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Jdmricky21

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Is the brunette wearing green in the title pic supposed to be the MC's "Landlady"? If so, then it looks like I've stumbled across a rare treasure, and this game is gonna be a banger!
 

xXwankerXx

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I don't see how the MC could rescue her in time, for her not becoming a orc cum dump...
Yeah, that was really unnecessary, especially since the orcs hate the MC and his dad, and after killing him, I'm also convinced they'll treat his mom veeeryy good. The dad's death (another one bites the dust:ROFLMAO:) was shocking enough for the MC, he don't need to find his mom's dead body after she was raped by those green fuckers for the 'plot' coz it wouldn't make sense. The player should prevent that or get a bad ending if he can't. Shit like this shouldn't be forced on us.

maybe she's not even going to be a LI and that scene is only for the player to have some hatred against the orcs
The dev screws up big time if he does that. The fuckers killed his dad in front of him and torched his village. The MC has more than enough reasons to wanna kill them all, so if he suddenly has the 'brilliant' idea to show us the mom get raped and killed, I'll drop this game, and other players will do the same. That's why he needs to be honest about the shit that's gonna happen here coz no non NTR fan likes surprises like that.

Even if she isnt a LI just showing her getting raped/gangbanged by orcs would be distasteful and unnecessary, if he wanted mc to hate the orcs then have them murder the mom right then and there. No need to get sexual with it.
So maybe Mom was eventually raped and killed, which would generates the hate needed for the story to progress?
That's exactly the problem here. Killing her or showing us the orcs raping her, even implying that is completely pointless coz they already killed his dad and ppl from his village, and that should be enough motivation to make him want payback. I sincerely hope the dev reconsiders killing the mom or showing her get fucked by those disgusting pieces of shit, but that cliffhanger is pretty concerning. He needs to come clean about every kink he wants in his game now to avoid a big headache later and reassure us about his intentions.
 

xXwankerXx

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I will add future tags, but just know that they may be subject to change along the way.
Bro', we just want you to be completely honest about the kinks we'll see in the story as it unfolds. That's all. NTR or not, it's your story to tell how you think it's best, BUT most of us here want a few honest answers regarding this and no "it's technically not NTR coz of reasons". Don't change anything you consider important, but let ppl know, especially potential new supporters, what they should expect to see in the next updates.

Julie acts like a virgin for a moment (she even says she never brought a man in her room before) then acts like a pornstar right after (deepthroat included).
Btw, how is he doing that?
Porn logic, or the dev's logic, I guess. The hot MILF Rose also goes from caring mother and seemingly decent woman to horny pornstar that lets the MC fuck her mouth and treat her like a cheap slut for the 'plot'. I usually love scenes like that, but her sex scene was just an asspull coz she didn't even know who the MC was and there was no build up involved, or we'll find out in the next updates that she's a prostitute used to sell her ass for money, which wouldn't be shocking.:cautious:

Is the brunette wearing green in the title pic supposed to be the MC's "Landlady"?
No, MC's mom is the blonde captured by the orcs at the end of this release.
 

BarbarrossaNA

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In the glorious words of Monty Python

Brave Sir Robin ran away.
("No!")
Bravely ran away away.
("I didn't!")
When danger reared it's ugly head,
He bravely turned his tail and fled.
("I never!")
Yes, brave Sir Robin turned about
And gallantly he chickened out.
("You're lying!")
Swiftly taking to his feet,
He beat a very brave retreat.
Bravest of the braaaave, Sir Robin

:ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
 

Crosaith.

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Great start! Hope we'll continue to have meaningful choices in future chapters. I'll deff be keeping an eye on this and will prob join your Patreon in a couple of updates if you're able to maintain this quality.
 

holaje12

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I will add future tags, but just know that they may be subject to change along the way.

All the best,
MV
Bruh. Most people ask about fututre tags because they want to know about the controversial tags, like Ntr/sharing . You got the orcs taking the mother and she will get raped by them right?. Is it going to be shown? Is shit like that going to happen a lot? Is mc going to be sharing his girls with other male npcs? Or are the LI going to fuck other male npcs depending on choices?
Remember that patreon doesnt really allow rape, you might get away with it like some, or you could get fucked by them like some others.
 

Manifest Visuals

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Bruh. Most people ask about fututre tags because they want to know about the controversial tags, like Ntr/sharing . You got the orcs taking the mother and she will get raped by them right?. Is it going to be shown? Is shit like that going to happen a lot? Is mc going to be sharing his girls with other male npcs? Or are the LI going to fuck other male npcs depending on choices?
Remember that patreon doesnt really allow rape, you might get away with it like some, or you could get fucked by them like some others.
That is why I didn't include the rape tag. I have no intention of incorporating it in the game. There will be scenes with Annabelle and the orcs, but they will not be of a sexual nature. Sex scenes will be focused around mc and his LI's.
 

Professor Black

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Orc and the mom controversy aside, I see harem in the planned tags. How is that going to be implemented? full harem or only a certain amount like 2-3?. From what I read on this thread, you loose points if you flirt with other characters and such.
 

Manifest Visuals

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Orc and the mom controversy aside, I see harem in the planned tags. How is that going to be implemented? full harem or only a certain amount like 2-3?. From what I read on this thread, you loose points if you flirt with other characters and such.
How it will be implemented is still an open question as of now. There are many more characters that will come into play in the future chapters, some of whom may become mc's LI's.

Liked the first release
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was wondering will there be fantasy woman or monster girls for your harem?
There will be interactions with elven women in the future releases, that's all I'm gonna say for now
 
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Sleeping In Pieces

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She looks older than both milfs (Rose/mother)...

I really wanted a choice for not flirt with Kiana in the first place, sorry i find her completely unattractive.
The mother yeah...i really want heads up for future tags. I don't see how the MC could rescue her in time, for her not becoming a orc cum dump...
Yeah... Kiana doesn't do it for me. I picked Julie in my playthrough. Would have even gone for Lucy if I had the option. LOL.
 

korochan48

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I dont know why, but Kiana looks like a an evil witch for me.. no offence to the dev tho.. just my opinion..
It could be Kiana truly is an evil witch masquerading to corrupt the mc. Joking aside Kiana is really ugly and too old looking for her age. She is only passable if she's a milf and acts like a milf.
You can swap Neville's mom with Kiana it is much better.
 
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YaYa_UnTIN2

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I see some people commenting on the title of the game. The runway part is meant more as a metaphor, as in a line or a path, if you will, the mc has to travel to the end destination (which is saving the people closest to him; or those that are left at least), with elements of destiny intertwined along the way. That was my thought process at least. In hindsight, I guess I could have picked a better title. It's still in the early stages, so I can run a poll in the near future about the possible title change if there is enough response to it.

As for the inconsistencies in the game, some are valid and I do appreciate the input. I will try to correct the future ones, that come my way if I see them. I'm still pretty new at this and I'm trying my best to deliever a good experience for the player.

I will add future tags, but just know that they may be subject to change along the way.

All the best,
MV
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Good luck with your game.
 
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Good luck with your game.
Hey, no worries. :)

I took all the comments and meme posts in good spirit, and yours did make me chuckle. :D I will continue to focus on the story for now and making content for Chapter 2 and then, with its release, update the title of the game. Might do it before then, but we'll see. Thanks for the suggestions, they are appreciated. I did have other titles to choose from, but they were either already taken, similar to the ones that were already released, or titles of existing movies and books. So I decided to opt for a different one.

Have a good one!
 
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