VN Ren'Py Abandoned Threads of Fate [Ch. 3] [Manifest Visuals]

[Raziel_8]

How old is Kaina(?) if she is young why did you use a milf model?

She looks older than both milfs (Rose/mother)...

IMPO that choice seems like a dick move to me, on the one hand rejecting and closing the path of the redhead by rejecting her "while drunk" and where she takes all her courage to propose to the mc or on the other hand rejecting Kiana with whom the mc has been flirting all day (edit: by the way the player has no control over that and the flirting is forced)and the finishing touch Julie kisses him in front of her...also a mother kidnapped by orcs who are clearly known for being kind to prisoners, especially women ...I better wait for some clarification from the dev regarding the tags.

I really wanted a choice for not flirt with Kiana in the first place, sorry i find her completely unattractive.
The mother yeah...i really want heads up for future tags. I don't see how the MC could rescue her in time, for her not becoming a orc cum dump...

 

[Chimba]

I really wanted a choice for not flirt with Kiana in the first place, sorry i find her completely unattractive.

That's the biggest problem I see with that choice, that is, the mc flirts with her all day, the player has no say in that, but then we have to be a dick with one of the girls without wanting to, if that scene had been a consequence because the player decided to flirt with both girls I wouldn't have a problem with that, after all it would be the player's fault.

The mother yeah...i really want heads up for future tags. I don't see how the MC could rescue her in time, for her not becoming a orc cum dump...

Yes, that's why I'd better wait for what the dev says, maybe she's not even going to be a LI and that scene is only for the player to have some hatred against the orcs. (because if she is actually a LI this reminds me of "My ordinary extraordinary life" and the kidnapping of the mother by a futa demon that made her a cumslut...I certainly have no interest in that haha)

 

[Beast161616]

Medieval games are always welcome

 

[holaje12]

Yes, that's why I'd better wait for what the dev says, maybe she's not even going to be a LI and that scene is only for the player to have some hatred against the orcs. (because if she is actually a LI this reminds me of "My ordinary extraordinary life" and the kidnapping of the mother by a futa demon that made her a cumslut...I certainly have no interest in that haha)

Even if she isnt a LI just showing her getting raped/gangbanged by orcs would be distasteful and unnecessary, if he wanted mc to hate the orcs then have them murder the mom right then and there. No need to get sexual with it.
Not very high expectations with this one anyway, with this kind of ntrish cliffhangers it can only get worst.

 

[Vasy]

Not a big fan of unavoidable sex scenes/encounters. Game has promise, but that's an instant turnoff for me personally.

 

[YaYa_UnTIN2]

Dev. good luck with your game.

 

[Tuperr0]

Niceeee

 

[Peter Grit]

That scene with Rose is hot

 

[maxbishup]

Hopefully with no dancing around it or constantly evading it.

I agree, sent the dev a massage about it. I like the game so far, but I cannot support it without knowing. There's a lot of need to know information left out here.

 

[MrBenny]

That's the biggest problem I see with that choice, that is, the mc flirts with her all day, the player has no say in that, but then we have to be a dick with one of the girls without wanting to, if that scene had been a consequence because the player decided to flirt with both girls I wouldn't have a problem with that, after all it would be the player's fault.

Yes, that's why I'd better wait for what the dev says, maybe she's not even going to be a LI and that scene is only for the player to have some hatred against the orcs. (because if she is actually a LI this reminds me of "My ordinary extraordinary life" and the kidnapping of the mother by a futa demon that made her a cumslut...I certainly have no interest in that haha)

Well I was hoping MC would have some kind of hidden power like magic or a superpower of sorts...instead he's just a young meditating buff guy. And your right, MC wont be able to save his Mom in time, before she becomes their community sex slave. But judging by the actions of the other orcs during the attack, they were going to kill the other woman they found...instead of taking them. So maybe Mom was eventually raped and killed, which would generates the hate needed for the story to progress?

 

[Raziel_8]

Well I was hoping MC would have some kind of hidden power like magic or a superpower of sorts...instead he's just a young meditating buff guy. And your right, MC wont be able to save his Mom in time, before she becomes their community sex slave. But judging by the actions of the other orcs during the attack, they were going to kill the other woman they found...instead of taking them. So maybe Mom was eventually raped and killed, which would generates the hate needed for the story to progress?

The orcs attacking and burning the village down, as well as killing the father, should be plenty enough to generate hate from the MC (was a good dad apparently). If the the mother dies, well so be it, thought i don't see why they would catch her if they plan to kill her, but not a fan of rape.

 

[Simulacrum29]

orks kidnapping Mom?

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[Sossse]

this game has a very interesting premise and the models are beautiful. the story realy makes you invested.. overall it has almost everyting that makes me an instand supporter.... But the fact that it has such a nice setup just to degrade one of the main girls (especial with the I-Patch) as some orc cumdumb is so.. disgusting. i really hope this is just a plot hook else i rly have no idea who this game is supposed to be fore. still a thumbs up from me in hope im wrong couse the potential is hudge

 

[LadySpider]

Really enjoyed the release, has a lot of potential and excited to see what you have planned moving forward. the renders are nice and all the potential love interest are very attractive, the mc being just a regular hero is a plus for me personally. As for constructive criticism, if your going to make players choose between two people (even if consequences may be minor) at least give some content with each girl, the player gets bonded with K so she would be the more obvious choose over a random girl who crushes on you. This bit may be just a me thing but still, as someone who loves Medieval themes, I know writing dialogue from that era can be hard, but it is a bit out of place to see modern terminology and slang like "coming in hot" for something set in that time period, but again, that's just me.

Overall a very solid first chapter in my opinion, and will be watching this for sure, best of luck dev

 

[jdw6]

Where is 'Anal' tag?

And 'Gay' tag, since that's what that scene certainly looks like.

I'm not a fan of 'games' that take several months between releases.

Especially since those seem to invariably turn into "must restart, saves won't work" eventually.

 

[DeUglyOne]

Runway with destiny or"Runaway" with destiny? First is an airport or designer clothes show! Just a thought, not a criticism!

My first thought when I saw it was that it's a mistranslation of "Run-in with Destiny".
After reading the (basically nonexistent) overview I decided to let someone else be the guinea pig and check back in later.
Reading the thread tonight, it sounds like a big nope from me.

Sorry, dev.

 

[GlennQuagmire69]

I hope we can save the mom

 

[Simulacrum29]

I hope we can save the mom

you mean the pieces of her that are leftover?

 

[Tomy75]

Games with virgin LI's are like oasis now.
Is there a requirement in games that every LI must have professional pornstar talent?

How old is Kaina(?) if she is young why did you use a milf model?

I agree on both points. Julie acts like a virgin for a moment (she even says she never brought a man in her room before) then acts like a pornstar right after (deepthroat included). As for Kiana, she looks very mature to me too, and her boobs say the same. But she can't be as she's looking for her father who went on a trip to the city.

Anyway, could be the start of a great game but it needs some adjustments on both points. The scene with Rose-THE-MILF is awesome though.

 

[Manifest Visuals]

I see some people commenting on the title of the game. The runway part is meant more as a metaphor, as in a line or a path, if you will, the mc has to travel to the end destination (which is saving the people closest to him; or those that are left at least), with elements of destiny intertwined along the way. That was my thought process at least. In hindsight, I guess I could have picked a better title. It's still in the early stages, so I can run a poll in the near future about the possible title change if there is enough response to it.

As for the inconsistencies in the game, some are valid and I do appreciate the input. I will try to correct the future ones, that come my way if I see them. I'm still pretty new at this and I'm trying my best to deliever a good experience for the player.

I will add future tags, but just know that they may be subject to change along the way.

All the best,
MV