocalypsetoday

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Like someone said before know what your target audience is makes it a lot more easier to not make the mistakes who already cost you some players. I am guessing you are going for a vanilla game but a little more real life based. NTR and voyeurism are the biggest no no for vanilla players. It doesn't matter if it's a LI, future LI or a random woman never to be seen again most vanilla players don't care about seeing a sex scene if MC isn't in it. I've seen some dev that think a sex scene per update is necessary so they do things like showing random couple having sex or a Li with her current bf, DON'T make that mistake.
Thats great advice thanks!
 
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