VN Ren'Py Abandoned This Time [v2306] [ApocalypseToday]

[DrakoGhoul]

This overview reminds me of the plot of a hentai i used to watch. I should watch it after i play through this so thanks for reminding me it existed. Anyway, I'm looking forward to playing this.

 

[loikl]

Look, coming up with a story in your own head reading the tags instead of playing the game is just pure ignorance. That being said I have yet to see a game where prostitution doesn't just mean that your love interest fucks around.

I have a pretty lax stance to multiple partners, and I don't scream NTR at every occasion I get. My stance is simple: I don't care to hear about a partner's former sex life (I don't care how many they've had, couldn't care less if they aren't virgins, I just don't want to hear about their past sexual experience), I don't care about fly on the wall scenes where my character isn't present and NPCs are fucking, and I don't care to play a guy who knowingly accepts the role of just +1 dick among several other dicks a person of interest happens to be riding concurrently... prostitution ALWAYS is one of these 3.

So while being presumptuous is bad, it's quite obvious what certain tags can and can not stand for.

EDIT:
So I've started playing the game, and shocker, I wasn't wrong, but I only called quits a bit later, when the second woman (out of 3 who are added to character profiles so I assume are potential love interests) came around who fucks other guys. No, just no. People with a cuckold fetish will have a blast with this game, I'm not one of them.

I made a comment at the time ... and now I apologize, you were absolutely right this is not going to work, it hurts, it looked very good, it is sad that these games are so badly made, that is, you are a guy with a clock that stops time should be the master of the world ... but I think the dev has another idea, anyway thanks for your sacrifice soldier.

 

[ImperialD]

this is just version .1 and its bigger than 80% of most finished games ... jeezzz ... i hope its worth the download

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Very impressed, a good story, good renders.
One suggestion: a little more facial expressions during dialogue. I'm sure the Dev knows that.
Much success
ApocalypseToday

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

I can forgive the condoms and cuck shit if we can use the time watch to rape and knock up women. And of course the option to avoid/prevent all that gross shit.

 

[Tragic Princess]

IMO It's fine that there is a prostitute character and that your friend is banging other guys but you've put those 2 in your relationship stats ("opinion" and "lust") making them your love interests... which means there should be a NTR tag. I like NTR and would like to find those games by tag but many devs are afraid of this tag here. Unfortunately if you don't put the tag here and players will find NTR elements, you will be eaten alive.
Very good renders and English, nice plot. Good luck.

99% of NTR toxic threads are started because of this very reason.

 

[Sucre Abernathy]

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[Look-see]

me: reads overview...."sounds like a good time"
Me after reading comments:..."Awww shit"

 

[apocalypsetoday]

Hi everyone. Thanks for the feedback!

The game is fully rendered in 4k for the highest possible quality. Il take a look at the compressed version somebody kindly uploaded today and get some ideas how I can keep the file size down. This is my first game so I am very open to ideas and feedback.

The condom is optional.

As for NTR I'd actually not heard of this before now. If I understand correctly, it means a lover cheating on you is that correct? If so, neither of the 2 characters mentioned are your lover yet. Your role is to woo them into becoming your lover? I may have misunderstood the issue here though so please correct me if so

 

[linkinn]

Hi everyone. Thanks for the feedback!

The game is fully rendered in 4k for the highest possible quality. Il take a look at the compressed version somebody kindly uploaded today and get some ideas how I can keep the file size down. This is my first game so I am very open to ideas and feedback.

The condom is optional.

As for NTR I'd actually not heard of this before now. If I understand correctly, it means a lover cheating on you is that correct? If so, neither of the 2 characters mentioned are your lover yet. Your role is to woo them into becoming your lover? I may have misunderstood the issue here though so please correct me if so

It isn't NTR, it's a overly used tag nowadays, but it does makes it feel like NTR even if it isn't (it invokes the same feeling because you know it's a possible LI), destroying any chance of redemption for the character with alot of people. Most people won't even try anything if a character is a prostitute, why would you, it's disgusting even in a story.

Would you fuck or try to romance someone that fucked 10 dudes before you in the same day? you gotta be a hell of a cuck.

 

[Look-see]

Hi everyone. Thanks for the feedback!

The game is fully rendered in 4k for the highest possible quality. Il take a look at the compressed version somebody kindly uploaded today and get some ideas how I can keep the file size down. This is my first game so I am very open to ideas and feedback.

The condom is optional.

As for NTR I'd actually not heard of this before now. If I understand correctly, it means a lover cheating on you is that correct? If so, neither of the 2 characters mentioned are your lover yet. Your role is to woo them into becoming your lover? I may have misunderstood the issue here though so please correct me if so

another thing thats sort of NTR-ish is seeing a potential Love interest have sex with others even if she's no with the MC yet. so be careful with voyeurism if you intend to add that because most ppl who arent onto NTR wont care for watching other ppl having sex.

also for some lesbian sex can be NTR if one girl sleep with another LI without MC knowing about. so again be careful with that if you intend to add it.

Also forced fetish/sex scenes where we have no choice to do it or not can be a problem. some dont like femdom for example.

 

[Joey the mangaka]

So it's likely the tag sharing. the girls are we mc and others guys in the same time?

 

[YaYa_UnTIN2]

Look, coming up with a story in your own head reading the tags instead of playing the game is just pure ignorance. That being said I have yet to see a game where prostitution doesn't just mean that your love interest fucks around.

I have a pretty lax stance to multiple partners, and I don't scream NTR at every occasion I get. My stance is simple: I don't care to hear about a partner's former sex life (I don't care how many they've had, couldn't care less if they aren't virgins, I just don't want to hear about their past sexual experience), I don't care about fly on the wall scenes where my character isn't present and NPCs are fucking, and I don't care to play a guy who knowingly accepts the role of just +1 dick among several other dicks a person of interest happens to be riding concurrently... prostitution ALWAYS is one of these 3.

So while being presumptuous is bad, it's quite obvious what certain tags can and can not stand for.

EDIT:
So I've started playing the game, and shocker, I wasn't wrong, but I only called quits a bit later, when the second woman (out of 3 who are added to character profiles so I assume are potential love interests) came around who fucks other guys. No, just no. People with a cuckold fetish will have a blast with this game, I'm not one of them.

Hi doe50818,

I should have seen your post, before downloading the game for it's nice renders.

I agree with what you have said in your "stance" statement, and what you have said in your "edit", I felt the same way after playing. Too bad, the renders were nice, but I'm not into Captain Save-A-Hoe (whores) or cucked MC games (red haired friend failed potential LI), so this is a pass on any future play for me as well.

Good luck anyway to the game dev, you'll have a fan base for your content.

 

[chicken head]

It isn't NTR, it's a overly used tag nowadays, but it does makes it feel like NTR even if it isn't (it invokes the same feeling because you know it's a possible LI), destroying any chance of redemption for the character with alot of people. Most people won't even try anything if a character is a prostitute, why would you, it's disgusting even in a story.

Would you fuck or try to romance someone that fucked 10 dudes before you in the same day? you gotta be a hell of a cuck.

 

[apocalypsetoday]

Thanks guys. The game is based on the same styling as Phillygames (depraved awakenings and city of broken dreamers).
The intention is have story driven narrative with sexual elements be based upon as close to real life scenarios as possible (a long time crush that never seemed to materialise). The voyeurism tag was more meant towards peeping on Annie getting changed rather than the Chelsea getting nailed by another guy images. They were just there as a glimpse at Chelsea's baked body though I now see how that might put some people off.
The game is definitely not going to be NFT driven and any NFT elements (if you can call them that) are minimal.

I have learned a lot here so please keep the comments and feedback coming. The good the bad and the ugly

 

[Look-see]

so after checking the scenes/issues in question yeah it's a bit weird. Chelsea calling you right before she gets plowed even if by accident was off putting once you find out she wasnt hurt she was just getting laid. honestly would've preffered her getting hurt. that would've at least made me care enough to read the rest of her dialogue instead of skipping it. but as others have stated. if i can ignore her in the future i will. Dont care to hear about her sex life.

As for the prostitute hmmm a part of me would be OK with it if MC was her first client since she's doing it out of desperation. but i had more of an issue with the whole femdom crap than anything else. having multiple options how the whole sex scene goes down would be better. Maledom/femdom/or just basic sex. to be fair i dont know the whole detail since as soon as femdom was confirmed again i skipped dialogue.

gotta ask will the MC ever do random shenanigans that someone with a timestop watch would do? or is he too much of a good guy for that?

also what are the future tags? Harem? sleep sex? dating sim? blackmail? Vanilla? romance? to name a few.

 

[apocalypsetoday]

so after checking the scenes/issues in question yeah it's a bit weird. Chelsea calling you right before she gets plowed even if by accident was off putting once you find out she wasnt hurt she was just getting laid. honestly would've preffered her getting hurt. that would've at least made me care enough to read the rest of her dialogue instead of skipping it. but as others have stated. if i can ignore her in the future i will. Dont care to hear about her sex life.

As for the prostitute hmmm a part of me would be OK with it if MC was her first client since she's doing it out of desperation. but i had more of an issue with the whole femdom crap than anything else. having multiple options how the whole sex scene goes down would be better. Maledom/femdom/or just basic sex. to be fair i dont know the whole detail since as soon as femdom was confirmed again i skipped dialogue.

gotta ask will the MC ever do random shenanigans that someone with a timestop watch would do? or is he too much of a good guy for that?

also what are the future tags? Harem? sleep sex? dating sim? blackmail? Vanilla? romance? to name a few.

Thanks for the feedback.
The intention is definitely to get up to shenanigans with the stopwatch. It was difficult to try and balance the story driven nature of the game with the romance scenes with this being the first chapter. I thought it was also a good opportunity to get some feedback and perspective on what people would want to see happen with the stopwatch before committing to anything.

Do you have any ideas in mind?

Some that were going through my mind (If I had the stopwatch) would probably be spying in changing rooms and sleep sex.

 

[Look-see]

Thanks for the feedback.
The intention is definitely to get up to shenanigans with the stopwatch. It was difficult to try and balance the story driven nature of the game with the romance scenes with this being the first chapter. I thought it was also a good opportunity to get some feedback and perspective on what people would want to see happen with the stopwatch before committing to anything.

Do you have any ideas in mind?

Some that were going through my mind (If I had the stopwatch) would probably be spying in changing rooms and sleep sex.

in all honesty it depends how far you're willing to push it.

i feel like changing rooms, visiting someone in their own house while they're alone (for controlled atmostphere reasons) or even something along those lines where there arent many ppl is something basic.

something more hardcore would be. going to someone's house with the family fully present, riding a bus, place of business.

and if you really want to go beyond, school zones are really up there.

the problem with stop watches is the possiblities are basically limitless that i'd doubt you can fit it all in a game and have a decent story to tell as well. ontop of that it also depends how the MC struggles with the morallity of it all. basically will he eventually get the "who's gonna stop me?" mind set at some point.

 

[chicken head]

Love redhead girls, sad to see Chelsea have sex with others is a bit of disappointment, Most people won't even try anything if a character is a prostitute, why would you, it's disgusting to even in a story. like Chelsea model better than Annie model just my opinion(no offense) different people have different taste, anyway good luck with the game dev

 

[Look-see]

Love redhead girls, sad to see Chelsea is one doing prostitution is a bit of disappointment, Most people won't even try anything if a character is a prostitute, why would you, it's disgusting to even in a story. like Chelsea model better than Annie model just my opinion(no offense) different people have different taste, anyway good luck with the game dev

isnt Annie the prostitute?